Your First Story

I’m not sure if I remember my very first story. I think I wrote it when I was nine or something. It was about a Viking. We had to write it. I don’t think there’s a point in typing up anything that old though because it’s all written in Swedish anyway. Besides, those probably aren’t worth reading.

My first fanfiction though, Billie Joe Decided to Shut the Door to His Past Once and For All, I’m still working on. I think I posted the first chapter like 2 years ago or something. It was originally on GSB in any case. No, it’s not extremely long, I’ve had extremely little amount of time to write on it. Looking back on it there’s a few things I wouldn’t have included if I’d started to write it now but I still think it’s pretty good.

When I was four, I made stories about lions and birds. It would be about them being in a family, going to school, and stuff like that. I actually think I have it in a box my mom keeps things like that in.

I wrote my first story ever probably when I was five. I'd write about randomn stuff I saw on tv. I don't even remember what I wrote.

On Mibba, it's this.

It's actually the only completed chaptered story I have on here. I was proud I finally finished something.

But now that I look back and read it, I realize...it's so damn cheesy. It's actually pretty funny. And I wrote this back in August.

My writing has pretty much stayed the same. Somewhat suckish. So I have to go work on that...

I remember the first properly written story of mine...
it was about a princess.
And it was, like, five pages long.
I think it was called "The Princess of Yashi" :shock:
Someday I will find it and post it on here for the hell of it.

All my old, old stuff is in boxes in the garage.
It's from, like, 6th and 7th grade.
Back in the 90s.

All my really old stuff (Year 2 here, not classwork) is in a file at the top of my wardrobe.

-shudders-
I don't go up there much. It'sa little messy.

First story was in kindergarten/first grade. I can't remember exactly when. But I do remember the story vividly. "Detective Elizabeth and the Case of the Missing Diamond." I was a big mystery buff. XD Two pages typed out and I thought it was the best thing ever. Her best friend was named Raven and her boyfriend was named Preston. XD

First fanfic was My Chemical Romance. The most cliche thing I could imagine to spew from my mind. I wrote the entire thing in like, a night...

Hah.
Go look at my series of stories starting with I Will Die In this Place, and you'll see I was a shit writer. hah.

I'm planning on editing them sometime, but I really don't have the time right yet. I'm surprised another editor hasn't suspended them.

...don't suspend them, anyone, haha. :cheese:

I can't actually remember my first ever story. Aaaaages ago :/
But my first fanfic was real crap. I wrote like, 2 chapters, put them on piczo and threw away the papers, which had more to it. I think it was Cute Is What We Aim For/Panic!/Fall Out Boy/2 other random bands and it was just rlyrlyrly shit.
I don't even wanna think about it xD

My first fanfic was a letter to some kid in a mystery series. it went
"Der Nate,
I think you shud try pissa cuz it has cheez and serclez on it.
Lov,
Marissa"
i was five or six at the time of publication.
XD

I'm soooo embarrassed with my first stories. I was thirteen, and it was before I discovered the wonderful world of slash. So all my most fanfics were het :cheese:

terrible, I know. >.>

HP was my first fandom--->Lily/James

Bask in the horror. lmao. I'll never delete my account though, so I can always look back and have a good laughat myself

Nicee.
My very first story was "Hotel Nights" It's an MCRfanfiction...
I deleted it. But I will post a link of it.

I'm actually proud of that story. Because I got the most critism about it.
& Because of that story, I got better.

Oh my god. I only wrote both of these like, last year, so yeah. Laugh all you want.

“I’m going on tour with panic!” I shouted into the receiver.
Of course my friends were green with envy
“cool” they said un-enthusiasticly
I ran all over the house to find my iPod video. I finally found it in the library
“oh, by the way dad, im leaving for a few months”
“no your not” he said sternly
“it’s my off year” I whined
“where are you going?” he asked
“on tour” I replied happily
“with that boyfriend of yours?” he asks, I nod
“when?” he asks
“leaving tomorrow” I say
“ok…” he finally agrees

That was a panic! fic, I wrote it just after I discovered fanfiction. I still read it sometimes and laugh at myself for being such an idiot.

Then there was another panic! fic I wrote, just after I discovered the wonderful world of changing point's of view.

[ ella ]
I glanced around the room, to see ryan looking at me.
I gave him a small smile, and he blushed
Aw, how cute
He was cute when he blushed,
Damn, he was cute anyway

[ ryan ]
I wish she was mine.

[ ella ]
I wish i was his

[ ryan ]
She looked gorgeous, with her light brown, loose curled hair, her top that said ‘Innocent’, damn straight she was. And her faded and ripped skinny leg jeans.
I stood there admiring her... That is until Brendon nudged me in the ribs

Lols. Every paragraph was a new PoV. Amuses me...

I've been writing since the 5th grade, but my first
proper story was called "A Weird Valentine's Day" in sixth grade
and now that I look back at it, I realized how bad at writing I was.

