5SOS Group-Write

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    Hello you lovely ladies, and welcome to our groupwrite!

    Judge & Author

    Ashton - little sparrow (Ashlee)
    Michael - broken bells (Kayla)
    Luke - antidote. (Bex)
    Calum - Anchor and Hope. (Becca)

    What we need to decide
    1. posting order
    2. title
    3. story arcs for your original characters
    4. name of the show
    5. other members on your judges team (4 others)

    How the Show Works

    I know I said I would give you a little more info, so here’s what I had in mind Cute

    Auditions

    Each contestant goes to an audition in several major cities and then go home. Two weeks later the host comes and personally informs those who’ve made it (probably around fifty people) that they are going to the blind auditions. (This might be a good starting point to introduce our characters personalities and such.) The contestants are then flown to Sydney where they are sent onstage to sing.

    All four boys are sitting in chairs with their backs turned while the contestants sing, so they have no idea what they look like or how old they are. They are only going solely off their voice and probably the crowd reactions, like if someone whistles they might assume the person is attractive. When they hear a singer they want on their team they hit a button and turn around so the singer knows that judge has selected them. Once the singer is done both the judges try and persuade the person to be on their team (if more than one judge turns) and the contestant chooses who they want.

    The Weekly Eliminations

    Each week all five contestants from one team must perform a solo piece of their choosing. The judge will have coached them with the song over the week, helping them out with notes and tone and such. So, as each contestant performs they get feedback from all four judges, and after all five members of one team have sang the judge will then decide which of the singers is going home. For this the judges will be able to see their contestants and judge their stage presence and their ability to perform under pressure and such. This will go on and on every week until each judge only had one contestant.

    All judges’ teams compete in the eliminations. So it might be Team Michael, Then Team Luke, etc. but they ALL go in that one night.

    When there are only two people left on each judge’s teams those two will sing a duet, and then both sing an individual song and then the Judge makes the final decision to decide the Last Singer Standing

    The Last Singer Standing

    Once each judge has only one person on their team they are given one month to train them. In this time they will spend every single day coaching their contestant so they will win. This time period will also show the different boys personalities, like how Calum might make his team mate practice morning noon and night while Ashton might take his team mate out for a vacation day or something. Anywho, the judges move into the same room as their team mate in this month, which will cause some serious drama I’m sure, to bring them closer together. All this training and practice leads us up to the last half of the show.

    The Last Half

    Once the judge’s month with their contestants ends they go back for the second half of the show. There they sing a duet (or two) every week, one they have been training for in advance. Once all five teams have performed the audience then decides which team will go home that week and which teams will be one step closer to the finale.

    The Finale

    For the finale all teams come back and perform one big number, then all the contestants and all the judges, then the two final teams have one last duet together. Then they might have the other three teams sing one last time as filler as the audience votes for their favorite of the two remaining. Whichever team has the most votes will win the entire show

    The Prize

    The final winner becomes 5 SOS’s opening act for their new tour and gets a debut album, the other four finalists also get an album and all five are signed to Capitol Records (which is sponsoring the show to find new talent)

    Voting

    So guys, I have kind of a crazy idea for this, so bear with me. I was thinking that for voting we could have the readers voice their opinions, either by comments or some kind of a survey website, so it becomes kind of audience interactive? If you guys aren’t alright with this please tell me now, I don’t want anyone to secretly despise this and not tell me. Otherwise we can just decide among ourselves or draw numbers or use a randomizer or something.

