Fin

Title: Fin
Author: new york city;
Type: Original Fiction
Genre: Romance, Tragedy, Drama
Rating: R

Fin is an ongoing story told through the eyes of a young woman named Lydia. Lydia takes us through her relationship with her husband Ross in scenes from the present as well as the past. The story starts with Lydia, broken down and drinking at a bar. It is revealed to the reader that her husband, Ross, had cheated on her while in a drunken stupor. Lydia thinks it over and decides not to leave Ross, which is not an easy choice to make on her part. From there, the story follows Lydia's marriage and her feelings toward Ross- and her inner turmoil or whether or not to leave him.

new york city; has written a truly great story, one of many great ones here on Mibba. Her characters in Fin are easily relatable to the real world and the situations are ones that some of us have dealt with in our lives. Her main character, Lydia, is easily defined as a strong lead character, even if she can't seem to make the impossible decision to leave the man she once loved. The leading lady of Fin is just as ordinary as either you or myself and that's why she is such a great character.

This story is beautifully told in small doses and conveys the damp, negative mood beautifully. Each chapter leaves you unfulfilled and rushing to the next to see what happens next. The path this girl follows in making her decision is still going on and I know there are a lot who agree with me when I say that I can't wait to see wait to see what Lydia does next!

If you are one of those who like to let a story get the better of them, one who likes to be influenced by the words of a terrific writer such as new york city;, then Fin is the perfect story for you. The chapters are short yet executed in a gorgeous manner. I suggest Fin to any and all romance lovers or those who love a good, depressing tale. This story has captivated me and is sure to captivate all who read it. This young author's words will enthrall you and keep you hooked just to see if Lydia will stay with Ross, or if she'll finally leave him.