R.E.V.E.N.G.E

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    The Tenth Night

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    • Title
    • Posting order
    • Story summary / short description
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    • Relationships (if any)
    • POV
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    • Town name

    Posting order
    • Rachel Edison
    • Eriko Watanabe
    • Veronica Whitby
    • Edwin Stunntis
    • Nathan Chance
    • Greg Nottels
    • Eiko Watanabe

    Point of View
    Third person, past tense.

    Victims

    R: Andrew Lawson
    E: Connol O'Neill
    V: Ian Whitby
    E: TBD
    N: Daniel Price
    G: Pete Lindon
    E: Peter Halloway

    Authors

    house of cards. // Victoria | castiel’s vessel // Kayleigh | margarine megurine // Kimi
    August 14th, 2013 at 11:40am
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    Rachel ' Rae' Edison

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    Rae is the town's paediatrician. She is of French ancestry and speaks fluently in both English and French. She is generally a quiet and reserved person and is very gentle, but the years of working with children have caused her to work with quite a few abuse cases and this has changed her outlook on the world. As a result, most of the people that make it onto her kill list are the people who have been accused of abuse but never charged.

    Age: 27

    Relationships: Used to date Nathan Chance when they were in high school, but the two broke up and haven't dated since.

    Eriko Watanabe

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    Eriko is the older sister of Eiko. She's able to change personalities depending on her current situation. She works in a clothing boutique. She talks in both English and Japanese. She's secretly a very cynical person, and only loves her sister.

    Age: 25

    Relationships: Twin sister of Eiko Watanabe.

    Veronica Whitby

    Veronica married Ian Whitby when she was twenty and he was forty one, cutting all ties with her family when she did so. She was twenty three when she met sixteen-year old naïve Edwin, her husband's nephew. It was from there that she'd casually place her hand on his thigh or accidentally allow him to walk in on her just in her bra so before long his teenage hormones got the best of him and she succeeded in seducing him in her marital bed. Her control over Edwin still reigns strong eleven years later. She lives on her husband's money and indulgences him to keep him oblivious.

    Veronica has three sons, although the middle son is Edwin's.

    Veronica's kill list is one of the three that are stolen.

    Relationship: Having an affair with Edwin Stunntis.

    Age: 34

    Edwin Stunntis

    Edwin was always the type of boy that wanted to please so who better to take advantage of that than his loving uncle's wife? He's unable to function well in society without Veronica there to tell him what to do, and has no financial support himself other than from her so he relies solely on her to live which she thrives over, He hasn't seen his parents in ten years and has one friend within the town other than Veronica.

    Relationship: Engaging in an affair with Veronica Whitby.

    Age: 27

    Nathan Chance

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    Nathan is a deadbeat. He barely scraped by in high school, always citing that he would be a famous musician by the time he was twenty. Several years later, he can hardly hold down a job and struggles to keep himself afloat money-wise. Despite all of this, he still remains as highly confident as he did when he was at school. Nathan is cunning, and willing to manipulate anyone that he can to get what he wants.

    Nathan's kill list is one of the three that are stolen.

    Age: 26

    Relationships: Used to date Rae Edison in high school, but the two broke up and haven't dated since

    Greg Nottels

    Greg Nottels is the owner and manager of a B&B/motel in the town and coincidentally knows Veronica from her occasional stays with Edwin (knows Rae through his daughter) and has thirteen year old daughter from a high school relationship where the mother was the victim of a hit and run when the child was a month shy of one. Everything he does is to safeguard his daughter and get back at the sort of people who would be likely to kill someone by speeding.

    Greg's list is one of the three that are stolen.

    Age: 31

    Eiko Watanabe

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    Eiko is the younger sister by mere minutes. She works in the town's library. She doesn't talk in English and prefers speaking in Japanese hence, she only talks to Eriko.

    Age: 25

    Relationships: Twin sister of Eriko Watanabe

    Anonymous Vigilante

    The vigilante is one of the R.E.V.E.N.G.E killers.
    August 14th, 2013 at 11:40am
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    In Holly Grove, a small town in rural Georgia, one night sends the residents scattering into their perfect homes, locking their doors behind them.

    Fight Night.

    A night where, for the past nine years, there have been seven murders. Each murder is seemingly unconnected, with the way in which the victim is killed being anything from poison to multiple stab wounds. The murders have left the local police station stumped, with absolutely no clues to lead them to the people responsible for the massacre.

    But of course, that’s exactly what R.E.V.E.N.G.E wanted.

    A group of seven elites, top of their game. They meet once every year in an undisclosed location to discuss the past year. Each of the members of R.E.V.E.N.G.E comes to this meeting with a kill list – a list containing the names of people who have wronged them throughout the year. As a team, R.E.V.E.N.G.E decides on the ultimate wrongdoers, compiling them into the final kill list for the year. Each member then chooses a name from the list – but not the name that they contributed – and kills them, leaving no trace of themselves within the crime scene. After a final meeting the following morning to discuss the antics of the night before, they break off, returning to their everyday lives safe in the knowledge that their secrets will never be revealed.

