Comment the Story Title.

It makes me think of a bitch and then a guy that she doesn't get along with. Like a rocky relationship. So if it's about that, it definitely fits.

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Pointy Fucking Shoes.
(posted)

I love that title. It makes me think of a girl who doesn't give a shit, and sees 'pointy fucking shoes' as annoying or frustrating. Highschool cliche type things.

But...y'know, I could be completely off...

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Haunted
(not posted)

I'm curious about what the story's about, but the word seems a little cliché to me. Perhaps a synonym of it might be better?
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Rette Mich (Save me in German, not posted)

Haven's Haunted:

I love that title. It makes me think of a girl who doesn't give a shit, and sees 'pointy fucking shoes' as annoying or frustrating. Highschool cliche type things.

But...y'know, I could be completely off...

It's about a cross-dressing boy and his BDSM relationship.

Back to the game...

I like your title. I like that it actually translates to a title I also like and not just pretty random words in German. Makes me assume a TH fic, but I don't know.

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Valencia.
(posted)

^ Thank you ^-^ It's from a song actually, Sterben Für Dich by La Fee. Beautiful yet tragic.

I've read Pointy Fucking Shoes. Brilliant story...I just need to remember to comment >_<
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I love that title. It could mean anything from a name to a city (I think? I'm no good at geography). I love ambiguous titles

It's So Wrong (posted)

It's right. That's what it makes me think of initially, but it's a good title because you wonder what's so wrong and how the characters feel about it being wrong.

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Whore.
(posted)

I like the simplicity of it, and it makes me wonder who's a whore, why they're a whore and how they feel about it.

A Story of Fire and Ice (unposted)

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It makes me wonder if fire and ice is real elementals or a metaphor. And if it's a metaphor is it a metaphor for characters, characteristics? I like it.

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Conversations on a Thursday Afternoon.
(posted)

It sounds like the actual story is about simple conversations, but the real story would be in the detail and extra description to make the story more interesting. Very deceptive, I like it.

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What Max Needs

I like it; it's simplistic, and doesn't really give much away. It makes me wonder if Max is the protagonist. I imagine it might be a love story, perhaps a teenage one. Max might be a girl.

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Butterfly, Early Summer.

I love how simple it is, yet how much imagery it brings with it. Also, the comma is really appealing to my superficial side.

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Dreams Will Carry You
(posted)

It's ok, I don't think it would really draw me in though, it's too much of a statement.

Sherry McGavin and The Sixth Reich
(posted)

It interests me because I think of the Third Reich, of course, and it makes me wonder who Sherry is and what the relation is.

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Can I Keep You In My Sights?
(posted)

Idk its nice, but I don't know how it works for a story title.

Two seperate stories
1. Breathing Your Gold
2. To The Stars

You only get one commented on. (You can play the game more than once to get opinions on other titles.) I'll take the first.

I think it's interesting 'cause I wonder how you could breathe gold, but I have no idea what it would be about.

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After the War.
(posted)

I like that you can interpret "war" in so many different ways--military, romantic, familial.

A Twisted String
(unposted)

I like it a lot since I don't quite know what it would be about. It draws me in, it sounds artsy and interesting.

The Sitcom
(unposted)

It makes me wonder if it's about the actors on the TV show or if people just like to watch the show.

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The Life and Times of a Las Vegas Bandslut.
(unposted)

I like the suspension in it. You don't think 'Bandslut' is going to be the word at the end, but it just compels you to want to read it all the more.

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Revenge
(posted.)