The story is five pages long and it wasn't even planned to be that long.
My teacher told us to do an activity on Valentine's Day and it was for us
to write a story that included the words from the heart candies given.
I had one that said "be mine" and thought of a plot and apparently, I
went to far and didn't want to stop. Everyone in the class kept wanting
to read it, but now I don't know why. XD

This is my first attempt at a proper story, I've only tried to do two and the second I'm still dogging at, but this one is called Dark Snow and these are the 5 opening paragraphs:

"The wind howled and whistled through the trees no creature could of heard the quiet whine from under the scant cover of a rock was a dark shape, and next to it was a pale white small bundle from whence the noise came it came again louder this time.
She was cold though she didn’t know it, just that it wasn’t right, she crawled slowly keeping to the soft warmth further along she found a nook and curled up still whining but soon fell asleep hungry and exhausted.

Dark ran, she was well behind him now but he didn’t want to stop, he loved to run and he really didn’t want to face Whisp, he had growled, turned away even snapped at her but she didn’t take the hint, sure she would be a great mate but she just wouldn’t leave him alone, so finally he had had it, he ran and had no intention of going back.
He could cope alone; he only had himself to feed how hard could it be? He was a good hunter and could fight so on he ran only stopping for a drink and a couple hours rest then away he went. Wisp would never come this far from the pack and this finally stopped him at a stream, where he curled up in some leaves under a tree and slept.
What was that tinkling noise? Dark opened his eyes, a stream? The pack was not sleeping near a stream at the moment. He got up, looking round he remembered he had left the pack. Getting a drink he noticed a gnawing at his stomach and set off to find food. He soon caught sent of a nice meal and slowed to a walk following it, when he got nearer he went down and in crouch moved slowly, silently hidden by bush, he watched a group of potential prey and waited for an opportune moment to attack. "

I really wanted to edit bits and put in punctuation before I put it up be I resisted :) this is it, all raw and un-edited. Some of it doesn't even make sense!

It took me a while to write my first story on Mibba, because I wanted it to be good. Then, an idea came to me at like 4 am in the morning and I instantly began typing like mad @-@

[url]http://www.mibba.com/story/_57236/Untaint-My-Love] This [/url] is it. It's about anorexia.

My first ever story was on Quizilla and it was a fanfic that contained some of the most important things not to do in a story (Mary-Sue OC, typical cinderella story-ish plotline, etc). Though this is mostly on the account of that I was only 11-years-old and thought that it was a norm to do so in fanfics....

...and I didn't even knew what a Mary-Sue is in the first place. :shifty

Boy, I definitely changed my view after a couple years. :file:

No way I could find my first story. I'm sure I threw it away. But I was six so...

I have a fanfiction.net account. I used to write Harry Potter. It's one of my dirty little secrets, but oh well. My older fandoms are scarier.

My worst [posted] Harry Potter fic ever: Princess of Silence. You have a really bad OFC, a not well-executed plotline, and all the rest of it.

My Fanfiction.net Account. Not everything is bad, but you can definitely see how I've improved in the last three years.

Let's see what else I have...

My worst MCR fics ever [fandomination.net]. Way Reality. Het. [I used to always start off writing het and then switch to slash, but no longer. I have learned the way of the samuri.]
Two For Tragedy. It isn't horrible, but it does have some mistakes in it that I would never dare repeat. Like abnormal recovery following a rape. I mean, Mikey kisses a boy a few days after he gets raped. No. And I think it's entirely too fast-paced.

My worst Green Day fanfics [fandomination.net, though it's also on AFF if I didn't delete it]:
Two Singers, A Songwriter, and a Cute Little Gay Boy. My first Green Day fic. Mary-Sued self-insertion. Too much of everything. Pure terror, I assure you. OH. And random Gerard Way dating an old friend of mine.

My first story is on here, in Mibba. Actually it had 10 stars, but I think it's like, flooded with cliché and sheer impossibility. It disgusts me, but it's still up for reasons stated on the story description.

A Picture Changed My Life Forever. I'm proud of it though, kind of. It was the first story I ever completed and it's MCR. That makes me happy.

I wrote a lot when I was a kid.
I can't remember oh-that-well.
I know that I had this story about a girl who goes into her closet and finds a moon, so she walks through a road in space and finds doors on the moon, and goes in and finds twin faries, one really powerful and good, the other one evil and dark.
:XD
I also, age nine, did video game fan fic for Shadow
Gate 64, without knowing what it really was.
:file:

Tons of ideas were there. I can't rember which ones I
began to write first. I had one about a girl at the fair
who gets stolen. And a reaper female who meets Grim.
...I kind of like that one.
:weird

My first Mibba story was Don't Stop if I Fall.
It was about Gerard being a killer.
And it was really badly written.
:roll:
I'm not actually done typing it up, though.