Editing + Proofreading

  • Vesper Lestrange

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    I'm looking for a beta for two of my stories. I haven't been very regular in my writing and I feel rusty. One story is a crossover fic called "When World's Collide." It's about a love triangle between Dean Winchester and Edward Cullen. I'm a few chapters in, but I think I have issues with continuity and grammar. The other is "Second Chance". It's a Sirius Black fic. I feel like I'm having the same issues with this one as well.
    July 16th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I'm looking for someone who're willing to edit my chapter of my co-write story. It's only one chaper (1,170 words), and the only thing you have to do is to proofread it, and edit whatever isn't right (grammar, spelling mistakes ect.) - please send me a message if you wanna help.
    Please as soon as possible though :)
    July 23rd, 2013 at 12:42am
  • Jefferson Starships

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    I'd like a beta to read through my original fiction story. It's rated pg-13 for mild sexual acts and swearing. It's complete and posted, there's two chapters and a total of 2,966 words. It includes vampires, zombies, and humans. I'm not really looking for something specific, just a quick once over? Make You Feel, there's the link.

    I don't mind a PM or a profile comment, just help, please. Smile
    July 26th, 2013 at 05:09am
  • Embery

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    I would like someone who can point out errors for me on my story Broken, it's a Last of Us fanfiction. I have rated it NC-17 simply because I am unsure what exactly I am going to put in it, there is violence and quite a bit of swearing. You can send me a personal message or profile comment, whichever you prefer. Thanks in advance.

    -A
    July 29th, 2013 at 07:40pm
  • slumflower

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    I'd like someone to help me with an unposted story. I haven't edited yet and I'm not sure how many words it has (I think it's over 5k) and it's an original romance fiction with sci-fi elements and action included. It was written for class but I liked it so I wanted to polish it up and post it up here for people to read.

    I also have a lot of stories in queue so I would like to find someone who could help me proofread and edit (point things out in notes and change in text grammatical errors) the stories that I'm pre-writing. I have original stories, drabbles, and fan-fictions like teen wolf and one direction, although that's not all that I write.
    August 18th, 2013 at 10:34am
  • lucky luciano

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    I'm looking for someone to edit my story Women Can Too. It's a 1920s gangster original fiction, with a female main character. There's only one chapter now, but ideally I would PM you a chapter for you to edit, then you would send it back with any changes/comments you have. I hope to update at least once a week. So I would really appreciate it if you could send back the changes within 24 hours and what not. Obviously I can understand if that's not possible too. Please PM me if you're interested!
    August 19th, 2013 at 03:33pm
  • hazuki.

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    I'd like someone to beta an article for me before I submit it to the Articles section here on Mibba. It's not only about pointing out odd wording and grammatical mistakes, I need a person who can honestly tell me if I was clear enough and give their honest opinion on what I wrote. I don't want to risk having written a boring article about an interesting theme. Wink
    August 24th, 2013 at 09:54pm
  • psychotic secrets;

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    @ Filth in the Beauty

    I can help if you like. Just send it to my messages and I'll edit it for you Cute
    August 24th, 2013 at 10:00pm
  • CaliforniaShadows

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    Got help already thanks!
    August 25th, 2013 at 04:35am
  • lightningboldt22

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    Hello!
    I am currently writing a story and am looking for a beta reader.
    It is a Harry Potter alternate universe fanfiction. There is some mature content as it includes an OC that was abused as a child. There isn't much in the actual story but it is referenced. I would love someone that could look over small mistakes but I would also like them to have a good knowledge of the HP universe to watch for characterization and staying true to canon as much as possible. I really would like someone who looks for more than just grammar mistakes. If you're available, go ahead and message me. Please and thank you oh so very much! Very Happy
    December 4th, 2013 at 10:55pm
  • Marinesister92

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    Hi Loves!
    So I participated in Nanowrimo, but after writing my story (which is still in the works) i've realized that it needs another eye to tell me if it makes sense. Because I know where things want to go and it would make sense to me. It does have vulgar language and is most likely going to be R or NC-17.

    This story is an Original story (which I kind of want to post here.) about a girl who is an athlete in college. She plays a sport that is brutal, and has become something very important to her. She is grilie only because she thought it would give her a relationship with her mother since she had basically skipped over that in high school. In the end she finds herself falling for two different guys and ends up with one of them. I know that I want to develop the triangle more but did not have the time to do so. If someone would want to do this i'd love you dearly.
    -S
    December 5th, 2013 at 12:54am
  • DontTakeWithAlcohal

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    @ Audrey T
    I'd like the grammar/spelling stuff looked over, as
    well as feedback on how the chapter flows and the
    word-choice thank you

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/545269/The-Dead/1/
    January 3rd, 2014 at 09:07am
  • kili the dwarf

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    I have an original piece that I am working on and would like someone to proof read it before I post it to the site.
    It's a supernatural piece involving ghost, vampires, werewolves, ect.

    Please send me a message if you could help me out with this. I'd really appreciate it.
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    January 31st, 2014 at 04:58pm
  • Juno Temple.

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    Hello, I'm looking for a beta reader. I'm currently working on a Reign fan fiction which will involve some mature content (although I'm not 100% sure if it will yet, but just in case). I'm looking for someone who wants to read over my story -- which is still being written -- and look for punctuation, grammar, capitalization and other mistakes. Maybe also someone who can tell me what they would change about certain plot twists or settings? Thank you.
    March 6th, 2014 at 02:25pm
  • Darn It Kelly.

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    I am looking for someone to proof-read my story "It's time". It is an Mpreg one-shot between Patrick Stump and Pete Wentz. I am not sure exactly how many words it is yet, but I know it will be under 2k words. If you are interested, message me please! Thank you.
    March 7th, 2014 at 07:37pm
  • CaliforniaShadows

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    Thanks
    March 12th, 2014 at 04:09am
  • Lady.V.

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    Hello, I am looking for someone to go over all the chapters of The Miserable Life of Lux Day and keep up with me so that when I update, they will be able to edit it. It's rated R and based around romance, slice of life and drama.

    Anyone who is willing to help, message me. Thank you!
    June 12th, 2014 at 08:27pm
  • Can you not.

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    My best friend and I are writing a book that has been in the works for literally years. We've refined and matured it into something we think we may actually publish, even if it's just those 50 cent ebooks on Amazon. We have a couple of people who are proof-reading for us but both are older and not necessarily our target audience. What we're looking for are a few people, preferably young adult girls to read pieces of the story as we write. All we ask is that you have an eye for grammar, plot development and continuity, character development, and whatnot along with warning us about nasty habits we may possess and telling us if this would actually be something you would want to read. If you're interested, please shoot me a message ASAP and we'll go from there. Thanks!!
    June 21st, 2014 at 05:09am
  • Sam Rose

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    If anyone is looking for help with proofreading, I'm available! Bye
    April 21st, 2015 at 06:31am
  • GuiltyShadows

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    I have a story called, I'm on a Mission, that I would love if anyone could edit. I would like someone to help me fix simple grammar mistakes, as long with finding any plot holes.

    My story is about an Angel, Gabriel, who is on a mission to become a proper angel. His mission is to grant a human, Sophia, a pure-wish, and in her case, it is friends. Things get a bit more complex throughout the story, and overall it's a bunch of Angels vs Demons.

    I have around 26 chapters already finished, but I haven't edited them, nor posted them on here.

    If you can help, it would be appreciated! Thanks!
    April 27th, 2015 at 12:34pm