@ losing control.
So basically I need to give it another shot?
Also, fyi, I have preferences on POV depending on how much is
too much for the reader to know. Like, when it comes to more psychological things, it has to be a narrowed point of view, whether that means first person or third person limited, because the whole point is experiencing strictly what they experience. Sometimes to the point where you don't know if the narrator is reliable or not. Horror sometimes has to be done from a limited point of view, but often can be done with a more expansive view so that you can get little tidbits. So for me it just depends on what the author is trying to achieve.