    However, 2013 holds a surprise for the members of R.E.V.E.N.G.E. Three of the kill lists are stolen, putting several members of the team in immediate danger and alerting the authorities to their potential victims. Determined not to be thwarted by this mysterious vigilante, R.E.V.E.N.G.E decide to continue with that year’s Fight Night. But the vigilante is determined to bring them down - from the inside rather than the outside. With expert knowledge of how the team works, the vigilante can only be a member of the group itself.
    August 14th, 2013 at 11:40am
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    Chapter Outline


    Prologue:

    Chapter one (Victoria):
    Rae is closing up her surgery for the night and is seeing to her last patient. The young girl has questionable injuries, but tells Rae that she fell off of her bicycle earlier that day. The father agrees with this and Rae can do nothing more, although she suspects domestic abuse. As the patient leaves, Rae takes a small piece of paper from her desk and scribbles down the father's name. Rae then takes her keys and leaves the surgery.

    Chapter two (Gabbe):
    Eriko is sitting on a bench in the middle of a shopping centre. Some guys come up to her and are all like hey bby wassup, and she's playing along with it, acting cute, whatever. They exchange names and numbers, and the guys leave, and she goes from hehe to muahahaha and writes their name down.

    Chapter three (Kayleigh):
    ntroduction to her three sons and Veronica helping them pack up for their week [what time of year is this set?] that runs each year. She gets a phonecall from Edwin but she ignores it and Ian comes in to say goodbye to the boys. Has a quick look in her deck for her list but doesn't see it, before she can root further she's called by her youngest son and she has to go.

    Chapter four (Kayleigh):
    The curtains are drawn shut but Edwin keeps twitching them, thinking that someone is watching him. After a rejected phonecall to Veronica, he attempts to call his mother but is unable to. Veronica shows up and pops in for two minutes while her boys are in the car and tells him to get a grip of himself. She leaves and he rips up his list before realising what he's done and rewriting it.

    Chapter five (Victoria):
    Nathan is lying on his bed in the apartment he shares with his sister, strumming absent-mindedly at his guitar. His sister walks in and starts complaining that Nathan never does anything with his life. He flips her off and laughs as he tells her he is going out anyway and he won’t be in her way all night. His sister leaves the room and Nathan realises he is running late. It doesn’t even cross his mind to lift his kill list as he grabs his jacket and runs for the bus.

    Chapter six (Kayleigh): Has a little quarrel with his daughter before tending to the front desk where a man is with a girl who looks only a few years older than his daughter and books a room for the night. He books the man's name down and puts the list in his desk.

    Chapter seven (Kimi):
    Introduction to Eiko and a little insight about her love of literature. She then goes to a shelf at the very back of the room and takes Dante's Inferno from the shelf. Opening it, she finds her list and compares it to the said book.
    August 14th, 2013 at 11:41am
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    Hello ladies! I'm Victoria (but I think I know you all anyway so introductions are pretty redundant tehe). I'm super-stoked to start working with you all on this!

    Okay, first things first. Obviously, we'll need characters, so if you guys could decide on whether you want to do one or two characters and also decide on names and stuff. Me and Kayleigh were thinking we could have the first names / surnames of the murderers forming the acronym of R.E.V.E.N.G.E.

    Also, let me know what you guys think of the plot so far. If you can add anything in, then let me know and I'll edit it in!

    Also, we need to think of a proper title, seeing as R.E.V.E.N.G.E probably wouldn't follow the story guidelines. tehe
    August 14th, 2013 at 11:51am
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    If I have to do this Shifty I'm Nic, I like romantic dinners, and long walks on the beach... tehe

    Well obviously I'm joking but I don't usually do/consider co-writes because I don't know what to do with em but we can try this now and see how it goes. c:

    - Depending on who takes what I could consider two characters but I'll have to find out how busy i'll be while we're writing this to see if it can work.

    - I think the plot sounds good so far, it's interesting.

    - I'm no good at titles XD so idk.

    Also, are we attempting the to-do list in that order?
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:31pm
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    @ Fair
    Romantic dinners are the shiz. tehe

    I hope you find it fun! I always find these things great fun.

    Well, I'd probably be looking at taking two characters anyway, and I can always pick up three if you only want to do one. tehe

    If you've got anything you want to add in the future, just let me know!

    Me neither. I usually use stupid songs. tehe

    We are not, that was just my brain vomit because nothing is in order. If you've got any ideas for anything on the to-do list though, post them here and I'll score everything off as we do it. XD
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:33pm
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    @ dougie poynter;
    Aren't they though? XD

    Should be a good way to de-stress. Facepalm

    Well three seems a lot, but we'll see. c:

    Will do~

    xD I have no clue what to do with this one.

