MM Reviews: Noxious

He slowly removed his hand from her chest cavity and looked at it for a second, the girl limp in his arm. He reached out at touched her cheek with just one finger, leaving a small spot of red on the olive skin. His body convulsed violently and he dropped her. Surprised, he knelt down beside her, touching her cheek twice more before convulsing again, and collapsing.

Dean Winchester and Sam Winchester were on a ghost hunt. A simple hunting trip between two loving, pool hustling brothers. Like most hunting trips for the Winchester boys, it is not easy to find the monster. Especially when it is a ghost. A ghost possessing and killing people because of what happened in his or her own life. Which for the boys is quite normal.

For months women were being murdered by their boyfriends. Each time the boyfriend would be "possessed" and kill his girlfriend by jabbing his hand into her chest. If that wasn't enough, he would then draw a smiley face with her own blood on her. Of course the Winchester boys had to intervene. No one is allowed to die by monsters while they are around. So they take the hunting trip, find out which monster is doing it and decide to end it as usual; salt and fire.

ImagineZombii took a possible episode of Supernatural and put it into words. Dean and Sam were described exactly how the show puts them as, right down to their ability to hustle people at pool. Other than the supreme ability to match characters, this author was able to do it in style. There are hardly any written flaws; the balance between dialogue and information is a sigh of relief to any reader. This story is for any fan of Supernatural, or anyone who loves ghosts and horror. So enjoy!

Special thanks to dougie poynter; and Answering.Alexandra. for editing!