Tranquility

My sense of feeling returned to me first. Behind blackened bruised closed eyelids I felt. Cold damp, hard but broken dirt lay below me. Lying on the ground, my body was outstretched awkwardly. My shoulders ached and digging my hands deep into the dirt, attempting to push myself up sent quick bursts of fire through my veins. Up and down, my arms grew hot, tingled and gave out underneath me. My upper fell back to the ground and I released a weak huff as my cheek slapped the dirt.

world detailed the details; then wrote and described the taste, smell and feeling of everything. Feelings were put into words and things we could hardly imagine was put into words. Tranquility has taken my breath away. Not a single moment was I not in the story. I felt what Arielle felt and was there for everything. world has such a great talent for describing the indescribable. Readers would be able to taste the dirt as Arielle did and experience the feeling that was described.

Unlike many stories across the Internet, Tranquility told how far people go when lovers cheat. With less than a thousand words I was able to understand the whole thing. Why Blithe did such a thing, and even how she did. The story also touched something not many do, what death feels like. Readers will be surprised how death is described in this story. Because not only is it described, but it's felt too. It is hard to explain the feelings that are expressed in this story. There is just so many things that happened. Indescribable is the closest word I can think of. Readers will have to find out themselves how amazing this really is.

Overall this is a beautifully written story. It was very detailed and set up the scene perfectly in my mind. I recommend this to anyone and everyone actually. Though be warned, some readers might get a strange gut feeling on how realistic this is. It's very realistic in any instances.