    Housing Situation

    All the contestants and judges live in the same house, with the teams all living in the same room except the judge. This will cause major drama, (especially since all the housing excursions are recorded) which is what I want all the time what is really fun to write. Each team has their own sort of music room/ practice space type thing, along with a pool, all of which is in a lovely mansion

    A Typical Week

    Day One, coaches meet with their teams to give feedback for the previous performance, then take each person and discuss one on one what song they want to work on
    Day Two, practice
    Day Three, practice
    Day Four, practice
    Day Five, Performance for each team, elimination for each team
    (How the coach runs their practices probably depends more on their personality. For example, Ashton might try and practice with everyone the first day but ends up getting nothing accomplished, so the second day he tries to just focus on two or three, but ends up staying with just one the whole time, so then he tries to work with the other four all in the last day and doesn’t really get anything accomplished again, does that make sense?)
    December 12th, 2013 at 12:42am
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    Our Ladies


    Margo Rain Gale (19) is about the farthest from normal a person can get before crossing the realm into crazy. (Although, she’s been called that quite a few times too.) Having grown up homeschooled by her environmentalists/ singer parents, along with the rest of their small colony in the outback, social interaction has never been a strong suit of hers. However, she does love her parents, and everyone in the colony, loving how music could say things she couldn’t. When she left for uni, she became very interested in American indie music, especially bands like Miike Snow and Imagine Dragons. She hated how she was treated at uni, so she decided to try out to make music for people like herself.

    Eleanor "Norie" Rose Parker (16) Preparing to finish up second form. Wants to go to uni to study dance and theater. For the past two years Norie has been involved in a (tumultuous) relationship with an older guy by the name of Holden Pierce. At 19 her parents absolutely do not approve of him, but to be with him is all that Norie really wants. Norie has a voice that can only be described as soulful-pop. Her sounds flows seamlessly- a match up that you would expect if Rihanna met Adele. It is a voice that demands attention, with one smile she can command the room. Norie is musically inclined, playing the piano, guitar and drums. Norie's family mean the world to her and she hates (more than anything) hearing how much she doesn't look like her father. They are her biggest supporters- but her baby sister is truly her #1 fan. She gets on with nearly everyone, never truly meeting a stranger.

    Nicole "Cole" Denver (19)
    voice is described as soft and beautiful, it being compared to those of Birdie or Ellie Goulding; however her personality is far from tender. She can come on a little strong and confident, with a smirk that can only spell trouble; but she knows what matters and what is important to her. Singing is her everything and is the only career she could possibly see herself doing. She is very sarcastic and always has to have the last word, which gets her into a lot of trouble almost all the time. Her inability to know when to shut up doesn't help either. She is naturally a flirty and feisty character, so is often labeled lowly by others. Comes from a happy family background, but doesn't have many friends because girls just don't seem to like her and boys are usually only interested in one thing. She's fallen in love too many times to count- she is in love with the idea of falling in love.

    Jasey Sampson (17) Jasey Sampson has never put too much effort into her appearance or what she wears. Her mom left her family when she was 8 years old so she grew up in a house being the only girl - not learning the importance of make up or fashion. She only has a select group of friends and has never had a boyfriend (not counting the 3 week relationship she had in 3rd grade). She's mostly outgoing and friendly but she tends to get competitive and she's very stubborn. Jasey grew up in a musical family, mainly focused on hard rock music. She sings and plays guitar, her dad plays the guitar, piano and "thinks" he can sing, her older brother can play the drums, guitar and has a decent voice and her younger brother can play the trumpet and is learning the drums. Her older brother is the reason she even auditioned, after a lot of convincing on his part. Jasey's voice works best with either alternative or indie songs.

    Team Ashton


    Margo Rain Gale (19)
    Damien Clarke (32)
    Zachary Thomas (23)
    Zoey Redwall (16)
    Amy Meyers (21)

    Team Calum


    Eleanor "Norie" Rose Parker (16)
    Neil Blake (24)
    Samantha "Sam" Craig (23)
    Casey Farrow (18)
    Katie Hunt (20)

    Team Luke


    Nicole "Cole" Denver (19)
    Finley Ross (21)
    Jacob Reynolds (19)
    Willow Davis (20)
    Sandra Nichols (18)

    Team Michael


    Jasey Sampson (17)
    Jarren Davis (19)
    Kelli Sherman (18)
    Desiree Hutch (21)
    Anna Scott (17)

