Ok. So i'm sorta new to mibba right? Ok. and i recently just posted my first story. Well, it's not my first, it's on Quizilla. But im like completely changing it. So here's my dillema. I would like people to read my story and tell me what they think. This is why i (kinda sorta) left quizilla to come here. Someone told me People give feedback. So... Feedback? would be nice. Thanks. And FYI, im not...