Small Town Group Write

@ yaoi girl.
She's weird.
But I like her.

I can see Samara being rude to Jordan/friend. Like, she won't go out of her way to do it but say if Jordan walks past she might say something to her friend about how weird you two are or something - in the past though. And when she comes back she might apologise for being rude to Jordan and the two become civil.

Unless they want to join forces and make fun of one of the other characters together
All in playful fun.
Until Jordan's friend dies.
DUN DUN DUN
Just kidding.

Maybe Jordan doesn't have to connect to the other characters so much because he's different but idk, does he want to save the town? Is he the one that finds about the endangered fish in the lake that causes the gang to be all, 'yo jordan, you're a cool bean.' and then accept him and stuff?

OH WAIT.

He's a fashion designer. He can make clothes for everyone ~

EDIT: OH
Figure out what happens in the last night woman.

If you're stuck on ideas, I had a passing thought that maybe him and his friend get into a fight? And then when he comes home he isn't aware that she died a year or two ago or something? Or he did know but he didn't want to go back because of all the things he said to her that night?

@ grow a pair
LOOK.
PAGE FIVE.


Oh, yes.
I think Jordie and Viv (that's what I've named the Spider Queen ) are the type that just attract hate. Like, Jordie can't handle it, and Viv feeds off it.

They make a good pair

YES.
OMG.
HE CAN BE THE ONE WHO'S ALL LIKE.
"Oh, the town's being shut down? Hush you yappers as I holler at muh GaGa. If she aint available I'mma call my slutty buddy Nicki. This shit'll be fiiyine."

Because he's fabulous.

@ grow a pair
But...
I don't want them to fight ;------;
They're besties for lifies.

Maybe instead of getting into a fight, Jordie's all like, yo, Viv muh bitch, you gon swing baaayah (by).

And on the way she dies.

@ yaoi girl.
Is he gay or just fabulous?
Actually I've been wondering about his sexuality for a while. But I didn't want to ask in case you got offended or something

OKAY WAIT
They're best friends for life
But then she dies as well on the night?
I don't think she should die as well on 'the last night', since the focus is more on this other girl than Viv.

@ grow a pair
He's pansexual
SO THERE COULD BE FABULOUS MOMENTS AND MANLY MOMENTS.

Foine >.>
I'll include her.
I shall just try my hardest to not make her the attention whore in muh chapters

@ yaoi girl.
Hahahahaha, okay. Sounds good.

I'm glad we were finally able to reach a decision about Jordan in the two pages we wasted.
I mean, sorted through our creative minds.

Oh wait. So Jordan has no drama on the night. Is that it?
Unless he shows up in some like, fabulous Jordan Suzuki original with Viv and some assholes strip him down and burn his clothes. And they call him a faggot and other highly insulting names.
And some of our characters see it but we don't do anything about it?
WE ARE HORRIBLE
GOD what is wrong with me.

@ grow a pair
MY MIND IS OVERFLOWING WITH SEXUAL FANTASIES ABOUT CROSSDRESSERS

GODFUCKINGDAMMIT BRAIN.
JUST ONE NIGHT OF NORMALITY.
PLS. ;-;

@ yaoi girl.
Wait did you see my edited bit?
As in the bit at the end I just added on?
I feel like something has to happen with Jordan on the last night, even if it's minor but it just feels like he's the lone wolf you know? Even if Samara gets into a fight with Viv and Jordan freaks out b/c of people around.
OMG CAN THIS HAPPEN

@ yaoi girl. @ grow a pair
Hey y'all. So Jordan's friend is a girl an she does, right? And I think it's a cool idea if Jordan writes everything that happened, so it's cause major tension between him and the rest of them. Is Jordan like the loner?

Also, I can make a layout if no one else wants to do it. Also, I think this story would sound cool in first person, present tense? I'm starting to really like writing like that but I can do either first or third, whichever tense.

Wow I didn't see a page 5

Okay so Viv is NOT the victim?