    Relationships


    Ashton and Margo
    Ashton is the only one who turns for Margo’s performance because he thinks she has a lot of potential. He then finds out that she’s very pretty, (even though she’s really weird) and that they have a lot in common. They both really like each other, but Margo is so just awkward that she usually will just kind of blush and run off or say something that makes no sense. Ashton starts to think that maybe she doesn’t like him like he thought. He’s so heartbroken that he almost doesn’t pick her for last singer standing, but once they get to the last half they really start to make a connection and are really cute and weird

    Calum and Norie
    Calum is attracted to Norie before even seeing her. Her voice is flawless and he instantly turns around- not at all disappointed by what he sees. Calum develops a very quick 'puppy love' type of crush on Norie but there's just one problem- she isn't interested at all. Norie is so hung up on Holden and the possibility that they could reconcile that she takes no interest in Calum. He is attentive and seems to pay special attention to her, which she actually finds quite annoying and she quickly begins to hate him. But even in such a hopeless situation Calum cannot help but fall head over heels for Norie. It isn't until last singer standing that Calum really starts to break Norie down.

    Luke and Cole
    hearing her voice, Luke is hesitant when it comes to turning around. Through her voice she sounds fragile and likely to break from all the pressure the show will bring. However, taking a risk, he is surprised to find such a headstrong and confident girl. With so much time spent together, they develop a deep friendship where they realize they share a lot in common when it comes to music and life. But Luke's feeling's stray way past the friendship zone, but Cole is too oblivious and unknowingly is breaking his heart every time she flirts with her fellow male contestants. It isn't until Luke takes the risk and tells her that everything turns sour. Not wanting to be picked because she is being crushed on by her mentor, a very serious Cole considers dropping out of the competition when she is chosen to be his last contestant. But undoubtedly, something holds her back and she knows it isn't just her love of singing.

    Michael and Jasey
    Michael immediately liked Jasey's voice when he first heard it and, especially since he knew and liked the song she was singing, he thought it worked well with it and knew that, with his help, she could make it far and even win. He was rather shocked when he turned around and saw a goofy, awkward looking girl that didn't seem to match her voice at all. He knew that it'd take a lot more time to get her to where she needs to be but he didn't think it'd be much of a challenge, not to mention how much credit he'd get. When Michael voices his concerns and plans, Jasey's immediately offended. Not only did he blatantly insult her appearance, but she doesn't believe that she should have to change the way she looks when she's aspiring to be known for her voice - not her appearance. Between Michael insisting her look is as important as her voice and Jasey refusing and arguing his every decision, the two quickly realize that it's going to be a much harder experience than either anticipated.
    December 12th, 2013 at 12:44am
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    prologue (Ashlee)
    One (Ashlee) Margo intro
    Two (Becca) Norie intro
    Three (Bex) Cole intro
    Four (Kayla) Jasey intro
    Five (Ashlee) Margo audition
    Six (Becca) Norie audition
    Seven (Bex) Cole audition
    Eight (Kayla) Jasey audition
    Nine (Ashlee) team meet
    Ten (Becca) practice/ extra chapter
    Eleven (Bex) practice / extra chapter
    Twelve (Kayla) performance
    Thirteen (Ashlee) elimination (4 singers left per team)

    Fourteen (Becca) team meet
    Fifteen (Bex) practice/ extra chapter
    Sixteen (Kayla) practice/ extra chapter
    Seventeen (Ashlee) performance
    Eighteen (Becca) elimination (3 singers left per team)
    Nineteen (Bex) team meet
    Twenty (Kayla) practice/ extra chapter
    Twenty-One (Ashlee) practice/ extra chapter
    Twenty-Two (Becca) performance
    Twenty-Three (Bex) elimination (2 singers left per team)
    Twenty-Four (Kayla) team meet
    Twenty-Five (Ashlee) practice/ extra
    Twenty-Six (Becca) practice/ extra
    Twenty-Seven (Bex) performance (duet or single, your choice) and final elimination
    Twenty-Eight (Kayla) performance (duet or single, your choice) and final elimination
    Twenty-Nine (Ashlee) performance (single or duet) and final elimination
    Thirty (Becca) performance (single or duet) and final elimination