    Oh okay, well I could do the layout if anybody wanted me to. Or something, I don't care. tehe

    Also, I will not be able to post during the week usually. That's just how it'll be because I'm going to be busy. Sorry
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:40pm
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    @ dougie poynter;
    I'm Kimi (you can call me Marge though) and I love like Dujo Weird Also, it's my first time doing this.
    I can do one character because it's really hard for me to maintain two characters at once.
    So far, the plot is good! It just comes down to whether we can connect or not Unsure
    I'm really bad at making titles but we can just name it 'The Kill List' or something Shifty If I only knew the name of the town, we can add the word list to that lmfao
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:41pm
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    @ Fair
    They totally are. XD

    It is. Great fun, we'll probably just discuss for like the first forever anyway lmfao

    Well, we've got someone else that wants to come in, so if you only want to do one character, then they could pick up the other? Cute

    If you could do the layout you could be my new favourite person because I suck at making layouts. lmfao

    I'll be the same when I get back to uni, don't worry! We've all got lives, so it doesn't matter if some people take a little time to update. tehe
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:42pm
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    @ margarine megurine
    Totally didn't see this before I replied to Nic. Facepalm

    It's my first time hosting one of these myself, I've only ever actually participated in one or two of them! XD That's fine, we're probably going to have another writer that can pick up any other characters anyway. XD

    Yeah, if we can all connect to it then we're sorted. I think I'm connected now anyway, I just can't wait to get started, haha!

    Ooh, we totally could! I was wondering about the name of the town, does anyone have ideas? All I can think of is names of towns around me that are all too stupid-sounding to be a place anyway. Facepalm
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:46pm
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    I'm Kayleigh guys! And I'm also incredibly lazy, hence why I'm typing this on ny phone while still in bed despite it being almost midday. tehe

    Two characters is fine with me to write because I'm always looking for ways to procrastinate against doing my work. XD

    I'm fairly okay with titles seeing as I come up with my own on a whim just before starting so we're not entirely stuck there. Haha. I'm also okay with banners/layouts too. I also obsess over detail in the planning stages (despite never planning my own stories...) so expect me to nitpick at your characters and ideas. And yes, I know that totally makes me sound like a bitch but whatever. tehe
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:48pm
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    @ dougie poynter;
    There are a lot of places here with names that Filipinos ripped off from the States lmfao We have a place called Mexico and Los Angeles here! But in all seriousness, the places here are all Filipino or Spanish-sounding Think Can we name the town with a really ordinary name? Like Georgetown? If the name is really ordinary, it will give off a spooky vibe since the killings only happen once a year and the culprits haven't been caught.
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:51pm
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    @ castiel's vessel
    I only got dressed like ten minutes ago, I've been lazing in my pyjamas all morning. tehe

    I'm the same, don't worry. I spend AGES setting out my characters and then end up not following the plans at all half of the time, but I'll stick to it this time. lmfao

    So as a working title, I'll set the story up as being called The Kill List and add you all as authors so that we've got the basic template for that down!
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:54pm
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    @ margarine megurine
    And again. I'm good at this double-posting malarkey!

    Yeah, we probably could. I think Georgetown is a bit too similar to the state (but again, that's up for debate because Georgia was the first state that popped into my head. tehe). A really simple name would be good though because it means I don't have to panic about spelling it wrong every time I use it. tehe

    (Oh, and I think that the U.S (or is it Australia?) has a town called Birmingham, which is a city in the U.K, so they steal our names too. tehe)
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:56pm
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    File Is it a wrong time to say I want to take the G in Revenge?
    August 14th, 2013 at 01:00pm
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    @ dougie poynter;
    The US also have a New England so that a stolen name. File

    Okay so with the town is it being in the states cos you mentioned Georgia and everything. Also what do you other guys think of R.E.V.E.N.G.E being an acronym for their first names? Or would you prefer last names? And I will contribute more whenever I get round to getting on my laptop.

    Also can I rob an E and the V? tehe
    August 14th, 2013 at 01:01pm
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    @ dougie poynter;
    Georgetown
    Capetown
    I'll add every word that I think of with 'town' lmfao

    @ castiel's vessel
    I prefer first names Think Oh my god, I can't think of names Twitch
    August 14th, 2013 at 01:04pm
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    @ Fair
    No, not at all. You can have G. tehe

    @ castiel's vessel
    So they do. Stealing our place names, that's mean! Sad

    I thought so, because they have pretty lax gun laws over there and I thought that could work to the advantage of the group. I dunno, I wrote half of this last night when I got in from work so it might not even make sense. Facepalm I think I prefer first names, to be honest.

    You can. I'm stealing R if no one else wants it, so I'll get this all of the letter claims put into the character bios part just now. tehe
    August 14th, 2013 at 01:05pm
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    @ margarine megurine
    Caketown. tehe

    I think that's maybe the best way to go though, either that or something Grove. Holly Grove? I don't know, I'm awful with names of places.
    August 14th, 2013 at 01:06pm