Aubrey's Editing Shop

@ RonnieRadke;
Yes I am!

Would love to have another pair of eyes view my story for errors.

@ Autumn McJavabean
Of course! You can send it here or in a message; either is fine with me!

@ aubs
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/621321/Mystic/

As of August 14th, this shop is OPEN.

Current Story: http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/618764/The-Death-List/
Type of Errors: I have a problem with punctuation, run-on sentences, and tenses switching on me. However, anything you notice that I could improve on would be a big help.
Genre: I'm not sure exactly the best genre, maybe fantasy?
Status: On-Going

I hope you're still taking requests. I could really use some help.

Title + Link: http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/622450/First-Impressions-James-Norrington-Series-Book-1/
Type of editing required: Grammar, clarity and conciseness, story flow, general feedback on the story as a whole, character development, and, if it's possible, whether or not I'm keeping the characters in character.
Genre: Fan fiction, romance, drama
Status: On-Going, Slow Updates
Date you would like it to be finished by: Considering the length of the first two chapters I currently have written, anywhere between a week to two weeks from now is fine.