Preview of my first original story.

I've only been able to think of ideas for fan fictions until now. I tried to think of ideas for an original story, but never really liked the ones that came to mind.

One night, I was feeling really upset and listening to music, and for some reason an idea came to me. So while I was still upset, I started writing it, and came up with chapter one.

I would really appreciate any readers to let me know what they think of the first chapter so far.

So if you want to preview it I posted it on my Live Journal.

http://axhealingxheart.livejournal.com/

Let me know what you think, thanks :).