Best: This is for my story
War on the WindIt's rare for me to find a war story that I actually enjoy. Normally because people tend to use certain words which makes the story seem too cheesy and unprofessional, I don't honestly know how to explain it. However, this was a really good story. The words flowed together and I was able to see the images in my head, like with the fallen wall. "wind now whipping his tangle of auburn hair around, drying his previously sweat glistening forehead" is perfect example of what I mean.
Another thing that I love, is that you included women in the squads. I know, silly, but it seems so often that people leave women completely out of the battle field, which to me, makes it more unrealistic. So, having women soldiers just made it all the better.
This is random, but I have this music playing in the background... which makes the Venator segment seem all that more thrilling.
Worst:
Getting no review. But I don't think my story's been out long enough currently, so haven't had comments that just say PM me or anything. Lol, maybe they just don't like me aye.
Stupidest... None so far.