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    Oh no yep sorry you're right.

    Your chapter could just be a filler, maybe expand on some Levi/Jules stuff? Or maybe Levi could reminisce on his time at Rosaleigh High (as in my chapter Samara was all 'levi, don't you want to save rosaleigh?' and he was like 'no i had a shit time in high school' or something along those lines. Maybe rehash some memories about Ryan/Jessica/etc? Or maybe Levi tries to find out something about the deal thing that his dad's involved in, and asks Jules if she knows anything?

    I'm coming up blank too Facepalm
    July 22nd, 2013 at 05:39am
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    lmao thanks! I think I got it! :)
    July 22nd, 2013 at 06:16am
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    @ blades @ swell @ daikirai desu.
    yay an update~

    also for the interlude, I was thinking it'd be third person past tense in Viv's pov but never actually saying her name and only calling her 'she'? But I don't know if that's confusing or not...
    July 25th, 2013 at 01:06am
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    alright that was perfect. you wrote Julienne so well.
    July 25th, 2013 at 01:43am
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    oh phew I was a lil worried I wrote her all wrong but thanks gurl! :)
    July 25th, 2013 at 02:18am
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    Nah I think it's good, because then people would be able to differentiate from the flashbacks and the interludes.
    July 25th, 2013 at 03:42am
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    @ blades @ swell @ daikirai desu.
    interlude is up! I made it super short since there's no need for it to be so long.

    I also made up Ryan's last name because I don't remember if we ever gave him one or not.
    July 27th, 2013 at 06:29am
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    Aw, Levi, poor bb. I liked his interaction with Viv, though.
    July 27th, 2013 at 12:40pm
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    @ swell
    hi is there anything I need to do in my chapter to advance the plot at all? I was thinking I'd maybe have Jules go to the site with the company to look at what she's working with and have her get kinda upset about it?

    also how long are we planning on making this thing?
    July 28th, 2013 at 05:35pm
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    @ blades
    I feel like this is where we should've made some sort of outline instead of winging it as we went Facepalm

    That's fine! I haven't thought about my chapter yet so go ahead ~

    And I have no idea. I don't have a set limit of when to finish but if we could move the story a bit quicker then that would be good.
    July 29th, 2013 at 01:35am
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    updated! tell me if you hate it.
    August 5th, 2013 at 06:39pm
  • raja sahara

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    @ blades
    I LOVE IT Cute
    August 5th, 2013 at 09:37pm
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    AW JULES
    I can't help but feel sympathetic but also like "gurl no" tehe
    August 6th, 2013 at 03:13am
  • swell

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    Okay, so I have no idea what to write for my chapter. I was going to include a little thing about Samara talking to her fiancee and then think about Ryan (maybe run into him briefly?), but moving along the plot wise I have no idea Facepalm
    August 11th, 2013 at 11:06am
  • raja sahara

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    @ swell
    I like your idea!

    Are all of the characters on board with trying to stop the construction? If not, then I suppose we move that along. Or I guess keep it the way it is? Maybe some of the characters (ahem, Levi) might take until the end. Or he might be convinced just because his dad is for it and he hates his dad. Maybe Jonathan should come back and be for the destruction thus making Levi for it because he also hates Jonathan.

    Op, I thought of my next chapter and it ain't even my turn yet...
    August 13th, 2013 at 04:40am
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    I think initially it's just Samara trying to push this whole thing along, but at some point I'd like all the characters to be on board by construction time. Not all at the same time, but I think different times could work well. It's kind of hard to write a story where Samara's the only one in the group driving the whole group together, y'know?

    Oooh Jonathan, I likey.
    August 17th, 2013 at 02:04pm
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    @ ore wa homo janai.
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    Updated!
    August 17th, 2013 at 04:09pm
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    @ swell
    AW that was so cute! Jealous Ryan, heyo.
    August 17th, 2013 at 09:48pm
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    @ ore wa homo janai.
    yo bro where you at??
    August 27th, 2013 at 07:21am
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    @ swell
    I'm sorry I haven't updated yet OMG NO!
    I've been organising things for Japan and all that Facepalm
    I'm going to update now, though.

    Which reminds me, from September 27th to October 16th, I won't be on because Japan Thumb up
    August 27th, 2013 at 08:01am