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    Hey everyone!

    So, first things first, here's the list of characters and authors as well as the second and third choices so should someone drop the story or disappear from mibba, we have a plan of how to continue. I will continue to edit this list as authors accept and it is a first come, first serve.

    The list of current authors is as below:
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    Josh Cutlip.
    Still Dreaming
    A S K I N G .

    Porter - Pandora - A S K I N G . - polka dot perfection - woe is chastity; -
    Acrimony - Wrath (Wrath's tattoo) - polka dot perfection - 2 - 3 -
    Lafayette - Lust - The Good Life - woe is chastity; - Still Dreaming -
    Cael - Envy - woe is chastity; - Josh Cutlip. - polka dot perfection -
    Edward - Greed - 1 - A S K I N G . - 3 -
    Sawyer - Sloth - Still Dreaming - The Good Life - Josh Cutlip. -
    Zaiden - Gluttony - 1 - 2 - A S K I N G . - Josh Cutlip.
    Shaan - Pride - Josh Cutlip. - Still Dreaming - The Good Life -

    Relationships:
    wrath/pandora
    greed/gluttony
    lust/envy
    sloth/pride

    Friend Groups:
    jock - wrath
    popular because rich - gluttony, greed
    loner - sloth
    cheerleader - pride
    popular becasue nice - pandora
    scene - lust, envy

    Friendships Before Manifestation:
    pride/wrath
    gluttony/lust
    lust/envy

    basic plan:
    1 - daily lives
    2 - soem manifest
    3 - more manifest
    4 - pandora manifest, calls them together - (should they live together? like pandora was left a lot of money by the last pandora to get a mansion they could all live in together? Idk about it though....but it would be weird if they're all not always together and story progession would take longer because they'd have to travel to one another.....)
    5 - they know theyre supposed to get along and pandora tries to make it work but they all have such distinct personalities that it's like wtffff and everyone is testy - pandora forgets about the book because he's worried about everyone working together
    6 - frustration builds and they're having trouble controlling the powers, it's rubbing off on normal people around them and stuff like that.
    7 - pandora remembers the book and works with everyone about controlling their power, which is detailed in the book, and the tension is there and everyone doesn't quite want to be working together but they begrudgingly do so
    8 - better control of their powers
    9 - some kind of drama, be it someone's relationship (maybe when pride was goign to kill himself or something?)
    10 - settling down into life with their powers and one another

    Looking forward to a great story with you all!
    xoxo Sari
    August 12th, 2014 at 11:34pm
  • Still Dreaming

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    Yes!!! I am so excited!!
    August 12th, 2014 at 11:49pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    these boys are super fucking cute
    and so are these

    thoughts for characters and/or story page pic?
    August 13th, 2014 at 12:07am
  • Still Dreaming

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    Ahh the second pair of boys are too adorable. They made my heart melt!

    And I'm looking for Sloth right now ;) I'm all for character pages though. They give the readers an insight on what we're picturing!
    August 13th, 2014 at 12:20am
  • polka dot perfection

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    the only problem for a separate page for characters, is that the old characters page is still there and since I didn't make the characters, I can't delete them. It sucks:/ so I just put up a thing that's like "hey ignore the character page, it's irrelevenat to this story" and we can post pics wtih our characters on the main story page if that sounds good?
    August 13th, 2014 at 12:33am
  • yurio

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    Ugh, I think both pair are really cute, but the first pair is really freaking adorable!
    August 13th, 2014 at 12:39am
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    I think I like the first one best because they both look a little different and the dark haired boys are hot(and I feel like it would be better for an incest story because they look so alike lol) but the other two are just so cute:D WHAT IF THAT WAS WRATH AND PANDORA?

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    Also, we need to talk relationships. I like most of the ones the old one had:
    wrath/pandora
    greed/gluttony
    lust/envy

    but they had sloth loving gluttony and what if sloth and pride got together? it'd be even then and they'd all have their person (end goal here, they wouldn't start knowing which they liked or whatever)

    sloth/pride

    feel free to say whatever about which couples you like or don't like - basically I have a super strong opinion on most shit but i will always listen so don't mind if youre like hey bitch, look at this and it'll be better that way:D

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    guyyyyyss
    o.O
    what if we didn't tell anyone who was what sin?
    like as they start manifesting we try and make it confusing and then finally make the emotions/manifestation stronger?
    ooh and what if Pandora's "emotion" thing is a desire to do good? Like he wants to give strangers hugs and hold doors for people and stuff like that?
    August 13th, 2014 at 12:50am
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    AHH I LOVE IT ALL. I agree with Sloth and Pride, they're contradicting so it will make things super interesting. (pride wants to go on a jog, sloth wants to take a nap lol)

    But I also agree with keeping it a secret! That way everyone can guess who gets together!
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:14am
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    yessssssh:D
    OMFG WHAT IF WRATH AND PANDORA WERE ALREADY IN A RELATIONSHIP AND WRATH STARTS BECOMING ABUSIVE?
    ......nevermind. I'd rather them not have anything to do wtih one another before. :/ meh

    what social groups should each of them be in? And I'm thinking maybe two of them should be friends before, anyone have suggestions of which two?

    jock - wrath
    popular because rich - gluttony, greed
    loner - sloth
    cheerleader - pride
    popular becasue nice - pandora
    scene - lust, envy

    if any of that sounds even a little legit?
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:34am
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    Oh my goodness the layout is beautiful!
    And I think all of the pairings are perfect! And I also think keeping the sins a secret is a great idea.
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:36am
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    I'm cool with sloth being a loner!
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:39am
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    Is Pride a male Cheerleader?
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:50am
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    yeah I was just kinda like lol who could I picture sloth being wtih as a friend group? And no one really popped up. Like he has friends and shit just prefers his own company most of the time? (other than his pride lol)

    AND THAT PICTURE IS SO FUCKING CUTE. I LOVE

    oh shit, next quesiton, should we just pick names for them and then like once it comes out as what they are, they still call one another by their given name or they call one another by their sin? What if they did like regular name, then sin name and then as they accepted who they are they get all deep and shit and are like "our sins don't define us" and call one another by their names again? btw, can we please use that line somewhere I kinda fucking lvoe it:D
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:51am
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    and yeah, a male cheerleader for pride. I just pictured him always checking the compact and stuff (like he did last time) and i feel like it would fit in with his pride later.

    like for each of them, i want some of their sin in them already but like when it manifests, that's when they really realize it and it comes out in full force
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:52am
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    These are my ideas of who should be friends already: Pride/Envy or Gluttony/Lust or Pride/Wrath because jock/cheerleader haha I couldn't really choose. So, yeah one of those?
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:53am
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    YES YES YES. Please we have to use that line!! And yes we should give them names that they continue to use! That way it keeps it from
    Getting confusing.
    August 13th, 2014 at 01:54am
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    hmmm, I like pride/wrath and gluttony/lust as friends and what about envy and lust as friends and then they think about one another as more after the manifestation?
    August 13th, 2014 at 02:15am
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    I like that idea!!!
    August 13th, 2014 at 02:19am