Are you still available for editing?
Story:
PerfectWhat you need: Everything. I feel like something's off, but I can't tell what. The story up currently is obviously trash, but even the re-write I'm doing feels wrong.
To be finished by: N/A
Extra tidbits: The summary feels lacking, but I'm okay with it being the way it is. The character page is for decoration, and I have ideas of my characters but I feel like they need more development before the story can actually be
good. I'm just not sure how to go about it.