MM Reviews: My Sadist King

Author: little bird;
Type: Original Fiction
Rating: R
Genre: Romance | Horror | Thriller

"No, no, no," my king said, squatting beside me and pushing my hair out of my face. The hot blood on his hand spread along my forehead and soaked into my hair. He smirked as I whimpered in fear and shoved his lips to mine, the vile taste of tobacco entering my mouth. "I want you to have a good view of it, okay?" he said, standing up and squeezing the handle of the axe in his hand.

Above all, my king loved to make me watch.

From the brilliant mind of, little bird; I present, My Sadist King. A chilling, pulse racing, story about a serial killer and his young apprentice. The story is through the eyes of Kelly, a misunderstood high school student. She feels her family doesn't love her, they only care about her younger brother. Everything about her life is pretty average. Well, until on her way home from school she stops at a store for a drink. That is when she was kidnapped by a strange man in broad daylight. The thing is, Kelly wanted to go.

Being taken seemed to be a better situation to her, her King (as she is forced to call him) wanted her. Not many people showed interest in her, including her own family. When she was taken it lit up so many more emotions, one of them being that she found her King more than just her captor. After a few days being chained up, young Kelly is forced to watch a girl be murdered. Which starts as a foreshadow of things to come. The King, as we know him, chose the girl to be Kelly's. He wanted Kelly to watch the girl die, and choose how the girl died.

The story itself is almost like reading a published piece. The plot is set up early, though it’s still a mystery on where things will end. The characters were brought in and executed quite good, very realistic on the scale. Then lastly, the way Kelly thinks is quite a relief. She thinks like a young girl. Not an adult woman in a child's body; but a girl. A lonely, depressed and unappreciated girl. That is what sets the story apart from all the others like it. So I recommend this story who loves horror, a good serial killer now and then and anyone who wants something chilling for Halloween!

Special thanks to stargaze. and aubs for editing!

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