Editing + Proofreading

  • CaliforniaShadows

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    Hi guys! I need help with editing my personal statements for college admissions. I need help fixing sentences, grammar issues, and well over all structure.
    November 14th, 2015 at 08:42pm
  • error404

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    @ CaliforniaShadows

    I would be happy to help! :) x
    November 15th, 2015 at 09:08am
  • CaliforniaShadows

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    @ lily hughes.
    Hi! I'll private message with the information. Thank you for helping
    November 15th, 2015 at 10:30pm
  • error404

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    My absolute pleasure! Very Happy
    November 15th, 2015 at 10:31pm
  • Buddah

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    Hey guys, looking for a beta for my novel which is currently at nine, nearly ten chapters. I'm hoping for someone who can stick with me for a while actually. It is called Crete City, and it's genre's would be Adventure/Drama, with many elements of Action and Fantasy as well as a bit of Romance as well. Hoping for it to be a series, though how many exactly, I don't know. Just need aid with grammar and other typo's and the like. Would like help with deciding on whether it's interesting and how the storyline could be improved if need be. I'm hoping for someone whom is pretty active as well.

    Short Synopsis/Summary-ish

    Casper Hitaraga has just lost his uncle Vincent Hitaraga, the man everyone called legendary though Casper never knew why. With his uncle's passing, Casper has now effectively been left the last remaining member of the "famous" Hitaraga bloodline. He now must return to Crete City because his uncle wished so for reasons Casper is unaware of. As he finds himself returning to the very city he never thought he would ever seen again, the Houses, a society inhabited by 8 Tribe-like organization are on the verge of war, and Casper will be re-educated in the harsh realities of the world that is the very essence of Crete City.

    As of now, none of it is posted on Mibba, since I haven't been on this site in 3-4 years now, maybe even longer. I was here back when it had an actual chat room, not a forum board type system of chatting, if that gives you a hint on how long. Anybody I knew back then probably do not frequent this site any longer so I wanted to rebuild my relationship with this site in general. Private message me when you get the chance and I have a way we can chat in real-time if they are comfortable with that.
    December 9th, 2015 at 12:15am
  • Auticorn Writes;

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    I need someone to check for typos and anything weird sounding in Normal is Gross. It's only the first chapter, so it shouldn't be too harsh. Just send me a PM. I write with my iPad, and there is ALWAYS typos to deal with. I feel like if I edit myself... that I'll be inclined to loathe it and re-write it entirely. :c
    July 5th, 2016 at 11:07pm
  • dylan o'brien.

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    Hey everyone,

    I'm looking for a proof reader/beta reader for my new story Dawning, which is a piece I am writing for NaNo this month. English isn't my first language, so I catch myself either repeating words, or struggling with certain sentences.

    What I'd love is for someone who goes over my written text, puts what they would do differently in a different color text and edits out grammatical errors. If you catch me making the same mistake over and over again, do tell me so I can learn.

    The story is a post apocalyptic story which can be found here. I am not sure about the rating yet, but I am feeling PG13, though who knows where my muse takes me. I have a blogpost about the story here, which contains a lot more information.

    Since it's for NaNo, I catch myself paying a lot less attention than usual, which is terrible! So, if someone could help me out, that would be GREAT!


    I've found someone, thank you!
    November 1st, 2016 at 05:01pm
  • clairewrites7

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    Hey guys(:
    So I have a blog that I very infrequently post on and I'm beginning to think that might be because I'm not super confident in my writing. Maybe with a beta reader on my side I'll feel motivated enough to start posting regularly. It's a blog, to be very blunt, about my sex life so it's at least NC-17. I'm also a strident feminist, so I'm hoping it carries some prominent feminist undertones like sex- and body-positivity.
    So if that's what you're into, definitely send me a message. I'll be posting some samples on my mibba blog momentarily. I'm not super worried about grammar/spelling because I tend to be pretty okay at that. I just need help with flow, as you can probably tell from this super disjointed post.
    Aaaanywho, hit me up if you can help me out. I'd greatly appreciate it.
    November 18th, 2016 at 06:30am
  • inactive;;;

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    Hello!

    I'd really like some help with my NaNoWriMo novel. It's called Antidote B. I already have over 50k finished, but I'd like to focus on finishing the rest of the novel by the end of November. With that being said, I'd really love someone to look at the flow, help me catch any plot holes, and let me know if I overuse a word or phrase (it's one of my writing faults, honestly). I think my spelling/grammar is okay- at least, I'm not too worried about it right now- so there's no need to focus on that (unless I do something that really bugs you). What I'll probably do is send over the doc and let you make any edits you deem necessary (all I ask is that you don't actually delete anything, simply make a note or change the color).

    I don't have a time frame for this, you can work at your own pace, but help would be amazing!! The story is rated R for language, violence, and slight sexual activity. There is a gay pairing that's a pretty big focus in the story, so if that bothers you, this may not be the story for you to edit/proofread. You can find the story here.

    Please send me a private message if you're willing to help me out!Cute
    November 20th, 2016 at 02:07am
  • the-vampiress-angel

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    :)
    January 5th, 2017 at 06:21pm
  • Shadowette

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    Hi everyone!

    I’m writing a story (this one) and would really appreciate any help I can get. Haha. Okay, I mainly need help with a beta reader and/or proof reader. My story is a comedy/drama and it’s about the protagonist dealing poorly with change. I’m wanting to focus more of a ‘coming of age’, so there may be small hints of romance (or not, you’ll see Wink ). My main concerns is that I’m just a bit hesitant with my pacing of the story and characterisation.

    If you’re interested, please let me know. I’d be eternally grateful. Thank you! Hail
    November 20th, 2017 at 03:44am
  • Autumn McJavabean

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    Hello,

    I'd like someone to read through my story and provide edit recommendations. The story is called "Eco|Knight" (pronounced echo).
    December 18th, 2017 at 08:53pm
  • D. M. Daniel

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    Hello, I'd really like some assistance with my story The Wrong Girl (well, I need assistance with all of them, but I'm currently focusing on this particular story). I'm not really looking for anything in particular, just ways in which the story could be improved. Any assistance would be appreciated. - Thanks!
    December 27th, 2017 at 04:26am
  • Shade_

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    Hello everyone, I'd like some help with how to even start a story (like what kind of preparations and stuff), I am looking for how to put my ideas and thoughts and fantasies into a worked out plan for my story, and I really have no idea how to do this. I also really want to write a story, because i have have so many ideas, but I don't think I'm disciplined enough to even try to write a story.(because of some blogs and posts that I've read.) So I really want help with that too. I'd really appreciate it if someone could help me!

    P.S. sorry for my bad grammar.
    January 2nd, 2018 at 01:26am