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    Hi, I'm Alex Cute

    I haven't written for Lou in so long but I'm excited to get my Louis feels out there. I have two ideas for my plot, but I wasn't sure if this is supposed to be a fun upbeat story or like a general sad things can happen too, type of story? (if that makes any sense Facepalm)
    July 12th, 2013 at 12:21pm
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    Hi, I'm Bex.

    Well it will be light hearted fun in the sense that it is girls on a road trip and getting up to things- but if you want to add an element of sadness, then please do- I like a change in emotions and pace. What ideas were they anyway? tehe
    July 12th, 2013 at 12:45pm
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    @ antidote.
    Okay, so the idea I'm more keen on is that Louis is with El, and my girl pursues him in spite of this. At first it's innocent flirting and Louis knows nothing can ever become of it because he has a girlfriend, but then he becomes more interested in my girl and they begin a sexual relationship (but she has to keep it secret from the girls because originally Louis was off limits or something?) And I'm thinking that Louis falls for her, but then my girl realises how slaggy she's being and has to end it. And even though Louis breaks up with his girl, my girl can't help but think that he might do it to her if he was so willing to do it to his girl. So they just remain civil towards each other, because what else can they be, haha.

    Or my girl could fall for him but they both realise the error of their ways as Eleanor comes to visit the boys and Louis has to juggle both girls, so perhaps they're both 'heartbroken' in a way. Like, my girl might have fallen for him and Louis, I guess, enjoyed the sexual intimacy he lacks from El because they're apart and then they realise how selfish they are. And they end by being civil to each other and Louis tells Eleanor but she decides to stay with him and they work on their relationship and my girl gets some life lesson.

    My other idea I've completely forgotten in the excitement of writing this idea down Facepalm I can try to make it a happy ending, but I don't know if I can split Louis and Eleanor up just because ily them together <3
    July 12th, 2013 at 12:54pm
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    I think having all the girls end up with the guys would be boring so the fact your girl and Louis don't work out is actually a really good idea! I think she should pursue a sexual relationship with him because well the girls aren't there to fall in love themselves and are playing with the guys hearts so perhaps she gets out when she realises she is falling for him!

    I think with Harry and my girl, they're both confident party animals with bad reputations so my girl thinks she would never fall for a guy who is too much like her and so thinks it will be a walk in the park- however she falls hard and so does he. I was thinking when the secret is revealed that the girls were doing It all for fun Harry and her will split. But I can picture this scene where a couple of months later when she's at university or wherever, Harry turns up with a bouquet of flowers and that gorgeous smile. tehe
    July 12th, 2013 at 01:50pm
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    @ swell

    Hiii. I'm Becca Cute

    GAH. SO MANY IDEAS. So excuse me if I just start rambling...

    Have we decided how the girls are going to get "in" with the guys?
    I have (kind of) an idea?

    • maybe one of the girls can be one of the band mates (like Josh Devine's) step sister? And it basically just starts out as a road trip, but when Josh finds out they're in the states he pressures her to visit. (It's kind if a rough idea, but just a thought)

    Also, I love the idea of it being lighthearted and them being troublemakers. (:

    I have started working on a character profile. I'll post that up a little later.

    As far as Niall and my girls relationship (her name will be Genevieve, but Evie for short) I kind of like the idea that Niall is really on and off with that girl Zoe Whelan and when Evie and the girls come along he just cuts all ties with Zoe? Im still thinking on this as well. Facepalm I do have an idea but its kind of out there. I was thinking Evie is this really serious student, but when she meets Niall they fall like...head over heels and they elope after just a few weeks? I don't know...it would just be a really dramatic plot twist?

    Phew. Thoughts?
    July 12th, 2013 at 01:58pm
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    @ antidote.
    Oh, I forgot that there'd be that 'this wasn't meant to be serious' reveal thingy. I'm not sure whether Louis/my gal's relationship will be affected too much by that, because I haven't decided whether Louis will have any emotional ties towards her just yet.

    I like your idea, and my gal will defs have the sexual relationship, but I do want Eleanor to be a factor in my girl's thought process. Like at first because El lives in England and they're touring America or whatever my girl kind of brushes their relationship off, but once El visits, she's kind of like, 'oh wait. I'm sort of a homewrecker,' and the pair break it off. But I'm thinking there could be a moment when she's thinking about Louis after and she realises she was starting to fall for him, and so she's glad she broke it off but a part of her wonders what they could have been.

    That moment with Harry would be so cute, SHUCKS HARRY YOU CUTIE PIE.

    I'll have a character bio up soon, but I imagined my girl to be the type of girl who thinks in the moment and doesn't think of the consequences. She's not a serious type of girl, and she has a lot of growing up to do - and I think, with her thingy with Louis and with the girls as well, she grows up a lot and maybe finds herself a bit as well.
    July 12th, 2013 at 02:07pm
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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    Hey!

    I DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT ZOE WHELAN WHAT IS THIS OMG
    W O W she is hot ~~ GO NIALL, what a step up from the other girls he was into (no offence, they were beautiful but this chick is proper hot)

    Woah, eloping. That is out there, hmm. How would it end? Would they divorce and still be together? Or driven apart by the management? Or stay together? I like the first idea, though. Apparently him and Zoe have broken up because of their management, and he cut all ties with her or something.
    July 12th, 2013 at 02:16pm
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    Hey! (:

    I didn't much care for Zoe (she miraculously signed on to become a model four days after they were caught hanging out) and they've already broken up.

    What I was thinking was as they're sitting there waiting to go in (to the courthouse, chapel, etc.) Evie feels suuuuper guilty? And so she spills her guys and tells him EVERYTHING, and he agrees (reluctantly of course) to keep the secret of the pact.

