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  • archivist

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    Wow! The banner's amazing, first off, but it's bigger than the container and that bugs a little. The colours are stellar (ha) and the fonts are A+. Nice!

    Kupfer Stieg
    July 14th, 2014 at 10:11am
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    It's so nice! I love the way the entire layout seems as if I turned the brightness of my screen down, it's gives a really soothing effect! I love doing layouts and I always like to believe that I rock at them but yours definitely made me feel uncertain, because you certainly rock at them!

    Forlorn Figures
    July 14th, 2014 at 06:10pm
  • n. josten

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    I love how simple it is! And the banner is so nice as is the font used for the story title. I'm not a big fan of Trebuchet, but other than that, I love the darkness and the simplicity of the color scheme!

    Saudade
    July 21st, 2014 at 04:29am
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    I love it! It's so calming and looks easily readable (always a plus). I love the colors, the fonts, everything.

    Silverline
    August 9th, 2014 at 08:21pm
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    I love the fact that the main page doesn't have a patterned background because you have the bookspine layout so it's not distracting and it's beautifully simple. I would put a bit more padding in the left and right parts of the text area so the font isn't pushing up against the sides, but that's all! I think it's very elegant in the simple kind of way.

    Ghostings
    August 9th, 2014 at 08:45pm
  • swell

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    Your layouts are so beautiful I die when I see them. The only issue I have is the colour of the font against the background - they make my eyes squint a little but otherwise, it's gorgeous.

    Truth
    October 11th, 2014 at 09:25am
  • aubree james.

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    @ swell

    I really like the look of this! There is such a great contrast between the border background and the page background! I think the content background could be a tiny bit thinner, but other then that it's gorgeous!

    We the North
    November 19th, 2014 at 04:57am
  • oh bear

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    That is one gorgeous layout, damn, lady. The only thing I'd nitpick at is the transparency of the title — being the size it is, I think it's meant to draw a bit of attention? So I'd make it a little more opaque. But I think overall it's just great. Even with the busy background, I'm still very much drawn to the text.

    Jody in Orbit
    November 22nd, 2014 at 04:42pm
  • Alsoldey

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    Oh my God! I feel like I am in space, and that I am orbiting. This layout is pure perfection!

    Camp Surrender
    November 22nd, 2014 at 04:58pm
  • nearly witches.

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    That's really pretty! I especially love how the background gives me this whole vintage-y camp feeling and the colours are simply lovely.

    Empty Mugs and Coffee Stains?
    December 1st, 2014 at 09:32pm
  • Lady of Bats

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    That's quite lovely. Fairly simple, but neat and calming. The only nitpicking I have is that I'm not personally a fan of such largely rounded edges for the content section, and the content section's a bit too thin, but that's understandable because of the picture.

    Vampire's Kiss.
    January 13th, 2015 at 10:10pm
  • nearly witches.

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    The banner is pretty cool, I love the mix of colour and black&white! The only bit i find iffy is the fact that one side of the page has that cloud pattern and the other doesn't. It throws my eyes off a little bit. Aside from that, lovely-looking layout!

    Trouble?
    January 14th, 2015 at 01:42pm
  • swell

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    I like the layout but I don't like how the right side of the content has no border around it. And that the image and content's space isn't the same size as the border. Otherwise, I like the gif and the content background!

    Glow?
    March 13th, 2015 at 09:24am
  • Alsoldey

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    Okay so the layout goes completely with the story title and I'm so in love! I'm also really curious as to what's going to happen. I'm wondering if this will be tied with some urban legend kind of deal. Nice layout, overall!

    Camp Surrender?
    March 13th, 2015 at 09:20pm
  • aubree james.

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    @ SmilingScarlet

    This is super gorgeous, I love all the warm peach colours, it really gives the story a summer feel! I love that the colour trend continues into your front page too! The content background doesn't quite fit, but does provide a bit of an accent. I wouldn't say it really takes away from the whole thing. Overall beautiful, and it sets the tone!

    Symptoms of Life
    March 28th, 2015 at 02:49pm
  • swell

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    Ooooh, this is such a pretty layout. I like that when you scroll the rainbow border scrolls as well and it's a nice break from the white content and background. The banner is simple but cute and I love the way the summary / fonts are set up as well. I think the letters are too spaced from each other in the text section, but otherwise I think it's a pretty layout.

    Covert
    May 16th, 2015 at 01:14pm
  • nearly witches.

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    Simple, but pretty! I love that the background is so simplistic, yet it looks extremely classy as well. Having that plain background and the scrolling image on the right just makes the whole thing look amazing. I also really like the font you've used for the title, it works in! The only thing I'm not the biggest fan of is the fact that some of the text from the content box goes over the image, which makes it a little difficult to read. Aside from that, it looks amazing!

    Room 102
    May 16th, 2015 at 07:14pm
  • swell

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    I really like this layout. I love the dark, eerie feel with the greys and the dark border as well. The banner is nice though if I had one minor 'annoyance', it would be that the title feels too close to the border, almost as though it'll be cut off. Otherwise, I think it's a gorgeous layout.

    Sometimes
    August 30th, 2015 at 09:15am
  • losing control.

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    I like it, I think the color of the border looks cool with the whole "drawing" type of banner you have. The only thing is that the color of the title seems to clash weirdly with everything. Because it's so light, it looks kinda weird with the bright border and plainish banner.

    All This Time
    August 30th, 2015 at 07:45pm
  • nearly witches.

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    I like how the colours all gel together -- you've got this gorgeous sunset-style colour scheme going on and it's really easy on the eyes. Everything works in well together, and the gif is a lovely touch. The only thing I'm iffy about is the symbol in the summary, as it kinda sticks out. Otherwise, the layout is beautiful!

    Molly
    September 19th, 2015 at 09:03pm