The Most Awesome One Direction Group Write Ever

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    OK, we'll work on that. Do you have any ideas? Cute
    September 10th, 2014 at 01:27am
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    I think that the next chapter needs to be maybe back at the house and recollection. I say we do your chapter and one more set in the house. I don't know if we still want to do Logahn and Harry's thing before tour or right after it starts.
    September 10th, 2014 at 01:36am
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    OK, I'll work on it tonight!

    What else should happen on the tour?
    September 10th, 2014 at 01:41am
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    Um some banters I know for sure, maybe the girls could make a pact to not date the guys, and idk I'm blocked atm
    September 10th, 2014 at 01:44am
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    Perhaps there are rumours going around that one of the members is being a bit too domineering which is why they're a member short? And then maybe we could have a tiff between two or three of the girls near the end of the tour which the media catches wind of and the next day an article is published with the line "Has Starstruck Lost Its Flame?" and goes on to talk about the bickering, referencing back to the group being reduced down to a foursome and probing fan speculation that [member] is no longer in it for fun but rather the money.

    With the rival group, were we having a "surprise guest" in the tour with them being it? I just remember a mention of an ex boyfriend which is Caitlin's, but I wasn't sure whether they'd be joining the tour for a few dates or not. It'd be interesting if they did.
    September 10th, 2014 at 03:37am
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    I think that sounds good and a surprise guest sounds good
    September 10th, 2014 at 03:38am
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    How is your chapter coming along?
    September 25th, 2014 at 01:01am
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    It was incredibly boring... Facepalm So I'm rewriting it.
    Do either of you want me to add anything in?

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    September 26th, 2014 at 06:57pm
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    Not off hand. I'll let you know if I think of anything
    September 26th, 2014 at 07:43pm
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    Not really. But as it's the chapter following the failed hike, arguments are sure to break out over silly things because of the tension.
    September 27th, 2014 at 02:41pm
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    Hi, just checking in with you guys. I want to apologize for not updating, I've been super busy this month. And I've been travelling a lot lately!
    October 16th, 2014 at 09:51am
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    Its cool. My internet is down and all my chapters that I had written or almost done are ony desktop. I guess I should go back to writing on my phone....
    October 16th, 2014 at 06:02pm
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    It's fine. I just don't want really long gaps between each chapter because I know that it normally leads to complete inactivity and I don't want that happening to this story.
    October 16th, 2014 at 07:25pm
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    Hello, was just wondering how your chapter is coming along?
    November 10th, 2014 at 08:51pm
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    AH, sorry. I don't know why but I didn't get this. I really need to subscribe to my group writes *does so*
    annnd, it's alright, I guess? :/ I tried. But take a look, and tell me what you think!
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    “Why did I even agree to go on this stupid hike?” Izzy grumbled to herself, swatting a buzzing fly away from her ear. She loved to look at the pretty scenery, but that was it. Isabelle wasn’t the outdoorsy person—though, sometimes she wished she was. With a huff she pulled her bag off, and looked through it for her bug spray. She cursed; she forgot that she gave it to one of the girls a while ago.

    “Cait!” She called to the brunette ahead of her. Caitlin answered back with a ‘yeah?’

    “I didn’t give you the bug spray by any chance, did I?” Isabelle asked, silently hoping she did give it to her friend as she slapped her leg.

    “No, hun, you didn’t.”

    “Ugh, ok…” She grumbled, damn it. Someone cleared their throat to her left, catching her attention. It was only then she remembered that she was with two members of One Direction. Her pulsed raced when she turned to see Zayn—looking beautiful as ever—holding out bug repellent.

    She cheered, “Yes! Thank you so much.”

    He smiled and said, “You’re welcome,” with his accented voice. She tried to calm herself down at the fact that Zayn was walking beside her. Stop being a fan girl, Izzy! She felt his eyes on her as she sprayed the repellent on herself. “You know… I read somewhere that hairspray attracts flies.”

    She copied his action from earlier and cleared her throat, thinking over the information he fed her. Biting her lip, she assessed Zayn, and saw that his hair looked free of hair products.

    “Damn it,” she said with a small groan, earning a soft chuckle from the male. “I guess that explains why I have the most flies around me. I thought I had a banana peel hanging off of me somewhere, which isn’t possible since I didn’t go near a banana today.”

    “Even if you did have a banana peel around you, it’d probably be Harry’s fault.”

    She laughed, holding out the bottle for him to take. “Thanks, again.”

