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  • occulta.

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    Alright, so, I won't lie... tehe I saw a thread and got a splendid idea. Weird I searched and came out empty handed. XD Feel free to lock, if it already exists or is in the wrong place.

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    Liar
    March 2nd, 2010 at 11:58pm
  • Blackjack.

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    I think it's an awesome layout Mr. Green
    It's simple, but effective, and makes me want to read the story (and keeps on drawing me back!)

    Snake Devil
    March 3rd, 2010 at 12:10am
  • Cherry Hearts

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    I like it :D it's simple and the banner is pretty provacative ;]

    http://stories.mibba.com/read/211319/The-Elementum/
    March 3rd, 2010 at 12:13am
  • rosewater tide.

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    I actually really like the layout.
    You have a nice banner, and I like the background as well.
    The only thing I don't like is the size of the text.

    Pathetic, Ordinary
    March 3rd, 2010 at 12:15am
  • waits.

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    I like how simple it is. I'm not sure if I like the red and purple together, but the rose is lovely. Cute

    Moon Over Bourbon Street
    March 3rd, 2010 at 12:18am
  • legacy .

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    The grey font on the black background is a little iffy to see but that could just be my eyes. I love the picture on the heading and how it seems to relate to the title.
    It's really nice.

    Because I Am A Girl
    March 3rd, 2010 at 12:21am
  • dean o'gorman

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    It's simple and the colours work. I like (:

    Hear the Operator
    March 3rd, 2010 at 12:24am
  • Cheye13

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    I'm not a big fan of the white background... I think it's a bit shocking. Other than that, I like it and its colors.

    Adrenaline
    March 3rd, 2010 at 02:06am
  • nebulas

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    I love the black and white, it makes it look so dramatic.

    Amaurotic.
    March 3rd, 2010 at 02:45am
  • folie a dru.

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    I really love the positioning of the picture and the use of the two main colors. I think it's great that the background is black but the story area is white. It's really nice to see the contrast.

    9 Months is a Long Time.
    March 3rd, 2010 at 02:49am
  • larsus

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    It's really pretty, but I don't really like how the picture at the top is wider than the body of it, even though I don't thing it would look right if the story area was any wider.

    Clubhouse
    March 3rd, 2010 at 03:47am
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    The banner is nice. I love the colors. I just don’t like the background. But its nice. Matches well.

    Hold on.


    Oh, wow. Its so pretty and the colors match really, REALLY well. I love the picture and the font. Great Job.

    Broken Spirit
    March 3rd, 2010 at 03:49am
  • folie a dru.

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    Okay, I'm not sure if there's actually an orange glow on the left hand side or if my computer is weird, but if there is I absolutely fucking love it and you have to show me how to do it.

    If not, I still really like the use of a solid color. It's a gorgeous banner and I like how simple and "clean" the layout is.

    This Has Your Name Written All Over It.
    March 3rd, 2010 at 05:07am
  • youngbae.

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    The layout for that story is beautiful. I love the banner; it's absolutely gorgeous.
    I love how the background matches up with the banner in a way.
    Very well though out layout.

    Down Memory Lane
    March 3rd, 2010 at 05:16am
  • asphyxiate

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    I really like the color you used for the background. It's kind of like a faded red, and it's real easy on the eyes. If there's anything I can't stand, it's bright colors. I also really like the banner. It's simplistic, but still elegant. And I like that you used Times for the font, and the white color matches well with the background. Not too bright, not too dark.

    Forgetting You, But Not the Time
    March 3rd, 2010 at 05:20am
  • TheAestheticOutline

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    Your layout is great and the color sets a dark mood to the story. :D

    Falling Into Shadows
    March 3rd, 2010 at 05:28am
  • rosewater tide.

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    I think it's lovely.
    I love the background, banner, and the colors.
    It's great.

    Pathetc, Ordinary
    March 3rd, 2010 at 05:41am
  • folie a dru.

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    The only thing I don't like is that the border around the banner doesn't go all the way around. I really like the use of the dark purple and red because they blend well but you can still tell them apart. I like the use of white for the story area.

    The Back of a Gillikin Farmer's Truck.
    March 3rd, 2010 at 05:56am
  • waits.

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    I'm not a big fan of repeated pictures in backgrounds in layouts, but this one works. Cute

    The banner is really, really pretty, and I like the way the colors all blend together. Very nice.

    Moon Over Bourbon Street
    March 3rd, 2010 at 06:46am
  • fen'harel

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    I love the simplicity of the layout; it looks clean and readable; the picture of choice works perfectly with the title for the piece and it sets the feeling for the story.

    The only thing I do not like is the font color for the content; it sort of hurts my eyes when it's contrasted with the black background color.

    Aside from that, it's a very nice layout.

    Trapped in Wonderland
    March 3rd, 2010 at 06:51am