    And he's all "was it real for you?"

    "Yes..."

    "Was that in the plans?"

    "No. That was rule number one. Don't fall for anyone."

    And so he marries her anyways? But they keep it a secret, from everyone.

    Still a rough idea Facepalm
    July 12th, 2013 at 02:22pm
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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    I feel like it would be a risky idea but if you execute it well, then it could be really good.
    Also that courthouse thing sounds really cute so I'm quietly rooting for this idea tehe
    I can imagine Niall being swept up in the love thing and that, and him doing it but those two would have to fall super hard, like wow.

    Bambi Preston - named after the Disney movie because her parents are Disney fanatics.

    (My old science teacher and her husband are actually huge Disney fans, and they have all these rare collectibles of Disney stuff around their house. Her husband worked on the animation for Finding Nemo and now they've moved to LA but this is like a little throwback to her because she helped me understand chemistry even though I dropped the subject after a semester Facepalm) I don't know why I decided to share this but lol, yeah.

    Age: 19
    Personality: She's the kind of girl who doesn't think, just does. She follows her gut feeling 100% of the time and isn't the type of girl to stew things over. She's strong willed and can be pushy at times.

    EDIT:Bambi is studying to be a personal trainer. I'm not sure what course you have to do, but I guess 'Bachelor in Physical Education?' She's in her second year.
    July 12th, 2013 at 02:46pm
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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    @ swell

    I was so thinking of having someone with ties to the band as well- Josh is the drummer, right? I love the idea of one of the girls being related-- He could either get them backstage passes to the concert or they show up at some nightclub the guys are at, whichever way you want the first meetings to go!

    I'm actually loving the idea of eloping with Evie and Niall tehe I can see the girls finding out down the line and going crazy on her arse! I can see Evie being the voice of reason compared to say our two girls who are reckless and always do before thinking.

    I think if your girl and Louis aren't emotionally tied (well until later on when she realises that maybe she did have feelings for him) then she could walk away and be the only one who stuck to the pact- it was only fun to her! I like the idea having El play a big part and I don't blame you, Louis and her are so cute together Cute

    With my girl and Harry, it will be fun at first, like cute can't keep hands off each other because with Matched I made Harry to be an arse and this time I'd love to bring out him as an old secret romantic Cute He will fall for her and it will probably work out that the night he will tell her that he loves her, is when he finds out about the pact-- perhaps Niall let's it slip or something.

    I'm just trying to find a picture and a name for my girl and I'll have my character profile up!

    We're now just waiting on Marissa to comment and I still need to find a writer for Zayn. I think I'll advertise the spot on a blog and on the thread where you request a co-author. Unless we just leave him out of it (obviously he'll still be in the story I mean out of the group of girls) and leave him with Perri? I don't mind either way.

    I shall start adding the character profiles onto the reserved space to refer back to.
    July 12th, 2013 at 04:04pm
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    Hello everyone Cute you guys have been so chatty!
    July 12th, 2013 at 04:09pm
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    @ antidote.
    That could work! Although if she's the only one who stuck to the pact, I don't think she'll be feeling happy about it, like it'll be like, 'oh, I stuck to the pact.' Like she wanted to stick to it because she didn't want to fall for Louis, but she kind of did because she wanted them to be together even though she knew it couldn't happen, sort of thing.

    EL IS SO GORGEOUS omg I just love the two together. If I ever meet either of them in person, I'd probably fangirl on how much I love them ahahahahahah

    I feel like irl Harry is this big romantical kind of guy so I'm already excited to see that play out Cute

    If you don't find anyone, maybe Zayn doesn't need to have a role? He can be chilling with Perrie and do his own thing, or we could involve him in our story plot every once in a while so he's not left out sort of thing.
    July 12th, 2013 at 04:17pm
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    @ luminos.
    I'm going to go to sleep soon so I'll be gone XD
    July 12th, 2013 at 04:18pm
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    @ Anchor and Hope.

    What do you, Becca and Marissa, feel about the situation with Zayn? Should I find someone for the part of leave him with Perrie and just have him as a side part in the story? Like he will be involved because he is a big part of the band, it'll just be that he doesn't get involved with any of the girls.

    Perhaps in her heart she knows the pact on her part was broken but she acts cold about the situation and plays it off to the others as 'just some harmless fun' so they believe it, but deep down she fell for him. She's just a bit sour about it because all she can think about is what could have happened if things had of worked out. That's just an idea tehe

    El is beautiful, it's actually depressing Facepalm And her and Louis are just perfect for each other, by just looking at them together I know they are.

    Yeah, like I read this article once where one of his friends from home said he was an old romantic and loved the idea of love, but he doesn't come across that way in the press because he is only young at the moment-- which I think is completely agreeable. So I thought I would embrace that and give him that 'Don't judge a book' thing going on.
    July 12th, 2013 at 04:40pm
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    @ antidote.
    Oh yeah, I don't see my girl telling her real feelings to the girls straight out, or at least straight away. Like she'll tell them eventually but not after they sit down and discuss the pact or whatever.

    I feel like, when we start writing this, people are going to be like 'yeah Bambi and Lou!' but I'll just be evilly laughing in the corner because that is so not the case at all, hahaha.

    AW HARRY. I love media Harry. Actually, I love every side of Harry, what am I saying.
    July 12th, 2013 at 04:52pm
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    @ antidote.
    Girl, why didn't you tell me Zayn was open? You know I'm always down to help a sista out.
    July 12th, 2013 at 04:55pm