Your First Story

Okay, we all know that most, if not everyone, on this forum didn't start out as geniuses of the written word. In fact, I have a feeling some of the best writers on this site had pretty humble beginnings. So, I challenge you all, find the earliest story you have written and dare to either post a link or a snidbit in this thread. Dare yourself to admit that at one point...you....couldn't...write...O_O....

And just to show you guys I mean business...I am going to show you the worse story ever written in a Zelda fandom. My story, written when I was 13...or 14.

Dontclickthelink

....I beg you to forgive me *sobs*

Haha...weren't we just talking about this? Hanyways, my first stories...are all kind of gone now.

My first fic to be posted on the internet anywhere was called "I Spy". DBZ fandom. *cringes*. I posted one chapter and decided I couldn't go through with it. But it was Bulma/Vegeta AU. But its waaay gone now.

My first fanfiction since the DBZ thing was posted on GSB. When I was so amazed and delighted to find that there was such a thing as Green Day fanfiction, I gobbled up whatever stories I could find. And then, I wrote one of my own. It's called It Wasn't

This is a conversation between Billie Joe and the main character in chapter 3:

"Mind if I join you?" said someone. Alice looked up and saw Billie Joe himself. Feeling her face go red, she got up to run. "No," he said, watching her. "Don't leave." She didn't understand why, but she listened, and sat back down.
"I'm so sorry," was all she could manage to say.
"Sorry?" he asked quizzically
"I'm so sorry," Alice repeated.
"Why should you be sorry? I'm not sorry that a pretty girl just tried to kiss me."
"What?" she said, completely thrown off be this. "You're married!" Billie blushed.
"And that means I'm not supposed to enjoy it?"

Yes we were XD Our conversation is what inspired this thread Woot. And that's not as bad as my peice of shit story. In fact, thats gold compared to mine. I like dare anyone to top that shit up there- dare you. XD

Oo I'll have to fish for my first ever story. When I come back and post it, those who laugh will wake up bald. x]

I deleted my first story :tehe: It was pitiful...

My first Green Day fanfic was "Mantra of Lies". Well... I wrote it in June or something though. So hehe.
The first story I really worked on though, was a Harry Potter fic called "Recovering Past". I wrote ti when I was 10 or 11, it was shitty and horrible, I cringe while I read it. Oh my god.. D:

Be afraid. Be VERY afraid.

My first ever fanfiction was Teen Titans, and it sucked ASS. I was thirteen when I wrote it. :XD But my first MyChem fanfic was pretty okay, if I do say so myself. :D

Isa you're awesome :tehe:

When I get home, I'll dig out one of my old fics.
... Maybe.

^^Mammy's mocking me. :P

I did say it sucked ass. :XD

My first MCR fanfic sucked [and it still sucks because I haven't deleted it] and the only reason it's even still up is because I can whore stories on it.
^_^
Review whore = Yeya.

I dunno what my FIRST story was, but when I was little I used to re-write endings to fairy tales or change them to make like Snow White the hero because I hated the whole 'maiden' image where they need a man to save them because they were weak.

I still have the smae obsession with Disney movies but I prefer things like Mulan and Atlantis.

Anyway... My first Mibba story it's... different. I do like the title though.

OMFG don't click

:lmfao
That's when some really nice chick gave me tips...because I didn't seperated dialog. Aha. The good old days >_> The plotline sucked, too.

My first fic on here was I'm Willing To Take My Chances. It was better than what I used to write, but it still sucked compared to what I'm writing now.

First INO fic was something that I inserted myself in and apparently I did Gerard Way in a mental hospital =/

My first proper finished story was Teenagers.
I'm actually really proud of it.

My first fanficiton was a McFly one. -waits to be slain-.
I'm still writing it though, since 2005. 0.o

The first notebook was a disaster. I had just started taking writing seriously and it was my first time writing in English.

Until now I have written 11 notebooks but the first four majorly sucked. I typed out ,maybe, 3 chapters from the first one -I laughed my heart out doing so- and I think I may post them here.

It was horrible really.

First chapter to my first story

Ohhh GOD. XD

I used to have this medieval thing going.
It was just... bad.
I was eleven though, so shut up.

THE CHILL AIR WHIPPED LYMANCEON’S hair around his face as he was paraded through the streets of Carova, capital city of Mordakre, and home of the king, Shanag. The angry crowds hissed and shouted insults as he passed, but he made no sign of anger or humiliation. He tripped over a stone on the path and stumbled, but the guard caught him, shoving him forward roughly with a kick.

It was only hours before that he had been riding towards the city, pursued by several of the king’s guards. He was the man responsible for revolting, resulting in a ten-year long war that ravaged the kingdom and the land surrounding it. Even the common people despised him for the state they were in now, although deep down, even they knew it had been none of his doing. Indeed, they had been eager enough to revolt, Shanag was not a gracious king, nor a gentle one. Everyone had once hated their leader as they now hated Lymanceon.

A voice was calling his name, a voice that he knew well, having heard it every day throughout his childhood. “Lymanceon! Lymanceon!” Sorhan, his sister, called. “Lymanceon! Don’t tell them anything! Don’t...!” Guards were holding her, too, and one cuffed her on the side of the face.

“Get your hands off my sister!” Lymanceon croaked, voice nearly gone from disuse and lack of drink. The guard behind him kicked him again, and he nearly tripped once more. As he was half-dragged along, he could her Sorhan sobbing, somewhere in the crowd behind him.

Soon the mighty gates of the castle rose into view. It was a magnificent sight, but gave Lymanceon no thrill, nor any hope. As they waited for the massive gates to open, Lymanceon could clearly hear a group of noble women tittering. He knew that he was considered quite handsome by many, but cared not a bit. His heart now lay in freedom for his people, freedom from this tyrant Shanag, who had lured them to his side with promises of wealth and prosperity.

He held his head high as he was lead into the immense throne room. Shanag sat on a luxurious solid gold throne backed against the opposite wall. The guards led him down a long red carpet laid from the door to the throne, as another laughing crowd, Shanag’s advisors and court, mocked him loudly.

Yet, when he reached the throne, there was silence.
“So… at last the great Lymanceon is a guest in my halls,” Shanag laughed. “Oft I have dreamed of such a thing.”

“I’ll bet you have!” Lymanceon spat. But the king only smiled condescendingly. “Has our hero fallen so low as to attempt to trade petty insults with his king?”

Does first story ever written have to count as fanfiction or something online?

Because my first real story was in elementary school. :/

But I can't really remember what my first story I posted was. It was probably about two years ago on GSB.

songbird.:

Does first story ever written have to count as fanfiction or something online?

Because my first real story was in elementary school. :/

But I can't really remember what my first story I posted was. It was probably about two years ago on GSB.

No, it can include your first story you wrote on paper. I have veen writing since the 5th grade, but I have no idea were those stories are >_O Infact, that story I posted, isn't even my first. My first was called The Legend of Zelda: The Beast from the Past.

Egg-jactly. The one I posted wasn't my very first either. I wrote a bunch for school and a bunch about talkigng animals and a bunch about medieval fairies and stuff.