The Most Awesome One Direction Group Write Ever

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    It is a bit short and I can add more if needed. I literally just wrote this at 2 am
    Logahn sat in the back of the black SUV not able to sit still. She finally was getting to the house to spend time with her girls and One Direction before the tour. She was already two days late due to a family matter and she was just ready to let go and be her loud, hyper self, hoping that there wasnt too much drama going on when she got to the house.

    When Logahn walked through the door, she was expecting to only have missed two days of bonding and some playful banter but, wasn’t expecting to walk into a mini crisis. Cam had to leave due to her grandfather dying. Of course, it was understandable but what did it mean for Starstruck?

    Logahn barely had time to even talk to One Direction before she was pulled into a meeting with her band minus Cam.

    “Management is coming to talk to us,” Izzy said, unsure what it truly meant.

    “You don’t think that they would call off the tour, do you?” Caitlin said, looking over to Amelia and Logahn.

    Logahn just sighed and ran a hand through her light brown hair. “They can’t just call off the tour because of a family emergency.”

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    By the end of the day, their tour manger, Taylor showed up to discuss their situation. It started out as small talk and how everything was going in the house before he really got down to business. His face held a seriousness that truly bothered Logahn. She was anything but serious and now she was afraid of what would come out of his mouth. Logahn knew that it could be anything from Cam coming back in a few days to postponing the tour until further notice but she didn’t expect what truly came out of Taylor’s mouth.

    “Cam has decided not to come back.”

    Logahn, for once in her life, was silent. She didn’t know how to take this or if it meant the end of Starstruck. Taylor went on about how she decided to stay close to home and go to university which she had always talked about going back to school but Logahn never thought she would actually do it. Not when they were about to open for One Direction.

    “So, what does this mean for us?” Caitlin said, breaking the thick tension that hung in the air. It was the question that they were all wondering but didn’t know if they wanted the answer.

    “The record company agreed that if you can carry on as a four piece girl group, then you can stay on the tour with One Direction. While you adjust, the company is going to try to keep the media out of it. So, just keep it on the down low until the tour starts, ” and with that Taylor left leaving the girls to allow relief and excitement to set in.

    Logahn literally thought she was going to bounce out of her seat with excitement. Of course, being in the group without Cam meant that it was going to be a lot more work taking on her responsibilities in the group but Logahn didn’t even worry about that.

    After the minor crisis that accompanied Logahn’s arrival, Logahn took the liberty of exploring the house. She was glad to see that there was a pool and other things to keep them busy for awhile.

    After her exploration, Logahn went into the living room to see Caitlin, Harry, and Niall watching some show on the television.

    “Okay, I have been here for like three hours and I am already bored,” she said, dramatically plopping on the couch with a sigh.

    Caitlin rolled her eyes lightly. “Logahn, you’re always bored. What do you suggest we do? We can’t just go anywhere we want.”

    Logahn sighed again, knowing Caitlin was right. “I know this, Caitlin but am I seriously the only one bored?”

    “It is kinda getting boring around her,” Harry said nonchalantly znd Niall nodded in agreement.

    “Then what should we do?” Caitlin asked before flipping to some music video.

    “We could go on a hike,” Izzy said, walking in the room.

