Alternative Words for 'Said'

  • broken bells

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    ALL HAIL THIS THREAD Crazy
    bless you and all your future pets.
    September 6th, 2013 at 10:04pm
  • Dash Flintceschi

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    This thread is amazing, exactly what I need! Does anyone have a decent alternative for 'told'? In the chapter I'm currently working on, every piece of dialog seems to end with told. I can't exchange it for 'said' or any of the other alternatives here, because the chapter revolves around the main character questioning his sanity, and his band mates are telling him about things he insists he's seen that they haven't, and 'informed' seems too formal for the situation. Thanks for any help!
    September 12th, 2013 at 08:16pm
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    This is really helpful, but I do agree with the people who are saying 'said' isn't really a bad thing. There's nothing wrong with it and if you want to use it just go ahead and use it. Coffee
    September 22nd, 2013 at 01:28pm
  • GGGG.

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    This was a big problem cited in "Twilight". Using "said" is actually a very good thing and the alternatives should be kept to a minimum. Your characters should be able to simply speak without having to attach a strong emotion. These words can distract from the dialogue--this is an important rule of writing. Don't use these willy-nilly.

    Like Stephen King said: "The road to hell is paved with adverbs."
    September 29th, 2013 at 05:01pm
  • Lady.V.

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    In my case, I think I use ''said'' a bit too much so this thread will help me a lot.
    September 29th, 2013 at 05:19pm
  • HerMajestyYoungblood

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    THANK YOU. *copies and pastes to word document* I'll credit you! Arms
    September 30th, 2013 at 01:11am
  • ImpulsiveWords

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    This is great. Thank you so much. :)
    September 30th, 2013 at 11:26pm
  • wish on a firefly

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    Thank you for making this thread. Dance
    October 17th, 2013 at 01:47am
  • Goddess of Floyd

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    Thanks for this, these word alternatives are really going to help me. THANK YOU Clap
    November 2nd, 2013 at 06:52pm
  • solo sunrise

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    It's...okay to say said, though. Use these words sparingly, because otherwise they'll pull the readers out of the story; said just flows. I have sources okay. I can give examples.
    May 12th, 2016 at 04:51am