    {One month intermission, we can each maybe have a summary chapter of it or something? So then it would be
    Thirty-One (Bex) practice/ extra
    Thirty-Two (Kayla) practice/ extra
    Thirty-Three (Ashlee) practice /extra
    Thirty-Four (Becca) practice/ extra}

    FINAL HALF
    Thirty-Five (Bex) Performance
    Thirty-Six (Kayla) first elimination
    {After this we can either use a randomizer to choose who is eliminated, choose ourselves, or set up a survey website and let the readers vote}

    Breakdown:

    Ashlee: 1 intro, 1 audition, 1 team meet, 3 practice/ extra, 2 performances, 2 eliminations
    Becca: 1 intro, 1 audition, 1 team meet, 3 practice/ extra, 2 performance, 2 eliminations
    Bex: 1 intro, 1 audition, 1 team meet, 3 practice/ extra, 2 performance, 2 eliminations
    Kayla: 1 intro, 1 audition, 1 team meet, 3 practice/ extra, 2 performance, 2 eliminations
    December 12th, 2013 at 12:45am
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    December 12th, 2013 at 12:45am
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    Hiiii, I'm Kayla. Cute
    December 12th, 2013 at 01:03am
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    Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! I'm Becca Cute
    I'm working right now (obviously not super hard) lmfao
    But I should have my character profile up later tonight!
    December 12th, 2013 at 01:46am
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    Team Calum:

    Eleanor "Norie" Rose Parker

    17.
    Preparing to finish up second form.
    Wants to go to uni to study dance and theater.

    For the past two years Norie has been involved in a (tumultuous) relationship with an older guy by the name of Holden Pierce. At 21 her parents absolutely do not approve of him, but to be with him is all that Norie really wants.

    Norie has a voice that can only be described as soulful-pop. Her sound flows seamlessly- a match up that you would expect if Rihanna met Adele. It is a voice that demands attention, with one smile she can command the room. Norie is musically inclined, playing the piano, guitar and drums.

    Norie's family mean the world to her and she hates (more than anything) hearing how much she doesn't look like her father. They are her biggest supporters- but her baby sister is truly her #1 fan. She gets on with nearly everyone, never truly meeting a stranger.

    Family: (I'm adding them because it's a show and a lot of times they do "clips" of the family for intros and whatnot) Facepalm

    Maya Parker ;; Mom
    Robert Parker ;; Dad
    Rowan Parker ;; Little Sister ;; 11

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    Calum & Norie


    Calum is attracted to Norie before even seeing her. Her voice is flawless and he instantly turns around- not at all disappointed by what he sees. Calum develops a very quick 'puppy love' type of crush on Norie but there's just one problem- she isn't interested at all. Norie is so hung up on Holden and the possibility that they could reconcile that she takes no interest in Calum. He is attentive and seems to pay special attention to her, which she actually finds quite annoying and she quickly begins to hate him. But even in such a hopeless situation Calum cannot help but fall head over heels for Norie.

    It isn't until last singer standing that Calum really starts to break Norie down.

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    Team Callum


    Neil Blake ;; 24
    Samantha "Sam" Craig ;; 23
    Casey Farrow ;; 18
    Katie Hunt ;; 20

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    As for names...hmmmm....

    Project Platinum
    Tomorrows stars, signed, sealed, delivered. Today!


    ...I swear that sounded better in my head.
    Eh, that's all I've got for now, I'll brainstorm some more and come back to it later.
    December 12th, 2013 at 06:17am
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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    I love Norie! And her and Calum's story line sounds excellent! Cute
    December 12th, 2013 at 06:52am
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    @ little sparrow.

