Comment on the Story Layout

  • tabula rasa.

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    I love the banner and the background. They go together really well. I wasn't really sure if they did at first, but the more I look at it, the more I like the two together. Anyways, I also like your color choices for the text and chapter title. Everything matches really well.

    Rooftop
    March 11th, 2010 at 05:36am
  • folie a dru.

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    I don't like how the dots go around the banner as well as the story area, though I do like the usage of them.

    I love the banner and the use of the "light" colors for the text and headers. It gives you the illusion of little lights on the dark backdrop, which matches the banner. (Btw, I fucking love that song.)

    A Closet Full of Dresses.
    March 11th, 2010 at 05:36am
  • Artemis Love

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    This layout is just completely brilliant.
    I love the background picture and the banner is awesome.
    I can't really say much, just that I find the layout perfect :)

    You Know You Love All The Lies
    March 12th, 2010 at 12:53am
  • midnight lover.

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    I like the simplicity. It's not overdone and distracting from the story itself.

    Read My Lips
    March 12th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • folie a dru.

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    The colors all work really well together. I like the centering and the use of grey font. I also like that you had a solid color for the story area and that your background worked well repeated.

    The White Lie.
    March 12th, 2010 at 01:44am
  • stupify.

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    The background and the banner are gorgeous. The fit pretty well together.
    I'm usually an "everything-needs-to-be-symmetrical" kind of person, so I'd like it a little better if the banner was centered, but it's still really pretty. Cute

    Wolfsbane
    March 12th, 2010 at 02:38am
  • folie a dru.

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    I love the hugeness of the story title. The title's short so that saves it from being obnoxious and over the top. The colors are great as well.

    Too Young Eyes.
    March 12th, 2010 at 03:10am
  • tabula rasa.

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    I love the simplicity of it. The picture at the top is perfect--I did read this one and I think the picture really fits. I also like the font you used for the title. It's wonderful.

    Could It Last?
    March 12th, 2010 at 04:45am
  • folie a dru.

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    Oh, I love how there's a frame around the picture (amazing fucking banner, btw) and then there's the "background color" of the banner. And what I love is that you choose the color inside the banner for the story layout color. That's wonderful. I wish the chapter font size were a teeny bit bigger, but other than that it's great.

    Breath-Taking Heart-Pounding.
    March 12th, 2010 at 04:49am
  • isangelical.

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    I like the simplicity of it. The coloration on the Durex packaging is lovely, but I think there's too high a contrast on the neon green glasses, at least with the neon green text over it. Makes it a tiny bit difficult to read. Overall, I like it.

    The Bitch and The Tease (or, what you will)
    March 12th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • tabula rasa.

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    I really like the banner. The different font for 'Bitch' and 'Tease' was a nice touch. The colors you chose for the text are really good and match the banner, which is something I like to do. I also like the border. The whole thing was put together well.

    Put Love On Hold
    March 12th, 2010 at 05:40am
  • folie a dru.

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    I like the prettiness of the background, but appreciate the simplicity. I like that in the banner you put the title over the pieces of paper. The border is great and I like that you went with black on white instead of the reverse.

    Pointy Fucking Shoes.
    March 12th, 2010 at 06:00am
  • still a secret

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    I like the background of the story area. It's my favorite thing about your layout. But I would probably like it better if it were the background of the page. I think the color of the title is a little too dark, but it's not a dealbreaker.

    Daddy's Girl
    March 12th, 2010 at 04:36pm
  • bellamy blake

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    I really like the background and the simplicity of the layout. I really love that it's easy on the eyes Cute The only thing I'm not a fan of is the dashed border aroun the title. It just seems out of place to me.

    Like A.M. Radio
    March 13th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • folie a dru.

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    I think the duplicated picture works especially well here because there's so much background to the picture so it's not jarring. I think you chose amazing colors with the banner as well. It keeps it interesting, but it's not hard on the eyes.

    Like An Angel.
    March 13th, 2010 at 02:26am
  • still a secret

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    Do you have a banner from TinyPic? Sorry, my internet connection blocks out pics from that site. :( The font color is a little too dark for me. It's still readable, but I would prefer that there was more contrast between the text and the background. I like the background except that I can see where the picture ends.

    Learning Italian
    March 15th, 2010 at 11:32am
  • bellamy blake

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    I'm not crazy about the background picture, but I like the curly font in the banner. It's very easy to read, which is always a plus. I like the yellow links, it really makes the chapter titles stand out.

    Like A.M. Radio
    March 15th, 2010 at 02:27pm
  • pyromaniac;

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    I'm not crazy about the tape repeating in the background. It looks kind of tacky because you can tell its repeating. I like the banner, and the colors match nicely. The font is legible, thank god. :]

    Playing Prisoner
    March 17th, 2010 at 12:34am
  • FICTION

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    Cheese It's beautiful. I love the colours, and I love how it goes with the picture. The picture's brilliant, too. The vintage feel is great, and the picture somehow just blends great with it.

    Looking Down
    March 17th, 2010 at 12:36am
  • midnight lover.

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    It's very simple and I love the colors. It all goes really well together.

    Running Blind
    March 17th, 2010 at 12:45am