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  • folie a dru.

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    Wednesday Way!:
    It's so much more body to write in. I feel like things are going to get lost.
    Yeah. I have no idea how people write Ryan/Brendon/Jon/Spencer and have it work and make sense and flow properly.
    March 27th, 2011 at 06:13am
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    No idea if I'll finish this, but I'm starting a fic that's not ... exactly a gangbang. There's a lot of people watching, but only a few touching. Ryan's drunk and being a whore and claiming he can take anything, so somehow a beer bottle ends up . . . well, you know where. Shifty
    March 27th, 2011 at 09:18pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    I'm attempting a scene involving 4 people, has anyone got any tips for writing it?
    March 28th, 2011 at 09:31pm
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    Falling Angel.:
    I'm attempting a scene involving 4 people, has anyone got any tips for writing it?
    Is it a foursome or two couples having sex at the same time?
    March 28th, 2011 at 10:21pm
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    druscilla is dancing:
    Is it a foursome or two couples having sex at the same time?
    It is probably a slash foursome, but there is some freedom.
    March 28th, 2011 at 11:06pm
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    Falling Angel.:
    It is probably a slash foursome, but there is some freedom.
    Well, if everyone is performing on one character, I might focus more on that character and what they're doing because it'll tie in the other characters.

    Or else I'd maybe pick two characters to focus on more, which would still bring in the other characters.

    Trying to focus on all four characters equally in equal ways could get confusing and overly complicated.
    March 28th, 2011 at 11:23pm
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    druscilla is dancing:
    Well, if everyone is performing on one character, I might focus more on that character and what they're doing because it'll tie in the other characters.

    Or else I'd maybe pick two characters to focus on more, which would still bring in the other characters.

    Trying to focus on all four characters equally in equal ways could get confusing and overly complicated.
    Thank you for all your help, it'll probably be a mixture of the first two suggestions.
    March 28th, 2011 at 11:41pm
  • folie a dru.

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    In My Mouth is a new kink fic of mine.
    Contains: Name-calling, ass-to-mouth, humiliation, toys, mentions of fisting, and other BDSM themes.
    March 31st, 2011 at 03:21am
  • folie a dru.

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    I just wrote what (I think) is my first angry sex story.
    Brendon, You Asshole.
    It was fun. tehe
    April 3rd, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • Wednesday Way!

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    I really want to do a scene where it's Ryden & their covered in Nutella. Lick
    April 4th, 2011 at 03:00am
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    Wednesday Way!:
    I really want to do a scene where it's Ryden & their covered in Nutella. Lick
    Food is one thing I never really wanted to tackle, but more power to you. Write it!

    ... actually, I take back the food thing. I really want to write someone getting fucked with vegetables.
    April 4th, 2011 at 03:06am
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    I am still learning to write these. The only one that I really have is found in chapter two of Call It Princely. That was the first attempt I wrote on my own and it's only a brief mention and it's fairly vague. The only other one I did was as part of a co-write with a friend for our story Forbidden Sins and I had to force it because I was still ridiculously uncomfortable with writing sex scenes and now it's more the lack of knowledge
    April 4th, 2011 at 03:13am
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    hourglass:
    I am still learning to write these. The only one that I really have is found in chapter two of Call It Princely. That was the first attempt I wrote on my own and it's only a brief mention and it's fairly vague. The only other one I did was as part of a co-write with a friend for our story Forbidden Sins and I had to force it because I was still ridiculously uncomfortable with writing sex scenes and now it's more the lack of knowledge
    That's mostly my probably I'm trying to read up on it, but I don't have the exprience.
    April 4th, 2011 at 09:35pm
  • folie a dru.

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    Experience was never an issue for me. (I've been writing sex scenes since I was twelve, writing sex scenes well since I was a junior, and I didn't lose my virginity until I was twenty.) Reading always did the trick. Granted, I rarely [like once or twice a year] write a heterosexual sex scene, so how could I have the experience of a man having sex with a man? Experience has helped, but it's also not a prerequisite for me. I just need to do my studying and that pretty much works for me.
    April 5th, 2011 at 12:05am
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    On Display is Ryan getting fisted at a party in front of a group of people by Brendon.
    April 8th, 2011 at 10:54pm
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    I'm working on my very first explicit sex scene. It's het BDSM. I'm really iffy with it, because I know how sex scenes sound like when they're not written correctly. What really has my head aching is whenever I refer to his dick. I'm constantly wondering what sounds less silly.
    Twitch
    April 18th, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • sibyl vane.

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    I feel really silly asking, but, uh, what does it actually feel like to give a blowjob? Like, temperature, texture, taste, if there's any pleasure in doing it, stuff like that.
    August 11th, 2011 at 10:54pm
  • the god of thunder.

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    I use my thesaurus like Hell when I write sex.
    Sex is sex, but I want my sex scenes to be subjective and meaningful. I don't want it to mimic an archetypal "smut" story- I want it to be more than something easily mass-produced.
    But I also don't want to write something vague/outlandish/not sexy.
    XD It's a hard balance.
    February 11th, 2013 at 11:01pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    Can anyone review a sex scene for me?

    Here.
    February 12th, 2013 at 12:49am
  • Katie Mosing

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    I just recently started trying to write sex scenes, and I've found that it's difficult but also extremely fun at the same time. I think it's important to find a good balance between describing body parts and what they feel. Oh, and staying classy.
    February 16th, 2014 at 03:44pm