Edits by Bridgette

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one. Only one request may be open per person at a time. Once I have finished, you may request again.
two. I will edit full stories or single chapters. If you have a full story you need beta'd then please PM me first to discuss.
three. Any rating and any type of work goes, but I do not accept incest or m-preg.
four. Pre-existing work is acceptable, work-in-progress will need to be emailed or linked to a Google document
five. Please be clear about the type of edit you want: spelling, grammar, punctuation type or a full critique of your work? Let me know your needs.
six. Credit must be given* If you do not credit me, I will approach you once. After that you will be blacklisted from requesting.
seven. Once your request is filled, please edit your post to say "completed" or to strike it through.

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‣ Edited by [url=http://www.mibba.com/Member/138683/]Bridgette[/url].

‣ Edit by [url=http://www.mibba.com/Forums/Topic/187681/Bridgettes-Mibba-Shop/]Edits by Bridgette[/url].

‣ Spotting any spelling and punctuation errors, as well as grammatical errors
‣ Spotting lack of variation in sentence structure word use - i.e. paragraphs that start with "the" or dialogue frequently
‣ Further, with word use I notice when words are used repetitively in a way that might be noticeable and can suggest alternative words
‣ Am able to help formulate an appealing summary
‣ I usually pick up on holes (contradictions, inconsistencies) in your story or character development - i.e. one chapter says MC is doing X but the next says they did Y
‣ Pick up on any formatting issues - i.e. inconsistency in italicized/bold/underlined things like thought patterns and missing paragraph breaks
‣ I can also help with development for your characters or story in general

‣ A request form is filled out and left here
‣ Your information will be placed in the waiting room and I will PM you to confirm your request or get a copy of an un-posted piece
‣ You will be asked before and after the piece is edited if you have any questions or concerns
‣ The piece will be edited and you will receive the edited copy from me
‣ If a second look is requested I will begin that and can either OK it or send back a second edit if so wished
‣ The above can be repeated as many times as you'd like and once everything is done and you've seen through rules #6 and #7, I'll take you off the waiting room list

‣ Title: Please link the piece or let me know if it's unpublished
‣ Type: Story, poem, article
‣ Deadline: When do you need this complete?
‣ Editing required: See rule #5
‣ Additional details: Anything else you would like me to know, questions you have, etc.
‣ TW: Please let me know if your story involves a suicide trigger warning[b]Title:[/b]
[b]Type:[/b]
[b]Deadline:[/b]
[b]Editing required:[/b]
[b]Additional details:[/b]
[b]TW:[/b]Don't forget to DM me to discuss if you need a complete story beta - i.e. multiple chapters/something more than a four-shot

Title: Nitrous
Type: Story
Deadline: None
Editing required: A full critique please... I really want this story to be good
Additional details: I don't think there is anything :/
TW: No Trigger Warnings

@ The Alpha's Angel
This should be no problem then I'll try to get it done this week!

Thanks