MM Reviews: Everything I Didn't Say

Title: Everything I Didn’t Say

The first thing that immediately got me all excited to read the story was the short summary that claimed that this story would be the first of the One Direction Daddy Series by the author. The mere thought of the One Direction boys being fathers surrounded by cute, chubby babies was enough to make me gush and excitedly clicked on the story page to read further! The fact that this story featured Louis as the main character got me even more excited because aside from being one of my favorite members, I do personally think that this site lacks good Louis fictions.

As soon as I finished reading the first chapter, I was not disappointed! The story was well-written with just the right balance between being descriptive but at the same time not dragged out so that it would make the readers lose interest. The story was written in a way that just grabbed at my emotions and just made me want to cry and laugh along with Alexa.

Her struggle through taking care of a pair of twins by herself and having to face through the pregnancy, the childbirth and being a mother all by herself, for me, was written brilliantly and realistically. I also may have a soft spot for babies in stories and thus, I found myself falling more and more in love with this piece.

When I reached the last chapter, I was just about ready to go over to the author and force her to update now! The plot, in my opinion, flows perfectly and everything was moving smoothly without hiccups. I was sitting in front of my computer screen, gaping and honestly, surprised that there was no more for me to read.

I highly recommend this beautifully written story revolving around Louis Tomlinson of One Direction to those like me, who just can’t get enough of a good Louis fan fiction.

Special thanks to nearly witches. and Goddess of Muse for editing!