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- I really liked your summary and the statement about running away, it really makes you think. I see a lot of people go, “Oh, running away is for cowards who can’t face their problems,” so it’s quite interesting to see a story who has a different take on running away. It also piqued my interest because it made me wonder what happened to Dahlia to make her run away from all the problems in her life and how the past manages to catch up with her.
Epilogue? Don’t you mean prologue? Because epilogues go at the end, unless if this is one of those start at the end stories which goes back to the start.
Guns n Roses’ Welcome to the Jungle comes on the speakers and a bolt of electricity… You should italicise the song title, or put quotations around the song title. I’m not sure why you’re supposed to do that, but it’s like, a rule of English that you have to show it’s a title so yeah.
Ooh, this is getting interesting. It makes me wonder why Dahlia just up and left and ran away from all of her problems. I feel bad for Skreet for being left behind and having to clean up her messes. It made me wonder what went wrong with Dahlia’s family, as I suspect they’re the reason why she left ;o Good job so far :D
November 1st, 2011 at 12:46am