First I must say that the layout is amazing. The picture is amazing, the colors you used to compliment it is just on point. It looks so depressing, but elegant at the same time. Most don' know how to pull off a good layout.
The context is a little bunched up though. Perhaps you can make the spacing between them a little larger so the letters above won't run into the ones below.
It's nice how you started the beginning with the porcelain beauty theory, then turned it to a more depressing vibe, giving it the opposite meaning. It went really well with the picture. And then you had a man love her regardless of her cancer (I'm assuming that's what it is) and saw the beauty in her. And it all worked too well with the picture.
But, it does remind me of the story/ movie My Sister's Keeper. Perhaps that's where you got the idea from.
This a really well written drabble. Good job. =)
Natural Beauty
The context is a little bunched up though. Perhaps you can make the spacing between them a little larger so the letters above won't run into the ones below.
It's nice how you started the beginning with the porcelain beauty theory, then turned it to a more depressing vibe, giving it the opposite meaning. It went really well with the picture. And then you had a man love her regardless of her cancer (I'm assuming that's what it is) and saw the beauty in her. And it all worked too well with the picture.
But, it does remind me of the story/ movie My Sister's Keeper. Perhaps that's where you got the idea from.
This a really well written drabble. Good job. =)
Natural Beauty
October 2nd, 2011 at 08:01pm