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  • folie a dru.

    folie a dru. (1270)

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    Basically give a story title of yours and the person below will comment it.
    It doesn't have to be a story you have posted and you can use it if you're not sure on a title, too.
    Please don't post a link to your story. It sort of kills it if we know everything. We're just commenting the title here.

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    The Life and Times of a Las Vegas Band Slut
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    January 29th, 2011 at 04:41pm
  • Peeta Mellark;

    Peeta Mellark; (100)

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    Mmm, I don't know. I'm not sure I like the "band slut" bit of it. But, that's just me XD
    These Mistakes You've Made, You'll Just Make Them Again
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    January 29th, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • folie a dru.

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    I'm not a fan of song lyric names as a rule, but I can definitely see how this particular line could work really well with a properly executed fic.

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    & What Would We Have to Sing About Then?
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    January 29th, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • lucky luciano

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    I really like it, the words flow in a way I could never forget them. I like that about stories Cute
    God's Gonna Cut You Down.
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    January 30th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • FICTION

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    I like it, a lot, actually. It's nice and seems like it'd be pretty good.

    Core
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    January 30th, 2011 at 05:05am
  • Audrey T

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    I like that I can't tell what the genre or even the topic of the story is from just the title. The simplicity of it makes me curious to know about the story.
    Within the Hemlock Tree
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    January 30th, 2011 at 08:01am
  • pepper potts.

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    It makes me think of something from the eighteen hundreds, something poetic like.

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    Conservative Shadow
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    January 30th, 2011 at 08:17am
  • oh bear

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    I like it. It's like there's a mysterious aura about the title, especially with the right font and all.
    Superheroes
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    January 30th, 2011 at 10:52am
  • spacejunkie

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    What's not to love?!

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    Out of Electronica

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    January 30th, 2011 at 10:54am
  • lucky luciano

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    Sounds like a comic-fic sort of thing Shifty Having to deal with some sort of superpower/hero? But I like it Cute
    Memories of You, Memories of Us.
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    January 30th, 2011 at 04:42pm
  • folie a dru.

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    It seems like it could be repetitive, but if that's a reoccurring thing in the story, it would definitely work.

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    Icarus and the Bird of Peace.
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    January 30th, 2011 at 04:59pm
  • Charlie Brown.

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    It sounds.... different. :P lol. But I would check that out.

    Last Days Alive.
    January 30th, 2011 at 06:20pm
  • rosewater tide.

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    Eh, it's okay. It doesn't give much away, which I like but it lacks anything to catch attention minus the fact that it'll probably be an emotional story.

    The Midnight Society
    January 30th, 2011 at 07:13pm
  • fairyfeller

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    I like it, it has an interesting ring to it.

    The Peculiar Tale of Brian and Harold
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    January 30th, 2011 at 07:15pm
  • folie a dru.

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    I think it's interesting. It's one of those titles that reminds you of other titles, but it doesn't matter because names make it specific.

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    A Retelling of Events That Never Happened.
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    January 31st, 2011 at 06:08am
  • oh bear

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    I like it. It sounds confusing at first and really poetic. The way it's worded sounds really light, descriptive and not wordy.

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    Superheroes
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    January 31st, 2011 at 06:11am
  • Takanori Matsumoto.

    Takanori Matsumoto. (150)

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    It sounds a little generic, but for all I know, it could be about everyday heroes.

    Legends
    (my novel, unposted)
    January 31st, 2011 at 06:11am
  • folie a dru.

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    It's a singular word, so it makes you wonder more and it makes you wonder what kind of legends.

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    When No One Was Looking, The World Heard Everything.
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    January 31st, 2011 at 06:12am
  • pepper potts.

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    It's a little to long for my tastes but its definitely eye catching. Something I would read.

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    Conservative Shadow
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    January 31st, 2011 at 06:18am
  • rosewater tide.

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    Sounds very interesting, totally catches my eye.

    Decembers.
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    January 31st, 2011 at 06:19am