Your First Story

My first story was a Pete Wentz fanfic. Him and my character were in high school, and it took me two years to realize just how much the story basically sucked. I would make it better if I wasn't so lazy!

My first story was a gerard Way one-shot for a friend and I doubt I would post it, cause that defeats the purpose of personalised kinky one-shots.

My first story is gone.
Thankfully.
But it was a harry potter story.
And the first chapter was like 200 words long.
D:

My first story sucked soo bad. I think I was like nine when I wrote it...
It was an MCR story and I thought I was so cool because it was titled 'Starcrossed Lovers'
**shudders** I'm extremely glad no one has ever read that O_o
The basic plot line was there were five girls that transfered to a school that the guys of MCR went to, and they all kind of fell in love instantly. It was pitiful. I think the whole story only went over the corse of a day, and it was like 73 pages long. O_o

All I can say is...Pete Wentz the vampire. :lmfao

The first story I posted was on Quizzilla, a Fall Out Boy fanfic. It was badly written with a sucky plot line. It was about how I rescued drunk Fob from a bouncer named Bub >.>
I basically took them back to my condo on the zillionth floor and made them pancakes and vegan sausages. When I read it other after I posted it, I deleted my account because it was so embarrassing. My first story on here is like the fifth story I've ever written but the second fanfic I've ever written. The last four or so were like years ago, back when I was still a hormonal pre-teen. Now I'm just an obsessed hormonal teen.

I can't remember which of these two came first, but whatever. They're equally terrible.

One was called Role Model and it was a Fall Out Boy fanfic I wrote when I think I was 11 or 12 or something. Anyways, it was about an abused kid whose parents died and his stepparents had sex on the couch every day and his sister commited suicide, and then OHMYGOD Pete Wentz is his uncle. It was on Quizzilla, but I deleted it.

And this stinker...oh man...Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy fanfic. Mandy dies. Yeah, it sucked. But hey, I quoted Fall Out Boy...

...I honestly can't pick what the worst of my stories are XD
My FIRST however was this FAIL Naruto fanfic... it was so SI and Mary Sue and ICK. The only thing good I got out of it was my nickname, Icamane. So that's where my username came from
If it was still on Quizilla I would post a link, but...
Here's the first story I ever finished. It's totally fail XD

I do not have a link of the story, but I posted my first story on quizilla. It was pretty bad... But I deleted it.

My first story was a pokemon fanfic...
I wrote it in third grade.
I don't have it. I don't even remember what happened in it.

I do remember my first story that I wrote on the internet. It was on Quizilla and it was one of the random anime "talkshows".
Oh gosh, it was awful. Riddled with chatspeak and anime characters I hated dying. I'm ashamed of that. I deleted around the time I started writing properly.

I don't have my first story. ='(

The first story I wrote was based off the movie "Volcano". I remember almost everything in it. I wrote it in third grade, and if I do say so myself, for a third grader, the story was pretty advanced...... I hope that didn't sound arrogant.

My story The Life of an Alchemist and I am working on a sequel. I have to say, I think I am doing pretty well for my first story EVER!

Well I currently don't have the story but it was called... I honestly can't remember. It was basically about some kids that were trapped on an Island but I barely got into it
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A disaster of mine though would have to be Mesozoic Era. It was a class assignment at first and I started to turn it into a sci-fi novel. Well it was a fucking disaster because I was too scared to let the main characters get hurt and my eighteen year old acted like a twelve year old (I was thirteen when I wrote the story). So I'm going to rewrite it because the plot is good.

Then there's my longest and biggest disaster Midnight Sun. I don't even want to begin. I've started to delete some of the story it was so bad and I don't have it anywhere on this site. But I have the rewrite on the site and it's 1,000,000 times better than the original. It's called Eternal Love. Same story, same plot but different details and different personalities, different backgrounds also but it's close to the original. God, that was terrible. People liked the shitty read too. It was on quzilla but I deleted it but I still kept writing it afterward. But when I looked back at the beginning to the middle, to the end, my writing improved greatly and the started looked non-matching, shitty and I didn't know where the fuck it was going plot wise. So I put in in oblivion and started on my first masterpiece Extranormal (it's completed)

Now all my writings are much better and are nothing like my previous writings.

