Kiss of the Dragon
- I wish I could say something more than 'it wasn't even okay', but I can't. I couldn't even read it all. The font is bad on the eyes. The title was nice though, but maybe you could just leave it as The Moment of Truth. It sounds much better that way. The summary was okay, but it was too long. Maybe something shorter. I could help if you wanted. Gina Long's name is pretty nice. Reminds me of her being Chinese or something.
Everything was kinda boring and I was pretty down that I couldn't read the whole story because of the font.
Good luck. :]
October 4th, 2011 at 06:48pm