1D Post Apocalyptic Group Write

@ kili the dwarf
@ luminos.

oh, my god. I totally forgot that it was my turn again, and that we were getting back on track of the posting order. ffs.
And I haven't been online over the weekend. Anyways, I'm almost done with the chapter, I just need a few things cleared up. Like the setting...

Would Cara and her group already be out of the city and more into the 'country'? Because Michael and Gray just got forced out of their small 'no where' town and treehouse. And I'm writing the part where Liam comes into their lives. So they're just a day travel (with detours) from Cara. So I'm just wondering where they were, so I don't mess anything up.

And if we're going to make up the next couple of chapters, my plan for this one is that well,
Grace and Michael got forced out of their treehouse, and they've been moving non-stop for six nights, but they lost the horde two nights ago, but they're still on edge. And when they've settled, I'm getting them in a building of some sort. And then I'm writing from Liam's POV, and he'll explain what's going on and why he's on his own at the moment, and then he'll over hear a conversation between Michael and Grace, and he'll show himself when he hears that she's in distress about her brother who he knows. And he and Michael will have a show down kind of thing, because trust. And when he says/does something to show that he's genuine, they'll go with him. And he'll say they'll get there in a few hours, or the next day if they run into trouble.

So Marissa, hopefully that would help with your chapter a bit.

??

... ok, I'm just going to continue on writing, I'll figure something out.

Edit: Feb 1
.. just wanted to say that I'm traveling tomorrow, or well.. today? (it's 2AM) and I won't be able to post the chapter until later tomorrow.. or today.
But it will be posted, so don't worry!

@ She Said Poptarts
I like what you are planning, so I say go with it.

I haven't even written mine yet, because I want to be able to tie it in with yours and Marissa.

But my general idea was to have my group bond before they are chased down by a hoard and everyone meets. At least that's the loose idea.

Just try and get your chapter up as soon as possible, it's already been I think two weeks now since the last update.

@ luminos.
@ kili the dwarf

I updated!

@ She Said Poptarts
Yay! I will go check it out.

@ She Said Poptarts
I thought it was excellent!
Really, good work!

@ kili the dwarf
Oh great!! I'm glad, I immediately went to bed after I posted it.
Have you thought of what will be in your chapter? I can't wait!

@ She Said Poptarts
I have a few ideas. The main one being the group gathering supplied before leaving the city and heading out into the wilderness. Or my other idea was going to be when they are out in the wilderness, they come across a hoard and when running, I was planning on having Zoey breaking her arm when she falls...you know having a life threatening experience. But I may change it depending on Marissa's chapter.

@ luminos.
Hey Marrisa

I haven't heard from you in a while, I just wanted to make sure you were still in this? It's your turn and you haven't update yet today, so I'm just checking.

@ kili the dwarf
Sorry my laptop was broken so I had to use my phone for a while. I just got a new laptop though so I should be able to write now!

@ luminos.
Ugh! My laptop broke too! Haha, it's getting fixed now.
I've been using my iPad for a week.

@ luminos.
@ She Said Poptarts
OK as long as we are still on cause I don't want to just leave it ya know. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. We should probably discuss some ideas for the next round

@ kili the dwarf
@ luminos.

Kind of disappeared for like 10 days, but I'm back, and trying to become active again!

Will the characters be finding an old house to stay in? or a lake house?
We can have the group be in one place for a few days, and then chaos happens! Which is when we lose Michael (*sniff*). Also would they be running into another group, or not?

@ luminos.
@ She Said Poptarts

Okay guys let's get cracking this story has been sitting idle for almost a month now.

I was thinking they can find an old summer camp for children like log cabins, cafeteria, sports area, and hiking trails etc. Maybe they stay there for a while like a couple of weeks and then boom a hoard gets in, splits them up, and that's when they can run into the cannibals. What do you guys think?

@ kili the dwarf
Whoa, ok. I like your idea better, I didn't even think about a camp with log cabins! OMG, there wouldn't be zombie kids... right? If yes, that would be good but also sad. If the group splits up, will only one group be running into the cannibals? Will they find each other again, or no?

@ She Said Poptarts
I was thinking they find a few children that are truly dead and find one that is so weak he/she can't walk it can only crawl. And maybe they find a few older folks that worked there.

I think the group gets split in three. One group finds the cannibals but don't realize it. One group gets killed off like Michael and Zoey. And the final group maybe finds a way to a supposed sanctuary? But it's not what it seems? What do ya think?

@ kili the dwarf
Hm.. sounds good.

OK, and this is in the "rising action"? If Zoey is in the group that gets killed off, do you want Rose to be with them? Because if Michael is going to get killed off in the split, then I'm going to make Gray be in that group.

Or instead of three, it can be two groups. One has a couple killed off, and gets to the sanctuary, and the other runs into cannibals? Because for Michael and Grace, I'd want them in group 1. Michael will die, and Grace will just lose herself. And when they get to the sanctuary, Liam and Louis could try and help her get out of it. Am I making sense?

@ She Said Poptarts

I'm thinking Zoey is going to be bit pretty badly and there really is no chance in saving her, but she goes on for as long as she can before it becomes too much. So if we do split them into two groups, maybe Michael is in one group and Zoey will be in the other.

This sanctuary though I think shouldn't really be a sanctuary...like maybe it's a place where people are forced to fight zombies or people are killed and studied as they become zombies...ya know? And like the whole ending half of this story can be our heroes bringing this place down. Maybe the cannibals are apart of this sanctuary too that way they can all be reunited. What do you think?

@ luminos.

Marissa are you still with us?

@ kili the dwarf
Wow I didn't get an alert for your reply!

Ok, if the "sanctuary" is like that, it works out for the situation with Grace and her humanity. I'm agreeing with everything you're coming up with! Would the cannibals be a secret group? Or would the whole place know what they do? Because it'd be pretty damn creepy of they were in the same building because they'd be staring and stuff. -shivers-