@ Katie Mosing
omg, I'm dying. I love your chapter so much, and Eden!!
It's a def relief that we have her and Jenny compared to the rest of the badasses in the story. You have a few words over me, your word count was 2795 and mine was 2729, so I'm good with long.
I had more to read! And I enjoyed every single bit of it!
Now I'm just wondering if I should make Liam and Grace know each other from Before. I'm thinking that maybe they met through gaming, or something and exchanged pictures and whatnot. Or maybe he just likes the way she looks.
Hm... next round of chapters would be the meeting of two groups, I know that for sure. That might be a little tense, with Michael and all. Do we know which chapter will be them meeting at the lake house? I guess we should figure that out before we find out what happens in the next couple.
OH MY GOD, okay so I was thinking that maybe my second chapter or third Grace will be lost in thought or whatever and there will be a 'flashback' with either Louis talking to her about his new girlfriend, or maybe of her meeting Liam somewhere... Just before they all meet up.
What do you think?