Writing Focus: Tense - Comments

  • mkmalls42

    mkmalls42 (100)

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    input this URL:

    ( http://www.mkmalls.com/ )

    you can find many cheap and high stuff

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    September 16th, 2013 at 04:24pm
  • This.Useless.Heart.

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    Great article! Thanks for posting. For future reference though, I think that one sentence should say in "layman's terms" not "laments terms".
    September 15th, 2013 at 11:46pm
  • solo sunrise

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    Nice article. I've tense switches done beautifully, usually accompanied by an unreliable narrator. But I don't recommend it for most writers, because it can get very confusing very fast.
    September 15th, 2013 at 08:26pm