1D Superhuman School Group-Write

@ charity_hope
Oh okay well then yay x3 ^.^

AGH YOU CALLED ME BRILLIANT <3 thank you but omg x3 WELL THEY'RE ADORABLE SO THERE hahahaa

I think so, too! It's beautiful o_o I'm excited to hear their responses. And for their chapters! It's going to be kickass.

@ the_truth_hurts
So... we should start outlining our chapters.

Anyway, will the test for the entrance into the brotherhood start in the beginning and we'll kick the story off from there and somewhere in the middle, they'll start fighting real enemies? I just don't see the need to drag out and put in filler chapters since it'll bore the readers.

What we have so far is the first chapter.

First chapter
Liam arriving and Freya trying to read his mind but unable to and Liam learns the rumours between Zayn and Freya.

Second chapter
They learned that the school is recruiting for the brotherhood so Scar asked Nuriko to participate in the test along with her. And Zayn and Freya signing up their names as well.

Third chapter
Maybe the start of the first test? And they're divided into groups. Are we making them having test as groups or individually? I personally think it'll be better if they take it as groups since it'll test their team work.

Fourth chapter
The clash of personalities between the characters make it hard for them to work together. Their first argument, maybe?

Fifth chapter
Our characters reach the last round of test but they still need to learn to trust each other and work together.

And when will their school get attacked?

@ kit walker.
@ EmzyStilinski
@ TrAp DeMoN
I hope you guys don't mind we kinda discussed things without you guys. If you want to change anything, it's totally fine.

And the above outline is just a suggestion. Nothing is set in stone yet.

And, do we need a name for the brotherhood? And the evil organisation as well.

@ charity_hope
I think the evil organization should be called 'Twisted' but it's just a suggestion :3

@ TrAp DeMoN
Love that :) "Twisted". Sounds cool. Should it stand for anything? Like, maybe it's TWST'd, pronounced "Twisted" and it stands for... The Weak Separate the Damned. Oooor Technical Warfare Standards Testing.... if they're some kind of company hiding a mutant army sort of thing... If that makes sense >_>

@ charity_hope
I'll write the rest in a minute lol I'm getting off work now so I have to clock out and move to a different computer >.> brb!

@ TrAp DeMoN
Love that :) "Twisted". Sounds cool. Should it stand for anything? Like, maybe it's TWST'd, pronounced "Twisted" and it stands for... The Weak Separate the Damned. Oooor Technical Warfare Standards Testing.... if they're some kind of company hiding a mutant army sort of thing... If that makes sense >_>

@ charity_hope
I'll write the rest in a minute lol I'm getting off work now so I have to clock out and move to a different computer >.> brb!

I agree with everything discussed lol

The Weak Separate the Damned is awesome sauce. I also like the way Simone can manipulate Freya. I so wanna start my chapter now.

@ TrAp DeMoN
@ the_truth_hurts
I like the name. Kinda like WICKED for The Maze Runner series. We also need the name for the brotherhood, don't we?

@ EmzyStilinski
And I can't wait for you to start your chapter so that we can get the ball rolling and start the story.

Now, we need summary, layout and title.

@ charity_hope
Once we get the summary and title, we also need to make the page :3

@ TrAp DeMoN
Yes... the layout and the banner. And do we want to add Characters page to our story?

@ charity_hope
that would be cool, i think yes :)

@ TrAp DeMoN
Agreed ^.^ Characters page = yay. Who's up for doing the layout? :D personally if no one else would like to, I'd like to take a crack at it :3

@ charity_hope
Hmmm.... Summary... I'm excited haha, maybe if you guys don't mind, I'll try to write one up and then you guys can tell me whether you wanna use it? And omg

@ EmzyStilinski
I am literally so excited for your chapter x__x

@ the_truth_hurts
You can do the layout and summary. Honestly, those are my least favorite part of starting a story.