    Logahn nodded, sitting up. “I think that sounds fun. If everyone is down for it, then let’s get out of this damn house.”
    June 16th, 2014 at 10:08am
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    Oh, that's great and straight to the point! I love it! Except maybe change it so Louis is the one to suggest the hike, because I don't think Isabelle would XD , and it would also be brought up into the argument later when they 'split' during the hike. He could be all like, "it was MY idea, so I say this and that! blah blah"
    June 16th, 2014 at 06:01pm
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    Alright sounds good. :P I'll change that
    June 16th, 2014 at 07:28pm
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    The chapter looks great. Maybe vocalise the whole "Cam had to leave" bit? Because at the moment it seems just thrown in to me, and if you had Logahn walk into the house and maybe Caitlin or Izzy rushes up to her and is frantic with "We have a crisis! Cam's had to go home because her grandfather's dead!" and then the other comes up and says “Management is coming to talk to us"?
    June 22nd, 2014 at 11:16pm
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    Sounds good. I'll change it when I get to my laptop and then post by tomorrow
    June 25th, 2014 at 08:43pm
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    So...who's next?
    July 17th, 2014 at 01:17am
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    Well we skipped over Marissa, because she's been inactive and Ema is the last one in the posting order, so it's back to you and then me! Cute
    July 17th, 2014 at 07:27am
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    Okay. I'll combine what was supposed to happen in Marissa's chapter, excluding the connecting with Harry part, with what was supposed to happen in mine, so the packing, travelling, tiff and the splitting of the groups while hiking.
    July 22nd, 2014 at 12:51am
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    How are things going?
    August 21st, 2014 at 03:02am
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    My chapter. I wasn't sure who was getting lost overnight which is why my chapter ends where it does. I can add more if you guys want, all I need are the names of which girls are getting lost with Louis and Harry overnight.
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    Combing her hair, Caitlin wondered what it would have been like to go to university. Her mother would have been thrilled if she had chosen that path and, if she were being honest, would probably still be thrilled if she did what Cam did and dropped from the group to get a degree. Of course she couldn't blame Cam for leaving, after all a death is a serious thing, but she couldn't have picked a worse time to decide to pursue a degree. They were about to go on tour! She had taken them down to a four member group and that was going to cause some problems when it came to filling in for her.

    She was pulled from her thoughts by a knock on her door. "Are you ready yet?" Louis called.

    "Give me a minute," she replied, looking back at the mirror. This hike was not the best idea ever but clearly it was an idea by one of the guys, considering she would have never suggested it and highly doubted that any of the other girls would suggest a hike for something to do when they were supposed to be getting to know each other.

    After a few more minutes of debating how to put her hair up, she ended up with a loose ponytail. She stood and grabbed her bag, pulling a face as she exited her room and went downstairs to find everyone except for Izzy congregated by the front door. "About time," Harry said sarcastically.

    "I want you to know that I resent being outvoted about this hike." It wasn't that she disliked the outdoors, but rather it was the fact that she was currently on her period and disliked climbing out of bed on occasions due to the cramps. But apparently the fresh air will "do her good", or whatever that was supposed to mean. "Where's Izzy?"

    "I'm here!" she replied, making Caitlin look back to the stairs where her friend was currently standing. "I had to make sure I have bug spray and hairspray because you never know how humid it's going to be." There was a mumbled comment by one of the boys but it was brushed off and they set off out of the house and into the outdoors. Thankfully she had remembered a watch to make sure they weren't out for too long.

    After over an hour of trekking by Harry's directions, Izzy called for a break and found a rock to sit on while she pulled out her compact mirror. "My hair is ruined," she complained, drawing Caitlin's attention.

    "I have some water you can use?" she offered, pulling her bag off. Izzy nodded and she passed her the water which she proceeded to soak her hand with before combing through her hair, attempting to tame it. She also gave Izzy a hairband after seeing her friend frantically look for one in her pockets.

    As she was tightening her ponytail, a groan came from where the others were stood. "This is a bloody hike, not a salon," Louis snapped, irritated by their timewasting.

    "Well sorry, but I actually care about how I look," Izzy shot back, jumping up with a squeal moments later. "Oh my god, there's a spider!"

    Before Louis could open his mouth, Zayn stepped forward, picked the spider up and took it away to another place. He returned a moment later, spider-free. "There you go, it's all gone," he assured Izzy, who was currently several feet away from the rock she was just sat on.

    "That was awfully nice of you," Caitlin said, flashing him a smile. Izzy nudged her before they all set off again, walking further away from the house. As Harry had decided to give up leading in favour of talking with Amelia, the group was now being led by Louis who wouldn't show anyone the directions. None of them knew where they were exactly going but what they did know was that their destination was supposed to be a lake. Every five minutes or so Caitlin would check her watch, anxious as the time kept passing by and all they got from Louis was an annoyed "I know what I'm doing" and silence.

    After another hour of walking without finding anything, she'd had enough. "I am not going anywhere unless I see those directions," she said, stopping in her place and making everyone stop and look at her.

    "I know what I'm doing," Louis retorted, looking back at the directions and frowning.

    Amelia piped up. "I don't think you do. It was supposed to take us a little under an hour to reach our destination and it's safe to say that we've been out a lot longer than an hour without a glimpse of it in sight."

    Caitlin leaned against a rock and folded her arms. She was happy to see that it wasn't just her who was doubtful about Louis' directions. However, none of the guys seemed willing to accept that their friend could have gotten them lost. "I'm sure we're going to get there soon," Liam reasoned, looking between the girls. "It's not that hard to read some directions."

