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  • yurio

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    That sounds good! and I'm thinking about him for my guy. I dunno?
    August 13th, 2014 at 02:24am
  • Still Dreaming

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    He looks like he takes pride in his looks ;)
    August 13th, 2014 at 02:41am
  • yurio

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    yay! haha it was kinda hard trying to find the perfect guy
    August 13th, 2014 at 02:57am
  • polka dot perfection

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    I can't even comprehend how much I want this boy and this dog
    i love this tattoo - maybe wrath might have it I'm thinking
    aaaaaand introducing Wrath!
    August 13th, 2014 at 03:10am
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    and that looks perfect for pride:D
    August 13th, 2014 at 03:10am
  • Still Dreaming

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    Wait which one is wrath?!
    August 13th, 2014 at 03:21am
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    the third one:D
    when he's by himself on a bed. I just thought the boy with the dog was cute:)
    August 13th, 2014 at 03:32am
  • Still Dreaming

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    Oh! Gotcha! I thought the boy with the dog is really cute too! But the boy in the third picture has really cute pouty lips ;)

    But I really do like that tattoo. It's sick!
    August 13th, 2014 at 03:48am
  • polka dot perfection

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    like, I just want to crawl into bed with him. As in right fucking now. I have the horrible habit of falling in love with my characters and wishing they were real lol.

    Ummm...I was wondering how long do you guys want to wait for authors to respond about the message, like should a week be enough? Because if someone isn't on or doesn't respond in a week then it may not be the best for updating....idk

    and do you guys want to start talking character backgrounds or like overall plot we want to happen?
    August 13th, 2014 at 04:14am
  • Still Dreaming

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    I honestly think anything more than 3 days to respond to a message/ inquiry is a little much, but that's just because I check mibba every day lol (usually from my phone haha) but a week is fine!

    And I would love to start talking about that! Like are our boys just "normal" boys, in regular homes, with real parents, who just find out on their 18th bday that they're all "special"?
    August 13th, 2014 at 04:21am
  • yurio

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    I agree with Still Dreaming, because I also check my mibba everyday but we can definitely give them a week.

    And we should definitely start planning it out now.
    August 13th, 2014 at 04:34am
  • polka dot perfection

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    haha i actually totally agree wtih that. I check at least once daily. lol, a lot more when we have things like this. :D Also, because i'm super fucking excited and like can't wait for this. - I'm literally just staring at the page and seriously can't wait until they can snuggle and fuck one another:D (i picture them as wrath and pandora so...yep lollolololol)

    About the plan, I'm thinking like they don't find out on their 18th birthday, it's more like they feel funny that morning, maybe throwing up or something?, a side effect of the power coming to them and they feel like a very strong emotion that correlates to their sin, an that's how it starts. and after a while it gets stronger and they start acting on it slowly and then they realize it's more than that and somehow they figure out they can make others feel their "emotion" - each boy in various degrees of this stage of figuring shit out. And they all manifest, turn 18, throughout the school year by december and then like the day they let out of school, that c ould be pandora's bday(he's the youngest, manifests the last) and he like feels like he HAS TO get these boys together. he feels an attraction to them, but a familial one and they all find themselves looking out for them? Like maybe he goes to save a younger girl from getting hit by a car,(because of his power, shi desire to help others) but it puts him in danger and wrath like pulls him out of the way? Maybe rather than the old 'let's kill pandora' they ahve a feeling that they have to protect pandora and care for him because he is their keeper.

    and like when he gets home from school that day, pandora gets a thick journal book thing from the last pandora who like died at like 90 or some shit and has been with his sins for a long time and it tells pandora basically that he has to keep them out of trouble and from destroying the world and going apeshit and all that jazz? and has like tips on how to deal with each sin. and at the end, the old pandora tells him that when he's about to die, he'll just kind of KNOW who the next pandora will be and his adress to send it to him, but he'll die before they meet, it's one of those things that it has to be that way,

    and this part i'm not sure about, but they're all linked, their lives to one another, so like if one dies, they all will die in a certain period of time like a month or something because it'll tear them down?

    WHAT IF LIKE PRIDE WAS GOING TO KILL HIMSELF (AFTER MANIFESTATION)BECASUE HE THOUGHT SOME CRAZY ASS THING AND SLOTH SAVES HIM AND TELLS HIM ABOUT ALL THE REASONS HE CARES AND SHIT. -idk that was random lol

    so that was a ton of shit....haha but yeah, lemme know what you think:D
    August 13th, 2014 at 04:35am
  • Still Dreaming

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    (You guys can just call me Catie Wink )

    But I absolutely adore that entire plot line you just put out. It's absolutely thrilling! I like that Pandora isn't really their enemy either, but more of their glue now!

    And I especially like your idea for Pride and Sloth, I think that's super cute! I already have a little speech in mind for sloth to say if it pans out that way!!
    August 13th, 2014 at 04:55am
  • polka dot perfection

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    awesome!
    and you guys can call me Sari:D

    i feel like at least one of the guys needs to be struggling with his sexuality....maybe just one so the angst and shit isn't too much if they're all like nah i'm not gay. what if it's wrath? And he gets angry because he's finding guys attractive AFTER he manifests and it's just kind of everythings changing for him, and then lust can manifest and wrath and lust can fuck. (yes I just want to give my baby the D) but idk, what do you guys feel about them sleeping around or with eachother or something?
    August 13th, 2014 at 05:02am
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    I think it would make for a great story! Like they all mess around until they find the one they're "meant to be with" and then it's kind of like (excuse my lack of a better term) imprint on them! Like even though Lust imprints, he can still mess around. He will always just be like linked to his connecting sin and is always brought back to him!
    August 13th, 2014 at 05:08am
  • polka dot perfection

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    like, they just all kinda feel an attraction to one another but they imprint on their one love and even though they've imprinted, they can still fuck around with everyone else. ALL THE SEX. lolol mabad. :D

    I'm currently about to write a lemon so i'm like ALL THE LEMON MIND right now. haha Mr. Green
    August 13th, 2014 at 05:11am
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    Exactly!! I love it xD I'm so excited to get this into motion!!
    August 13th, 2014 at 05:16am
  • polka dot perfection

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    I'm so fucking excited, like legit:D

    Also, I'm thinking of naming Wrath Acrimony or Asperity - both mean like harshness of tone/disposition and stuff like that. (totally looked into the thesaurus and those popped up under wrath and I was like YES.)
    August 13th, 2014 at 05:22am
  • yurio

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    This all sounds really great! I also like the Pride and Sloth idea. And also with Wrath and his sexuality. That totally fits. And just so you guys know I've never written a sex scene before so I'm pretty sure I'll suck at it, so you guys have to really help me out with that. lol

    Oh, and you guys can call me Britt. c:
    August 13th, 2014 at 05:24am
  • polka dot perfection

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    haah I'm sure it'll be fine! Just read a lot of lemons and you'll get the hang of it lol. I feel like I haven't written that many but like...I straight up have stories that every other chapter someone's getting some....lol. like this and this lol I only recommend them because I had a coauthor who was super good at lemons and her writing was awesome for them. Unfortunately she deleted like aaaaal of her old stories so i'm like great. lol

    also, chapters around 1,000 words work for everyone?

    and if no one else writes back, would you guys be okay with just the three of us writing? (hopefully at least one other person will be interested but in case not) we'd do three, three, two (i'd take a three)
    August 13th, 2014 at 05:33am