My first story ever? I wrote it in the third grade. It was based on my mom and her bowling team, my old elementary school friends- Josh and Savanna, and me.

Alynitca Cubilla (me) admires her mother, Susan, and her ace bowling ball skills. But what happens when Ben, the team's star player, snaps his wrist the day before the game? Quick and kind Alynitca is there to save the day! But how can Susan teach Aylnitca, Josh, and Savanna the rules and tricks of the game within a day?

I started writing in the third grade, stories like Gutter Ball and A Fishy Mystery. But my first 'official' story was How To Stop Love In Its Tracks. I swear to God, if anyone finds my first stories I'll die, they were so terrible.

But to this day I still have an attachment to Gutter Ball.

My first story is in my notebook and it was an original--kinda--that had a spin on Alice in Wonderland. I should probably burn it haha

My first mibba story, because god forbid, I think I wiped my first story from my memory and face of the planet.

The Egg
And it has nothing to do with being pregnant (all of my family and friends thought so.)

Elwood Blues.:

I can't remember which of these two came first, but whatever. They're equally terrible.

One was called Role Model and it was a Fall Out Boy fanfic I wrote when I think I was 11 or 12 or something. Anyways, it was about an abused kid whose parents died and his stepparents had sex on the couch every day and his sister commited suicide, and then OHMYGOD Pete Wentz is his uncle. It was on Quizzilla, but I deleted it.

And this stinker...oh man...Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy fanfic. Mandy dies. Yeah, it sucked. But hey, I quoted Fall Out Boy...

NEVERMIND. I found the first story I ever wrote. (Well, my brother typed it up.) I was four - it's from March 7th, 1999.

Once apone a time, the Suntan lotion went to the market. It sawded the Waterproof Water, its friend. The Suntan lotion & the Waterproof Water went for a BIG BURGER KING BURGER! They eated the burger & then playded on the playground. They both fauded & loved each other.
They jumped on the diving bourd. They got in the dancing contest & they drawded a picter. They puted their sandels on & left!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Once apone a time, the Suntan lotion went to the market. It sawded the Waterproof Water, its friend. The Suntan lotion & the Waterproof Water went for a BIG BURGER KING BURGER! They eated the burger & then playded on the playground. They both fauded & loved each other.
They jumped on the diving bourd. They got in the dancing contest & they drawded a picter. They puted their sandels on & left!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That story is so cute.
I'm pretty sure that's how all four year olds write - I know I did.
One of my first stories started with:

It was eester. I had fun and I eated a lot of easter egs

My first story that I ever wrote was in grade 7 for a English project called "Romeo and Jack" But it was so bad, I erased the shameful thing from my computer... But I couldn't bring myself get rid of the original copy, I loved it too much... I still have it in it's binder on my bookshelf... : )

Whoa! I looked back on some of a story I wrote in a composition notebook and 'bout cried. It was a horror story and I started it like this, without editing it and everything,

now of course this is sappose to be a horror story, according to the story, and usually horror stories start in a old hose so you now where this is starting.

It was one sunney morning in Raliegh North Carolina and I wasnt happy. It was hot out and I was in the room with my annoying brother Ras and my little sister Isis. We lived in a two bedroom house. It was horrible, and the kichen was small. Whats for breakfast? I asked my-self, who cares I just want to get up and out of here. Ding Dong! went the door bell. Its obvious who that is, Tianna and lievua. As much as I didnt want to go outside I went. I mean there was nothing else better to do. Se we went on their porch and played a game it was hot and I mean hot! I was bored couldn't wait to get out of this house and our cat just died but I got over that quick.

When it was time to go in we had Breakfast. A couple of eggs and some toast. Today was the day we were suppose to move, yes!, I thought finally. get me our of this trap. So we had to pack up all our stuff and go but were still keeping this house to put up for rent...

I believe I wrote that when I was about either ten or eleven years old. It's a piece of shit. I basically told my whole life while living in South East Raleigh but with much less description. Yes, everyday was hot and I did live in a two bedroom town home with a small ass kitchen and family (that's all the living space had o_O) and there were two kids that came to our house (box) everyday named Tianna and Leevah (not lievua). My brothers name really is Ras and sister's name is Isis. I don't know why I wrote all of that shit. Everyone doesn't need to know my business. That's so sad, I could cry. But I love it at the same time.