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  • a walking travesty;

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    That's what I thought too, but then I tried adding more to my original comment, and it still did it. And then, it said that I hadn't even posted a comment at all. It finally went through, but I don't know. I think it was just acting all weird.
    August 15th, 2012 at 11:49am
  • Sansa Stark

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    Sorry for being such a pain in the ass, lol!
    August 14th, 2012 at 08:56pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    I'm glad you didn't find my comment offensive, because that was not the idea at all. We can't all like the same type of plot, right? You'd probably not like my plots, either :p
    Well, your layout, on the left side you have pictures of people and those people are famous actors, Natalie Portman, Jared Leto, Amy Lee... It makes us think that the story is going to include them and it gives a weird feel.
    August 13th, 2012 at 03:15pm
  • pagupagu

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    Thank you for your comment! Little Hell was a spur of the moment thing and it's very personal to me. I'm trying to write it without getting too involved myself for my own reasons. But thank you :)
    August 10th, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • Javin Pilotte

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    Thanks so much for your comment. It gave me a good list to add later. Actually my plan was to slowly reveal more on her, because the character doesn't completely disappear after that first part that you read, but I saw where you were coming from. :) Thank you so much.
    August 10th, 2012 at 08:00pm
  • Angelofhellsfire

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    Hi, I saw you like twilight fanfics and I am going around trying to promote my JacobBlackXOC fanfic. If you could check it out I would appriciate it, if not thanks anyway for taking your time to read this. :)

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/479241/From-Difference-Comes-Possibilites/
    August 6th, 2012 at 07:38am
  • KilljoyBekah

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    Hey thanks for the comment, I'm gonna update the next chapter in a few mins hopefully :)
    August 4th, 2012 at 05:02pm
  • KilljoyBekah

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    Oh I see! Well, I might add in Ron's perspective tomorrow to see how it goes, thanks you've really helped! :D The first chapter I've posted isn't great so far, I'd like to add in more details of Hermione's life before Hogwarts. I can't wait to write the next few chapters, because I have the freedom to do whatever I want with them, as she hasn't met Harry or Ron yet. It'll be interesting to write about Hermione meeting Neville on the train when he looses his toad, and very, very fun to write how she reacts to Rob at first meeting. Especially since he's stuffing his face with sweets xD
    August 4th, 2012 at 12:05am
  • KilljoyBekah

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    Hey, I've started it, and I've posted it! :D I might change it or add more later, but let me know what you think? thanks!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • KilljoyBekah

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    Mind you, Ginny doesn't attend Hogwarts until second year, but if I do a sequel that would be fun :)
    August 3rd, 2012 at 07:48pm
  • KilljoyBekah

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    I agree with you on that, Hermione is my favourite character, and I'd be able to develope her relationship with Ginny, which I don't feel we saw too much of in the films or books. It'd be great to do the whole time before she really became friends with Ron and Harry, cause I could have her developing relationships with other people. I've always wondered what Hermione would've done when she went off to the library, or when she was on her own. Thanks! I'm so inspired to write it now ^_^ I was thinking I could do each chapter twice, one in her POV and one in Ron's but to be honest I can't think of much to do with Ron, other than what you said and showing how he has a hint of jealousy towards Harry sometimes because of his popularity and making the quidduitch team. I'll definetly let you know when I've written it :D
    August 3rd, 2012 at 07:48pm
  • KilljoyBekah

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    I know right, I love meeting Potterheads! :D ooh, I'll definelty be reading that one, I actually have an Albus Potter one myself that I've been working in for like a year, but I'm on such a writer's block with it. I actually wanna do a Hermione/Ron story, just the first book from their perspectives instead of always focusing on Harry. Good idea or no? xD
    August 3rd, 2012 at 07:32pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Thanks for your comments. When I'll edit my stuff again, I'll put your advices in motion. :)
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:19am
  • J0SH BALZ

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    Hello! Thank you for commenting c: I will definitely keep what you said in mind the next time I post (:
    August 3rd, 2012 at 02:25am
  • thrillionaire.

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    aghhh! I could've sworn I went and fixed that.. guess I got frazzled and forgot to. thanks!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 09:10am
  • noviangelss

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    Thank you! Thank you! You did help me a lot :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 06:41pm
  • noviangelss

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    Wow thanks so much, that really helped a lot. :)
    Where can I find a beta anyway?
    August 1st, 2012 at 06:07pm
  • noviangelss

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    Thanks for commenting on my story 'A New Girl in Town' that means a lot to me, really :)
    Should I keep or kill that story anyway? And I don't understand when people suggest me for a beta cause I'm new here. Can you give me a clue? Thanks :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 11:04am
  • always infinite

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    Thank you very much for the comment on "Smile".
    I'll be sure to go over it, especially on the whole senses thing. There is a reasoning for the lack of it though; the main character simply doesn't care or notice much of it. But I do agree that it needs more, so thank you!
    August 1st, 2012 at 10:04am
  • dakunaito

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    Thanks for the comment! I will work on that! It means a lot to get constructive critique on my story.
    August 1st, 2012 at 03:11am