    Ha thanks! I didn't realize until after that it was very "heartbreak girl" lmfao
    December 12th, 2013 at 07:29am
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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    I still love it!
    December 12th, 2013 at 08:21am
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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    I still love it!
    December 12th, 2013 at 08:24am
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    Hey, I'm also Becca but call me Bex to avoid anyone being confused tehe
    I love Norie and Calum's storyline! On my lunch break I shall think of some names and jot them down and get them back to you! But I do like yours Becca- Project Platinum Cute
    December 12th, 2013 at 09:11am
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    I'll work on my girl's plot line and brainstorm a few hours after I get a bit of sleep. lmfao

    But I love Norie (that is such a cute nickname for Eleanor aw) and it sounds a lot like Heartbreak Girl, wonderfully.

    And I quite like Project Platinum also!
    December 12th, 2013 at 10:39am
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    @ Antidote.
    Heyyyyyy Bex! Arms
    Can't wait for you to get Cole up! tehe

    @ broken bells
    I am right there with you.
    That was the product of me not sleeping lmfao

    @ little sparrow.
    Thanks! Cute

    So- I really love the interactive idea! Readers voting to kick someone off the show?
    How do you want to approach that though? Did we want to try and find a site so they can vote "anonymously"? Or just in the comments?
    December 12th, 2013 at 09:35pm
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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    I know survey monkey can do it anonymously because we were going to do it on a different group wrote, I just got out of school so I'll go look at it right now and get my girl and storyline up Cute
    December 13th, 2013 at 12:53am
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    @ little sparrow.
    (I could've sworn I added this to my last post) but I think the interactive idea is really good and I definitely vote for that too! Cute

    I'm working on my girl now and she should be up within the next 20 minutes.
    December 13th, 2013 at 01:40am
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    @ broken bells
    awesome awesome! Dance
    December 13th, 2013 at 01:44am
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    Jasey Sampson

    Jasey Sampson // 17 years old

    Jasey Sampson has never put too much effort into her appearance or what she wears. Her mom left her family when she was 8 years old so she grew up in a house being the only girl - not learning the importance of make up or fashion. She only has a select group of friends and has never had a boyfriend (not counting the 3 week relationship she had in 3rd grade). She's mostly outgoing and friendly but she tends to get competitive and she's very stubborn.

    Jasey grew up in a musical family, mainly focused on hard rock music. She sings and plays guitar, her dad plays the guitar, piano and "thinks" he can sing, her older brother can play the drums, guitar and has a decent voice and her younger brother can play the trumpet and is learning the drums. Her older brother is the reason she even auditioned, after a lot of convincing on his part. Jasey's voice works best with either alternative or indie songs.

    Family:
    Dad: Eric Sampson
    Older Brother: Oliver Sampson // 20
    Younger Brother: DJ Sampson // 11
    Michael & Jasey

    Michael immediately liked Jasey's voice when he first heard it and, especially since he knew and liked the song she was singing, he thought it worked well with it and knew that, with his help, she could make it far and even win. He was rather shocked when he turned around and saw a goofy, awkward looking girl that didn't seem to match her voice at all. He knew that it'd take a lot more time to get her to where she needs to be but he didn't think it'd be much of a challenge, not to mention how much credit he'd get.

    When Michael voices his concerns and plans, Jasey's immediately offended. Not only did he blatantly insult her appearance, but she doesn't believe that she should have to change the way she looks when she's aspiring to be known for her voice - not her appearance. Between Michael insisting her look is as important as her voice and Jasey refusing and arguing his every decision, the two quickly realize that it's going to be a much harder experience than either anticipated.

    Team Michael
    Jarren Davis // 19 years old
    Kelli Sherman // 18 years old
    Desiree Hutch // 21 years old
    Anna Scott // 17 years old

    As for titles, I've yet to come up with any at the moment, but I'll let you guys know if I think of any!

    This turned out to be a lot longer than I planned but you can't be too prepared, can you? yes you can lmfao Let me know what you guys think! Cute

    Oh, and as for the girl I have portraying Jasey - she may change. That's just the best I could find at the moment.
    December 13th, 2013 at 01:53am
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    @ broken bells
    I love it! I'll add it to the cluster at the top Cute
    December 13th, 2013 at 02:04am
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    @ little sparrow.
    Alright Cute Margo sounds lovely!
    December 13th, 2013 at 02:21am