Favorite Line You've Ever Written

  • kinnymccarthy

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    And, it too- like it’s surroundings- comes crashing down; Bringing with it everything and anything; in one final, sheeny smash.

    It wasn’t something you could look up on Google, or find out by getting yourself onto one of those Family Heritage programs. It wasn’t something you’d find with any amount of necessary paraphernalia, experience or guidance to aid you. There wasn’t a task that could lead you here. It was just somewhere you found yourself to be.

    << Both of the above, Before The Nights Out (Novel in progress, the above quotes are up on mibba though, supposedly from the prologue XD)

    As he continued fingering away at his laces, with immense style- I wondered who he was trying to impress with such a simple task. Still watching him, I got the impression this was also an unnecessary task. First off, we were in America, and secondly- Dev and the other guy seemed perfectly comfortable standing there; in their shoes.
    (Standing On Edge, Ok the above was from a dream I had... ^///^ Still, I wrote the writing XD)

    Haha kinda lame, I guess- but I likes them =D
    October 22nd, 2009 at 11:57am
  • Max.

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    "...everything was blurred, like watercolours spilt carelessly around a blank canvas."
    Chapter one of Forget Me Not
    October 22nd, 2009 at 04:44pm
  • Tilly.

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    A mop of messy circles and a pool of golden irises, he stares at me from his lashes, I can see him, and he knows I can. Theirs a slight shift in his movements, like a scared mouse, like a hungry cat, and he smiles, realizing how intoxicated I am by his presents; how overwhelmed I feel.
    October 29th, 2009 at 12:24am
  • Blackpearl

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    "Great. More panic. Anything more about this idiot in cabinet?" Lucas said.

    "He's not dead yet," Malcolm replied, his face deadpan.

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    "Ladies first."

    "And I thought chivalry was dead!"

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    “Well you all know what has happened,” Harry said quietly when everyone was seated. “The question is: what are we going to do about it?”

    "Kill him?" Ros suggested mildly.

    Okay...I have too many, I know.
    October 29th, 2009 at 09:07pm
  • chum

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    I hate thinking about the numbers because they’ll never mean anything more than how long I’ve been able to go without you; how long I’ve been able to go without completely breaking down.
    October 30th, 2009 at 12:27am
  • The Dodger

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    "Love is like lightning. It's unpredictable, it's unexpected, and you never know where it'll strike next."

    Soon to be part of a new story.
    October 30th, 2009 at 03:52am
  • Venomous.

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    Katelyn.:
    "Love is like lightning. It's unpredictable, it's unexpected, and you never know where it'll strike next."

    Soon to be part of a new story.
    That's amazing. In Love
    October 30th, 2009 at 05:26am
  • The Dodger

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    Venomous.:
    That's amazing. In Love
    Aw, thank you! Arms
    October 31st, 2009 at 10:36pm
  • purple haze.

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    Without a second thought, he tossed the image aside. Photographs may hold memories, but they can’t bring back the moment.

    Lonely Ferris Wheel.
    October 31st, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • jane elliot .

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    "Seconds dragged themselves into the corners of the room, waiting impatiently for time to start again. When it did, Toby was forced to sit down."

    From a story I've been playing around with for a while. <3
    Maybe not my favorite, but I do like it.
    November 1st, 2009 at 12:04am
  • Tyson Ritter

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    I wanted to just lay in a mess of sheets and staled air, wallowing in self-pity and tears that would not stop running down my face.

    --

    “I prefer to think it’s a shooting star Adam. That way I can make a wish.”

    --

    She tasted like sugar and smoke, her skin so delicate rubbing against mine, her moans and the way she bit her lip and the way she was holding onto the bed sheets. I remembered everything about her.
    November 1st, 2009 at 12:35am
  • sightless.

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    "My mom and dad used to tell me that the stars were the spirits of those who passed, watching over the ones they left behind," he closed his eyes, swallowing thickly, "can you imagine how many people must've died to fill these skies?"

    I dunno why, but I just love this one from my story Daydream on a Hill. In Love I'm proud of that line.
    November 2nd, 2009 at 03:40am
  • Two For My Seconds

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    "She met him at The Arts Factory.
    He was a blue eyed, curly haired free spirit looking for a melody and a pair of shoes."

    A line I came up with that has inspired me to start writing a new story. I don't know if I will ever publish it, but it makes me feel kind of nostalgic to write it.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 07:25am
  • Beautiful -Disaster-

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    i have tons =] lol, one of them is probably from my first book : One Black WIsh.

    " I swear Calayah, if you don't calm down , I will tie you to the chair."
    November 4th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • Gibbers

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    "As the world grew sicker, the walls grew stronger."

    From The Fantasy, one of my many post apocolypse stories.
    November 4th, 2009 at 04:43pm
  • Sensationalist.

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    “Ryan ragamuffin, I’ve come to collect you! School lies on the horizon.”

    ... I have no idea how I came up with that.

    It's from my story Snickerdoodle.
    November 4th, 2009 at 09:11pm
  • Tyson Ritter

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    Another sleepless night; another smoked pack, crumpled next to my feet; piles of clothes everywhere in the room; piles of music sheets all over. Infinity of mess and unfinished thoughts.
    November 4th, 2009 at 11:13pm
  • chum

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    Our attempt at summer lovin' had ended like Sandy and Danny's, only there wasn't a Frenchy or Rizzo to make it all better. Without you, I was just me.
    November 9th, 2009 at 11:54pm
  • KatGirl

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    This was off a story I wrote a long time ago and was never posted because my computer crashed in what I playfully call "the crash of '07". It was called The War Over My Soul.

    "He wriggled and twisted, his every movement sending an impulse right down to my large intestine making me want to vomit. It was everything I could do not to fall to my knees and heave. Oh yes, the Devil was in the house."

    ~Jacki Conner


    It may not be my best but it is my favorite.
    November 10th, 2009 at 11:50pm
  • pierrot the clown.

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    Close your eyes and repeat three times: There's no place else like home.

    But where is home?


    - un-everything.
    November 11th, 2009 at 03:32am