    A few steps ahead of her—behind Caitlin—was Niall who seemed to be lost in his thoughts. Izzy frowned, that was the quietest he’s been these couple of days. Crap, I probably ruined the hike for both Zayn and Niall. She thought to herself, her shoulders slumping.

    Well, it wasn’t mostly her fault, Izzy pursed her lips in thought, she wasn’t sure but all the girls thought that Louis was lost, and Lohgan would have gotten into an argument with him because of that. Still, she needed to learn how to ‘suck it up’ and continue with whatever. Louis was right, she was constantly whining.

    She sighed, rolling her eyes. “Um…” She started, loud enough to gain both of Caitlin and Niall’s attention. “I just wanna apologize for what happened back there, and for being such a complete “girl”. I didn’t mean to make the hike shit, it was supposed to be fun and…”

    “Nah, me knee was acting up a bit!” Niall waved off her apology and grinned, his eyes covered by his black ray bans.

    She breathed out, and gave a short laugh. “OK, as long as I didn’t completely ruin the hike. I’m honestly glad we’re going back because I really need to pee.”

    They all laughed when Caitlin jumped in with a 'me too!'.

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    An hour later, Isabelle was in comfier clothes and was searching through Netflix curled up in a thin blanket, while Caitlin was upstairs soaking her feet, and Niall making sandwiches. She wasn’t sure where Zayn was. Isabelle dropped the remote and picked up her phone which beeped with a text message.

    IZZY, distract me please : ( !!

    Isabelle frowned, while the girls were here with One Direction, her ex bandmate was back home with family for the funeral. She wished that she was there. She wished that they all would be there for Cam on the tough day, but their days to get to know One Direction was limited before the tour starts. So taking a couple of days off was out of the question.

    Breathing out slowly, she typed back a reply. We just got back from a hike :/ which was a bad idea!! We all got lost and argued, and now Niall is making me a sandwich :p

    When they got back she loudly mentioned that Netflix calls her name, and that anyone could join, Niall immediately offered to make sandwiches, which got Izzy excited and nervous at the same time. So after basically fangirling internally, she smiled and said that it sounded like a plan.

    “Oh my God!” Izzy heard Caitlin exclaim, furrowing her brows she paused to listen, setting her phone down beside her. “Logahn, why are you limping?”

    Her eyes widened, and scrambled up from her spot just as Niall walked into the room a plate full of sandwiches, and two water bottles for them both. Izzy helped him place them on the coffee table, and grabbed her phone before they both ran to the foyer. There Logahn was grumbling, slowly making her way to the stairs with Liam who had her arm over his shoulders. Louis was shaking his head, Amelia sighed dropping her bag on the floor, and Harry ruffled his hair as he closed the door behind them.

    “What happened?” Caitlin asked as she worriedly watched both Liam and Logahn make their way up the stairs.

    Louis was the one who answered, “She fell.”

    Izzy rolled her eyes, hands on hips, “How did she fall?”

    “Louis tripped me!” Logahn yelled causing heads to snap at Louis who sputtered uncrossing his arms and yelled ‘I did not!’ back.

    “He kicked a rock… Logahn stepped on it and…” Amelia sighed gesturing to the stairs.

    “Oh jeez,” Izzy mumbled and texted another reply to Camila; Louis kicked a rock and Loghan tripped on it! -_- annd now she’s limping.

    After telling Niall to pick a movie and that she’ll be right back, she followed after Caitlin and Amelia to check on Logahn. Who basically grumbled that she’s fine and just needed ice for her knee.

    Isabelle shook her head, what a day and it’s not even 6PM! She hoped that Niall saved her a sandwich as they all made their way back down to watch a movie.

    When Niall saw Logahn put an ice pack on her knee, he shouted in delight. “Ay! We’re matching!”
    It's a lot shorter than my last chapter at 1075 words. I used a prompt for the second part!Prompt: "How did she fall?"
    November 17th, 2014 at 03:16pm
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    I think it's good. Shows how more tension might be brewing between the girls and the guys.
    November 18th, 2014 at 03:09am
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    Great! I added a little more, since I kind of rushed the ending of that chapter. I'm posting it now!
    1075 >>> 1479 words!
    November 18th, 2014 at 11:35am
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    It was great! I loved it
    November 20th, 2014 at 05:42pm
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    Yay! I'm glad! :) you're up now!
    November 20th, 2014 at 05:50pm
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    I shll get on that as soon as I can. I am writing a chapter for my 5SOS story and one for Not My Type but I should be able to write all this weekend.
    November 20th, 2014 at 05:53pm