When things are rushed.
February 15th, 2014 at 06:55pm
This. 100% this. I read stories about people who drink more than I've ever drank in my entire life and they turn up the next morning as fresh as a daisy. The likelihood is that you're going to be stuck in your bed all morning with a killer headache at the absolute least. And if you do that night after night, you're going to probably end up with a problem or addiction. I don't like that most stories seem to gloss over that fact and use alcohol / drugs to make the character seem 'hard-edge' or cool because in reality, those people are the ones that have issues or aren't cool. I just don't get it.
- i saw sparks:
- I hate that there are so many stories that glamorize alcoholism/drug abuse/binge drinking/the whole partying lifestyle, but I rarely come across any that realistically portray the aftermath or the darker side of those subjects.
I've had a lot of exposure to alcoholism and drug abuse in my life, and that exposure has mostly been towards the negative side of those subjects, so it kind of blows my mind that it's generally portrayed in stories as being this light-hearted, happy-go-lucky thing. I understand that a good deal of people can do drugs or drink recreationally and never have an issue with it, but not everyone is like that. I'd just like to see those topics portrayed in a more realistic fashion.
I totally agree. I guess people don't seem to get that what's cool in your late teens-early twenties isn't so cool once you pass a certain age. My brother's an alcoholic, he's 12 years older than me, and I can honestly say that I don't remember a time when I've seen him sober. There are so many times I've been terrified because I'd be in the car with him while he's driving and he'd be downing beer in the process. One of my closest friends also has an alcohol problem, and she's not incredibly bad-ass or anything (she's actually really churchy and sweet and all that stuff, probably the last person you'd expect to have a drinking problem), but she's only been drinking for two years and already knows that alcohol just isn't something she can have in her life right now.
- house of cards.:
- This. 100% this. I read stories about people who drink more than I've ever drank in my entire life and they turn up the next morning as fresh as a daisy. The likelihood is that you're going to be stuck in your bed all morning with a killer headache at the absolute least. And if you do that night after night, you're going to probably end up with a problem or addiction. I don't like that most stories seem to gloss over that fact and use alcohol / drugs to make the character seem 'hard-edge' or cool because in reality, those people are the ones that have issues or aren't cool. I just don't get it.
This. I definitely understand where you're coming from with this. I can't stand whatsoever a story with no description. As soon as I see that there's an overall lack of detail, I just exit out of the window and try to find another story to read.
- robb stark;:
- No descriptions. Of anything. I hate choppy dialogue with no descriptions or actions in between. An example:
"He said this."
"She said this."
"I really effing hate this."
With nothing to back it up like a description of the character's facial expression. Hate it, hate it, hate it. More often than not, while having a conversation, a person is most likely doing some kind of action while they're speaking, whether it's frowning or smiling or examining their nails. Even something as mundane as that, I like to read it because it doesn't make the dialogue seem so damn choppy.
I'm the same way. Unless the chapters are intended to be vignettes, when I settle down with a tory, especially if it's chaptered, I'd like it to read like an actual novel, and most novels are far more than 1,000 words per chapter.
- Matt Nicholls.:
- Another thing I dislike, I really hate when overall stories are short like less than 1000 words per chapter, unless it's specifically a Drabble.
I'm really not that particular when it comes to things in stories, but there are a few things that just grind my gears.