This is my favourite from Crossed the Line. More of a little paragraph than a line, but I love it so, job well done to me.
"“Shit,” he whispered and eyes darted around the room nervously. When they stopped at something on the floor he stared back at me in a panic. “Shit,” he said again more loudly, and at my questioning gaze he pointed at it. My eyes followed his arm and I gulped as I saw something that looked suspiciously like an empty condom wrapper poking out from under my discarded underwear."
"“Shit,” he whispered and eyes darted around the room nervously. When they stopped at something on the floor he stared back at me in a panic. “Shit,” he said again more loudly, and at my questioning gaze he pointed at it. My eyes followed his arm and I gulped as I saw something that looked suspiciously like an empty condom wrapper poking out from under my discarded underwear."
June 17th, 2014 at 11:07am