    "He's right," Niall agreed, "we can't be lost."

    That made Logahn speak up. "We can't be lost? Who says? Clearly we're not on the right path." She gestured around, emphasising the fact that they were nowhere near to a lake or any body of water that wasn't contained without their bottles.

    "And how would you know?" Harry snapped back.

    "If it wasn't for your friend and her constant whining, maybe we would be there by now," Louis said, pointing at Izzy.

    Outraged, she placed her hands on her hips. "Excuse me, but how is this my fault?"

    Amelia pointed at Louis. "Don't you go blaming my friend. This is all your fault. You got us lost because you couldn't admit that you didn't know where we were going," she accused.

    Harry raised his hands in the surrender defence. "Woah there, don't go blaming Louis. Maybe if your friends weren't so obsessed with how they looked we could have spent more time looking over the path to the lake before we got going," he said, looking at Caitlin and Izzy. Clearly these boys did not like getting blamed for something that was their fault.

    For a moment there was silence as the words sunk in. No one wanted to be the one who said the next word and no one looked like they were going to continue with the hike. But Caitlin's feet were hurting and she really needed a toilet. "You know what? I'm done. I'm going to go back to the house, soak my feet and then look at my self in the mirror and be proud of the fact that my appearance made the mighty Louis Tomlinson unable to read some directions," she said, turning around and walking away.

    A moment later she was joined by Zayn. "I couldn't let you make your way alone," he explained.

    "I'm not like your friend. I can make my own way without getting lost."

    He shrugged. "Maybe so, but I also don't want to stay around with the others. A hike sounded good but maybe we should all stick with music next time."
    August 22nd, 2014 at 03:57am
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    OMG, I love that! I couldn't stop smiling! tehe you did amazing with Izzy, hahaha.

    Um, it was Caitlin, Zayn, Izzy, and Niall that were together. Harry, Loghan, and Amelia was supposed to have a "love triangle" or something so I know that they were together, and Louis and Liam can be with them and they get into their own argument where Louis and Loghan compete for leadership?

    Wait.. Did we talk about who Liam ends up with? Or was he gonna go back to an old girlfriend?
    August 22nd, 2014 at 04:18am
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    I loved it. It was amazingly perfect.

    And iy is Amelua Harry Lou Logahn and Liam together.

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    Liam ends up with Logahn
    August 24th, 2014 at 03:53am
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    OH, OK. OMG, I WAS SO CONFUSED FOR A SECOND. Louis and Loghan have similiar personalities, ok. Does Louis end up with his old girlfriend, or is he already in a relationship? Or we could just keep him in a relationship but not name names, meaning that we'll just mention him on the phone with his girlfriend, or whatever?
    August 24th, 2014 at 04:17am
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    That works lol.
    August 24th, 2014 at 04:49am
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    I posted my chapter. If Marissa continues to be inactive, we could have Amelia get into an accident on tour after a few shows and ends up having to pull out from the rest?
    August 25th, 2014 at 01:19am
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    Crap, this might get harder with our main idea... If Marissa continues to be inactive, can we just write her as a character in the background? It just feels like it's changing a lot of stuff with two writers gone, should we brainstorm a bit more? Just so we don't run into major dump, and maybe put more life into the story? Does that make sense? lol
    August 25th, 2014 at 05:50am
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    Makes perfect sense to me. We can write her as a bg character and brainstorm around her.

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    August 29th, 2014 at 01:36am
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    Her being a background character is fine, although I think we should just keep that she's from Canada and her name and change everything else so that we're not using Marissa's character without her permission. Also I agree with needing to brainstorm.
    September 9th, 2014 at 10:40pm
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    OK, so far we have an ex boyfriend in a rival band, and a small love triangle for drama.
    Izzy loses her voice from straining too much, it could be because she's trying to prove herself (like I've mentioned before), and because they've lost a member. And since the girls are touring with one direction they'll for sure gain a lot more attention, and rumors could be starting how they're breaking up when they notice that there is now 4 girls instead of 5.

    And that's all that I can come up with at the moment. XD
    September 10th, 2014 at 12:55am
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    Well I think that's good. We just need to redo our outline I think
    September 10th, 2014 at 01:20am