Comment on the Story Layout

  • dr. faustus

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    The picture isn't very original, and I'm not a fan of the background color. But it's readable and simple.

    99 Ways To Save A Life
    March 3rd, 2010 at 10:26am
  • Cherry Hearts

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    I like the idea, but for some reason it just doesn't work for me :/

    The elementum
    March 3rd, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • waits.

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    The background is really nice. I like how it's almost "trippy". XD

    I like the banner too. The colors all match really well. Cute

    Moon Over Bourbon Street
    March 3rd, 2010 at 07:38pm
  • Artemis Love

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    You chose a very beautiful banner and it goes well with the title.
    I like how you used a black background and the white color for the font. I like it :)

    Story
    March 3rd, 2010 at 08:01pm
  • legacy .

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    Hmm, I'm not really a fan of patterned backgrounds, and I personally find the stars a little disctracting. The bright fonts are also a little hard on my eyes, especially on a dark, black background. Personally, I'm not really a fan of the layout Shifty

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    March 3rd, 2010 at 09:42pm
  • dr. faustus

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    I love the banner at the top, it's beautiful. I think the background color should be a little lighter though. But it still looks good.

    99 Ways To Save A Life
    March 4th, 2010 at 05:17pm
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    It looks well organized and beautiful. I just don't like the repeating that much but thats just me. But I love the picture and the font. Georgia is my favorite font and I use it in practacally EVERYTHING. Great Job.

    Broken Soul
    March 4th, 2010 at 06:57pm
  • Artemis Love

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    I like the pink and black combination, it has always been one of my favorites and the banner looks awesome.

    story
    March 6th, 2010 at 03:48am
  • Cherry Hearts

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    It's a little too plain for my taste.

    The elementum
    March 9th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • Tyson Ritter

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    I like the banner and the background picture just blends nicely with the rest of the layout.
    The font size is too big for my liking.

    Forget Superstition by Wearing It Backwards
    March 9th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • still a secret

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    ^ I waited for 10 seconds for the image to load 'cause all I saw was gray, then I saw I had to scroll down. Was that intentional? But other readers might not bother to scroll down, so the big margin/padding on top might be a bad idea. Other than that, I think it's alright. Nothing elaborate but at least it's readable which is the most important.

    Filling the Void

    Maybe we should comment on the story's comment page so that we won't have to check back all the time on this thread?
    March 10th, 2010 at 02:39pm
  • Artemis Love

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    I really like it. The color combination and the background is awesome, I always enjoy checkered backgrounds. It's not hard on the eyes and everything is easy to read. I also enjoy the banner on top.

    I've Never Wanted...
    March 10th, 2010 at 08:30pm
  • The Master

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    I love the pattern and the simplicity of colours. The banner at the font threw me off a little bit, admittedly.

    Hubriglorious Fantastique.
    March 10th, 2010 at 08:48pm
  • larsus

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    I like the picture, and I like how you aligned the summary.

    Unnatural
    March 11th, 2010 at 04:39am
  • folie a dru.

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    I really like the positioning of the story area with the banner. And I love the text color.

    At Night.
    March 11th, 2010 at 04:52am
  • stupify.

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    The picture and banner are both really pretty. Though it does both me that the story box and banner don't align. Think

    Kallos Graphẽ
    March 11th, 2010 at 04:58am
  • folie a dru.

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    I really like how the picture has a white background to compliment the story area. I also like how the story area is set off from the background. My favorite part is the chapter header, how it's a different color and it's own little box. Great.

    Realization Without Absolution.
    March 11th, 2010 at 05:00am
  • tabula rasa.

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    I really like the banner. I like how it's the same picture, just with different emotions. The background works really well-- it's simple and isn't distracting. The whole thing is wonderful. :]

    Rooftop
    March 11th, 2010 at 05:05am
  • stupify.

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    I love the banner. In Love It's so gorgeous.
    The dots bother me, but they look okay with the back ground. And it's simple, which I'm a fan of.

    Teacher
    March 11th, 2010 at 05:09am
  • folie a dru.

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    I love the one dot as the background with the words in it. I've never seen it done before and I think it's great. I also love how it overlaps, but you're still able to read the words because of the way you've done this.

    S/he.
    March 11th, 2010 at 05:18am