And for Jordan and Levi, I think they should just be like 'eh' around each other. Like they're acquaintances. But I don't know if you want anything different than that. Levi is just an angsty boy, so make whatever you want with that for the present.

@ yaoi girl. @ grow a pair @ pelican park.
I was under the impression that Viv was the victim too, haha. I must not have read closely enough. I do think that it'd be cool if she was though.... but obviously not my choice haha

yaoi, what were you thinking for Jordan's relationship with Julienne? should they kind of work together in solving the mystery, since Julienne feels responsible for not doing something when she saw the couple fighting?

so like for clarification, no one knows she was in the cave, but they figure that out with time?

@ blades
I agree. I think it'd be awesome if Viv was the victim (poor Jordan tho), but yeah, it ain't my choice.

@ pelican park.
@ blades

I wanted Viv to be the victim as well but I don't THINK she is - yaoi will have to clarify though.

Jordan is the loner.

Yeah, because how could they have known she was in the cave? I guess the only way they'd find out is if someone went swimming in the cave and say, found a bracelet lodged between two rocks or something that even the water couldn't wash away. Or in a nearby branch or something and that's when they realise she probably hid in the cave because nobody could see her.

@ grow a pair @ blades @ yaoi girl.

I like that bracelet thing. Or maybe it could be her ID that's found buried in the sand of the shoreline or something? I don't know, but either way, it'd be good to have something for everyone to know that it was her.

Okay, one thing that I'm looking at in the character's list, is that Samara and Levi are eerily alike in that they're ALSO both best friends with Ryan. I feel like they are basically the same person just different gender now that I look at it. Could we tweak a couple things just to make them a little more different?

And have we decided on POV/tense of each chapter? I suggested first person present tense (excluding interludes). Does anyone else have a suggestion for it?

@ pelican park.
I'm not opposed to the ID idea but how does one leave their ID in a cave? Unless she say, bought some alcohol with a fake ID but her pic and instead of bringing her wallet she just shoved it down her bra?
Does anyone do that, btw, put their phones/other in their bra or is just me on occasion..

Yeah, that's fine.
I think the main difference is that Levi can't seem to find his place yet Samara has a clear plan of what she wants to do with her life. Her main intention, really, is to get out of Rosaleigh so she's the overachiever type - doing what she can, committed to school/work/extra-curriculars to get herself out. I think, for the most part, Samara has a reputation to uphold so around the adults she is seen as this hard-working student but around her peers, people think she can be a suck-up/teacher's pet/bossy?

First person present is good with me.

Oh! Posting order, anyone have a preference for where they'd like to be? I don't mind, so.

AND Viv is the dead girl. Apparently I can't understand english

@ blades @ grow a pair @ pelican park.
I actually meant that Viv was the victim that dies

SO YAY.
THAT'S HOW JORDIE BECOMES A HERMIT.

WHOO.


Regarding Jordan and Julienne, I think whatever you want to go with
Or maybe they were childhood friends back when Jordie was all for people, but they drifted apart?

There could be blood stains in the cave as well, maybe?

@ grow a pair
Well, if she drowned, maybe her things were washed away? Like if she had a purse, the contents of her purse could've emptied and washed up to the shore? Or if she had it in her pocket or something? She did drown, right...?

Is she like the Hermione in school? Always has her hand up when a question is asked, etc? And Levi doesn't have a place in the world, but he, as well, knows he doesn't want to stay in Rosaleigh anymore, mostly because of reputation as Jonathan's little brother. And because of Ryan. But I guess I can see that, but the fact that they're both best friends with Ryan is just weird. Like, then why aren't they closer because of their mutual relationship with Ryan?

I don't care about the posting order as long as I'm not first lol.

Oh, okay! I like that :)

@ yaoi girl.
I apologise regarding my stupidity

Does that mean when Viv fights off the guy, she literally fights him?
I imagine Viv to be quite feisty if she's killing ants and cooking them or whatever you said.

@ yaoi girl.
Did you have anything in mind for Jordan and Levi?