Assassins!

@ lovelyacoustic @ GoodGirl; @ Carpe Diem ! @ grl_lk_moi_320

Updated. It's super long for reasons unknown. Hope it's acceptable!:)

@ the_space_between
hey, I loved your chapter it was great :)

@ the_space_between
It was awesome!!! I love how even though she totally disarmed Riley, she still knew that what she was doing was dangerous. And she did it for Louis. Awee. You left it in a perfect place for me to, because I'm going to start my chapter with Riley and Niall tied together now ahhaa

@the_space_between
You don't even know how hard I ship Louis and Cornelia now!!!! They make me so happy and they're just so cute I'm gonna die!!!!!

And the chapter was perfect! I thought you portrayed our team members spot on. Excellent job!

Hey I just updated!!! It was sort of short, but I feel like it wouldn't have been any good to add more.

So here is what I was thinking, whoever is next on the A Team please free Niall and I ahahah, and then have a big group discussion on the Takers tactics and analyze their strengths and weaknesses. Get organized.

Takers writers, I was thinking you guys do the same exact thing, sit down in the chapters and go over the A Team's strengths and weakness, and then start to develop the idea of kidnapping Niall for dramatic irony

I just need one more chapter with Niall before the Takers steal him away from me to establish that Riley does in fact have this weird caring for him. So maybe the next few chapters should be child, the teams getting their shit together and ready.. and then the Takers take Niall, and everything goes ham after and all bets are off and shit.

What do you guys think?

@ Carpe Diem !
Should I free Niall? Like with my Fallon chapter? And I might take time to update... marching band is kicking my ass

@GoodGirl;
I think she wanted one more round to write Niall before he gets taken.

I think that could work out. @GoodGirl; can free Niall and @Carpe Diem ! as well as start to move the Takers into travel mode. I can put in the idea of stealing Niall in my chapter, maybe as we find a place to stay in. And then @the_space_between can formulate a solid plan in hers. I'm worried that it might not be enough for the A team to write about though. I think strengths and weaknesses is definitely a good idea to put into a chapter, and I think that the A team should also identify their own strengths and weaknesses to add to their discussion. Does that seem logical? @grl_lk_moi_320

Maybe the takers could go to France next because its close to London and Chantal would definitely have a place there.

@ GoodGirl;
Yes freeing Niall is good! Sorry I saw this and thought I replied but I'm an air head and I didn't actually!!!

@ the_space_between
@ lovelyacoustic
@ grl_lk_moi_320

I regret to inform you guys that Sree is no longer participating this group write and her chapters have been removed from the story.. soo umm.. I have no idea how to fix that, to be honest. Now we're all talking about Fallon and important scenes in Fallon's chapters have been removed, so the story is chopped and makes little sense in parts.

I saw it coming. But it makes me sad. I love this story!!!!:(

@ the_space_between

I love it too, honestly. I understand she got really busy and stuff, but we're kind of screwed for the story line. I'm looking at all options before even suggesting we take it off, because this was my favorite group write.

@ Carpe Diem !
i really don't think anything even remotely making sense unless we completely write her out. which means completely rewriting the story without Fallon. Which I would be down with, that's how much i don't want this to be over.

@ the_space_between
I am okay with a rewrite. I want to know what the other girls think too. But I think a rewrite is definitely in the cards.

I'm definitely up for this! And as sad as I am I kinda saw this coming. At lead now we can figure out an update. I don't know if anyone has thought of a way but we could definitely kill her off easily. I mean it's a spy story... We would just have to figure out how exactly we go forward because her character is pretty important.

i like that idea. someone has to die eventually hahahahah

but at the same time, the character disappeared from the story and we still have the jumbled timeline problem

Would we be terrible people if we opened the role up to someone else? That way we wouldn't have to rewrite anything. We could say that up to her last chapter was Sree and then from the next chapters forward it would be whoever replaces her as the new Fallon story line.

@ lovelyacoustic

The chapters are deleted, which is why I'm stressing that as the main issue. Sree wrote chapters that furthered the plot. Now if you go from chapter to chapter, they are jumbled and do not make much sense sometimes because they lack information that Sree wrote, or jump time in a strange manner.

If we're going to fix this at all, it's going to have to be a rewrite.

If we save all the chapters that we have written and then just rewrite chapters that Sree wrote and repost the story would that work? Then we can either find someone to take over Sree's characters or just kill them off.

@ grl_lk_moi_320
@ lovelyacoustic
@ the_space_between

What do you guys think about taking down the chapters and then reposting them and I'll re-write Fallon's chapters and we can upload them in the correct order again? No one has to change a thing. I've just got to write the chapters we were missing- this may take a little bit- but that way we don't have to go back to the drawing bored or alter the plot line?