What do you think of sex in stories?
I really don't think people need to detail it as much as they do. I mean some are okay like when they hint it, but you don't need stuff like, "He took off his clothes and touched this part of the girls body and she moaned with pleasure." That is basically sex typing! Stuff like that isn't in a lot of stories that are actually published (unless your reading a "MA" or "Adult" books, you know the the stuff people Master**** over). Same with characters touching themselves in stories on Mibba! Why does it have to be perverted. If people are doing this and it's really important in your story, just hint...don't explain every little detail of the event. Details are only needed for something important. "The little blond girl was happy and joyful, as she skipped down the yellow brick road." Ect.
I don't understand why people's stories get blocked for having one mistake, but not for having a lot of sex typing in their stories.
This is my opinion and it may be different from some of yours so please do not get upset. If you would like to say something, comment on this post and DO NOT MESSAGE ME;.
I really don't think people need to detail it as much as they do. I mean some are okay like when they hint it, but you don't need stuff like, "He took off his clothes and touched this part of the girls body and she moaned with pleasure." That is basically sex typing! Stuff like that isn't in a lot of stories that are actually published (unless your reading a "MA" or "Adult" books, you know the the stuff people Master**** over). Same with characters touching themselves in stories on Mibba! Why does it have to be perverted. If people are doing this and it's really important in your story, just hint...don't explain every little detail of the event. Details are only needed for something important. "The little blond girl was happy and joyful, as she skipped down the yellow brick road." Ect.
I don't understand why people's stories get blocked for having one mistake, but not for having a lot of sex typing in their stories.
This is my opinion and it may be different from some of yours so please do not get upset. If you would like to say something, comment on this post and DO NOT MESSAGE ME;.
March 3rd, 2008 at 11:57pm