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  • cataclysmic.

    cataclysmic. (100)

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    It gives me a vivid perspective on where the story itself could possibly take place and what challenges are to be faces. Very lovely!

    (Yes I was very much late.)

    Deviant?
    June 23rd, 2014 at 09:52am
  • archivist

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    ^ You were late.

    I like it, it shouts rebellion and color (or perhaps a quiet change of pace) which is always nice to read.

    M500XC?
    June 23rd, 2014 at 09:53am
  • This.Useless.Heart.

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    It definitely sounds like a sci-fi. (Although, that's also obvious given it's your story.) It is a very technical sounding title, bringing to mind technology like computers or robots or things of that nature.

    The Impossible Children
    June 23rd, 2014 at 09:52pm
  • nearly witches.

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    Gives me a sense of something illegal, or something that shouldn't be. It's definitely grabbing, I'd click into it if I saw it on the main story page for sure.

    River People?
    June 24th, 2014 at 04:43pm
  • This.Useless.Heart.

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    Well, it makes me think of either people who live along a river or like people that are like river creatures that come from the river. Either way it sounds interesting to me, and I would consider checking it out.

    Impossibilities
    June 26th, 2014 at 02:30am
  • nearly witches.

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    It makes me think of someone that's been told they can't do a lot of things and as a story title, it makes me wonder if it'll be about someone trying to smash all of those impossibilities. I like it, definitely. It's interesting, but it doesn't give away too much about the story.

    Burnouts?
    June 26th, 2014 at 12:46pm
  • This.Useless.Heart.

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    It makes me think of people that aren't going anywhere in life, possibly by choice. They might be cool burnouts, or they might be low lifes. I feel like as a title it indicates something about the characters and/or where they are (or aren't going with their lives.)

    Lights
    June 28th, 2014 at 09:04am
  • cataclysmic.

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    It makes me think of a song but more importantly makes me think of what bands see when they're up on stage, the lights blinding down on them as they begin to play. Or maybe it's someone who meets an understanding about themselves or a conflict that they face.

    Vast Obscurity?
    June 28th, 2014 at 10:50am
  • based

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    It's very vague. Be more specific?

    Demon Flower
    June 28th, 2014 at 03:36pm
  • This.Useless.Heart.

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    It kind of makes me think of something possible anime or video game related. A demon flower just sounds like something that would exist in those realms. That's probably not what you're going for though. In terms of how it sounds, it sounds a bit intriguing and the words literally sound good together, so there is that.

    The Impossible Children
    June 28th, 2014 at 07:11pm
  • swell

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    It sounds intriguing. I've never heard of a title like that but it sounds like a crime or mystery or drama that I'd love to read. In a way, I feel like it could be haunting too.

    Where the Wind Takes Us
    July 1st, 2014 at 04:33pm
  • bona drag.

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    Trying to act like I haven't read the story and don't know a thing about it. It gives me the impression of a romance, perhaps a lighthearted one between two characters with no real direction who find each other. If I was looking for something cute with some (hopefully) good character arcs, I'd definitely click on it.

    Ganymede, 1956
    October 11th, 2014 at 07:32pm
  • aubree james.

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    It definitely gives off a tone of historical fiction, but that's just by the year. Frankly, I don't know what to make of it! It sounds somewhat mysterious and romantic?

    We the North
    November 19th, 2014 at 04:53am
  • nearly witches.

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    It makes me think of people who maybe live in the Northern Hemisphere, or people that live in a constantly cold climate. It also makes me think of two people who maybe love each other so much that it seems as if they are the only two people existing.

    No Handlebars
    December 1st, 2014 at 09:42pm
  • lonely girl.

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    It makes me think that the story will be centred on little kids, possibly showing off to each other? It seems really innocent and sweet.

    You Made Me Feel Butterflies?
    December 18th, 2014 at 11:50am
  • nearly witches.

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    I get kind of a mixed thing from it. On one hand, I'd definitely associate it with a romance, but the past tense at the beginning is throwing me off and making me think that maybe it's someone looking back at a certain person. Either way, I definitely get the idea that it's about a romance of some sort.

    Unit 731
    December 18th, 2014 at 02:13pm