Story Brainstorming + Mentoring

I'm writing a satirical essay on how the world could function better without the male species. I would really like some help in writing, this is my first satirical essay and I don't particularly know how I can put in some irony, I'm not very witty at all. Please help me!

I need story help. I've written my first chapter, but I'm struggling with the other chapters and I need someone to brain storm ideas with. My story is here. It's about two people with disabilities. The boy has ADHD (inattentive type), Dyslexia and Bipolar Disorder while the girl has high functioning autism. I don't want to give too many details but it's a romance story, basically about two lovers who come together, first as friends and then their relationship becomes more.

What I could use is a few people who know about bipolar disorder. Researching is hard for me when it doesn't really explain what I'm looking for. x_x

PMing works better for me. >w<

Okay so, I need someone to look over the second chapter of The Ideas of When and tell me if it looks good, flows well, and give just give me some overall feedback on the first chapter itself (already posted).
I have the second chapter all written up, so if someone can send me a private message I'd really appreciate it!

Hey so I have an Andley story idea, but need help developing the plot to it.

It called Ashley in wonderland, and as the title suggest's a spin off from Alice in wonderland.

Read here for more.

I need someone's help with my new original children's fiction called 'The Adventures of Boom the Wonder-Mutt'. It's based on my pet dog and has a 'Perry the Platypus'/'Cats and Dogs' kind of theme, and it'll hopefully end up as a series. The first one I'm working on is about a rat rebellion and will hopefully be full of explosions, evil and happy endings. I need someone to help keep the story going, and to help keep the vocabulary and plot reigned in so that it's not too complicated for children to read. I'm basically writing it on a wing and a prayer right now, so I just need someone to mentor me so I don't write crap.

PM me if you're willing/interested. Thanks in advance!

I need help with coming up with ideas for my new story called Tomorrow Never Dies. So far, it's going to be about two differently-gendered twins with paranormal abilities. Avery can control light and electricity while Riley controls darkness. Both of them see ghosts, but only Riley can see demons. I have some ideas for it, but I need help brainstorming them because I'm having a hard time getting the ideas out of my mind. So having someone to brainstorm would really be helpful.

PM me if you are interested or willing. :D

About a year or so ago, I started writing an original story, but after awhile, I just didn't know where to go with it. There are lies and romance and family and death and other twists so far. If you're willing to help me come up with ideas, I would be forever grateful! You can read my first 10 chapters here: http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/441485/Starbright/
Also, please PM me if you'd like to help. Thank you!

Hello I need a bit of help for the starting of my original story. Like I know what I am doing with it its just that I can never get the wording write I have maybe less than a quarter of the first chapter done but I honestly have no clue what to do with it. PM me if you are interested in helping me. Thank you :)

Okay so I've been writing this Patrice Bergeron story and I'm just not happy with the way things are coming out. I need some serious help trying to figure out how things should unfold. I think my dialogue is okay its the narrative that needs work anyways, PM me if you can be of some assistance, Thanks!

I need input on something I just started writing. It's original fiction centered around a suicide prevention helpline and crisis intervention. I am unsure on whether this will continue as a chaptered story or only as a one-shot, but what I need the most is opinion on content.

If you are interested, please PM me. Thank you beforehand.

Wow... I post here a lot. Heh. ^^;

Anyway, I need help with brainstorming some ideas for my recent story here. It's about a seventeen year old girl who has no idea what her real past is or who her father is either. Basically, it's like a vampire story. My character is half-vampire because her father married a human woman. I don't want to give off too many details or I might end up spoiling the story. ^^ But anyway, like I said, it's about seventeen year old girl who is trying to figure out her life and whatever... I can't really explain it very well because my brain is somewhere else. ._.

If anyone is interested in learning more, feel free to message me. :D

I was wondering if I could get help on writing story descriptions. I'm not happy with the way I've written them yet I can't seem to change the descriptions to something that sounds decent. Thanks :)

nvm

I want to finish Tell No Truth (pre-MCU, Hawkeye), but I keep finding ruts in my outline (my fault, I'm deleting things because I think I've already written them or placed them on new notes). So, I have a chapter and a half that are floating in limbo and rather than force them to be a filler, I want them to be something. I have ideas, outlines, the fic is supposed to take place in the span of three weeks -- hmm, really just want someone to listen to me pull my hair out and possibly suggest ideas to cover my whitewashed ones.

I'm writing a story set in modern day Japan. I've been doing fairly well up until now. It involves a bunch of rich Japanese boys and one middle class American girl. The guys are ridiculously wealthy-- to the point where they refer to middle-lower class people as "commoners" and at times enjoy going to places that commoners go (such as your everyday supermarket). But here is where I kind of need help. If there's anyone that is familiar with Japanese culture and lifestyles, please contact me. I kind of can't go any further with the story until I get some more information. I need to know what kind of restaurant a middle-to-lower class Japanese family would go to: what the atmosphere would be like, price range, etc. I want it to be a place that's really warm and inviting, a place that would be people closer together and solidify friendships. If this person would also be willing to help me out again, should I hit this rut more than once and I'm sure I will, I would greatly appreciate it :) Please message me if you can help :)

Story is here if you need to read it to understand.

EDIT: Got help, thanks!

Repost.

I'm presently writing a story for my English class that needs to be fairly symbolic as well as chalk full of other literary elements.

The plot is that there is a post-earth era called the 'Enlightedned' age where everything in the world we ever wanted to know is already known. The time before that is called the 'Dark Ages.' There is a Resistance to the reign of the Brain Trust, they who know everything, and the story centers around one from the Resistance.

Linette was captured from the Resistance and is facing the 6 Inquisitors of the Brain Trust. I know I only want 6 posts, it is a short story, so I need help planning the 6 Inquisitors. I do already have 2 planned and that's where I'm stuck. I'm also not sure how I want to work in Linette's love interests and her escape.

Here's the story link:Welcome to the Light

I'd prefer to be contacted by PM, thank you!

HALP! I have a scene that just won't make sense (or maybe it does) and I've spent the past three hours rewriting it. It's a really small piece of interaction, not even five sentences (although it's been steadily increasing and decreasing as time goes on). Thank you in advance.

Help has been received <3

PMing witheverything

@ Starkette; I'll PM you too!

I need title help.

I currently have a story about a girl named Kasia. She's the only daughter of Polish immigrants so her life has been kind of sheltered thus far. She graduates from college with a degree in English and can't find a job, but answers an ad looking for writers that winds up being for a porn company in Los Angeles—only she's a virgin and doesn't know anything about sex.

Anyway, it's currently titled "The Moment Already" which is taken from a very small section of Czeslaw Milosz's "Falling in Love." The poem itself fits with the story, but I'm just not as in love with the title as I feel I should be.

Any help/suggestions would be appreciated.