^ I waited for 10 seconds for the image to load 'cause all I saw was gray, then I saw I had to scroll down. Was that intentional? But other readers might not bother to scroll down, so the big margin/padding on top might be a bad idea. Other than that, I think it's alright. Nothing elaborate but at least it's readable which is the most important.
Filling the VoidMaybe we should comment on the story's comment page so that we won't have to check back all the time on this thread?