@ charity_hope
No way, seriously? lol that's funny because I love doing layouts and summary x3 :D

ANYWAY but to reply to yesterday's stuff x3 I love the chapter outline!! I think it's perfect. I'm dying to get this thing rollin' x_x It is going to be awesome on so many levels.

I think the attack should happen just as they begin the final round of tests - like, there's all this pressure on them because if those of them who haven't passed and been recruited yet (maybe like two or three of them get recruited after the second test?), they lose the chance entirely and go back to just being students. Not to mention that the professors know they need them, so it's a last chance situation for everyone.

And then BAM! Attack. After it's over, they all get recruited, but with a warning that this is only temporary because the school needs every pair of hands it can get, and if they screw anything up, it isn't just themselves or the school that go down, they could actually lose a life among the team. Tough love/hardass type thing.

thoughts?

@ the_truth_hurts
I suck at summary and I was told once that my layout is 'mediocre but whatever'. So it's the part that gives me the most pressure whenever I'm starting a new story.

I like that idea. Like... it's do or die situation.

This story turns to be deeper than just a story about a bunch of teenagers in a mutant school.

@ charity_hope

Yeah, it totally does >.> But honestly I like that about it ^.^ I always love the stories that go deeper than you thought they would

hopefully we can really explore with this one :3 and whatEVER. mediocre my ass, whoever said that doesn't know what they're talkin' about Dx your stuff is amazing and I will happily attest to that.

;glkahg;agh this story man

also I cannot get this lyric out of my head for some strange reason

It took me some time, but I figured out how to fix up a heart that I let down.

@ charity_hope
@ TrAp DeMoN
@ EmzyStilinski
(still don't know how to @reply to people on other pages -.- ... so Mari lol)

Hey, can we come up with a title? anybody have suggestions? :3

@ the_truth_hurts
Yeah, me too! I especially love the small details that's actually more important that you think.

Aww... you're so nice!

WHERE DO BROKEN HEARTS GO!

Title... title... (another thing that I really suck at )

.... ten minutes later, I still can't come up with anything.

I'll get back to you with title ideas. I'd just woken up, literally. It's 6 am here so my brain kinda doesn't want to cooperate right now.

@ EmzyStilinski
@ kit walker.
@ the_truth_hurts
@ TrAp DeMoN

1. Escaping Disasters (just because I love this title)
2. Critical Interference (the meaning behind this is totally nerdy )
3. The Ally of Justice (this is actually a title from a Japanese drama/manga)
4. Reasons to Fight (this is a pretty straightforward title)

Those are all the titles idea that I have and I know they suck.

@ charity_hope
I like the first two

@ charity_hope @ the_truth_hurts @ TrAp DeMoN @ EmzyStilinski

Hiii, sorry I've been busy in like..forever! Exam week, been trying to work on the sequel to my Hayliver one shot, and aunt's house with lack of wifi. Sigh~ v.v

But I really dig the titles! Especially Escaping Disasters, totally goes well with the story in my opinion.

Sooo, this is kind my idea for like the summary and all, aha.

Title: _____________
*A few ideas I came up with were Saving the World (it sucks, haha), Protectors of the World, Hometown Teen Heroes or Stanton's Teen Heroes, either one, or The Gifted vs. The World. I dunno, they kinda suck but just throwing some ideas out there, aha.

Description (if ya want one): 10 individuals, one school. Fighting crime one step at a time.

Summary:


Here you will find a variety of different teens with different powers. Each and every student is unique in their own ways, and for that reason, it is our mission to guide them to the right path. To teach them to use their powers for the greater good and not lead them to the evil path in which they shall use their powers to destroy all of humanity.

Our purpose here in Stanton's Academy for the Gifted is to train these fine, young teenagers to become the next league of superheroes. To train them to defeat TWISTED (The Weak Separate the Damned). For all you mutants that are seeking help on controlling your powers, call us now or visit our website to enroll soon.

Join us as we embark on a journey to witness ten individuals come together to fight TWISTED.



So what do you think? Boring or no? Doesn't fit really well or no? I dunno, I just kinda wanted it to be a bit different from most of the summaries here.