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You are most welcome!

Thank you once again for your amazing comment.

I am super grateful for the input. I'm thankful to hear its not super, crazy cliche I think I'd stab my eyes out when I edit the chapters.
Haha.

Thank you so much for your comment on The Lure of a Vampire. Haha. Yeah, I think the lack of comments come from the story being parody more than serious but I am so glad someone finally commented. I've been so amped writing this I'm cranking out one or two chapters a day. Its so amusing to write Quizilla circa 2004 stories. I'm trying my absolute hardest to incorporate every cliche vampire idea I've ever read or written. Haha. I'm glad you enjoy it. :)

Hi thank you for your sweet comment on Rare to Exist!!! I really want to post another chapter just so there's closure as I made it end on a cliff

Yes! Logan is a new character haha. I'm not sure what I'm going to do with him as of now. The next chapter might explain most of it. I might do a flashback chapter. I had one then I deleted it to write a new chapter. but no, your advice is very helpful. and there is a lot you don't know about the therapist hehe. I have big plans for him as well. :D I wasn't going to have her kill her parents but plot twist! plus I wanted people to see how nuts she really is. DNA test, probably. but that'll come later. :D

Yay! I'm excited too!
I think she has too, and that's something I want to explore in the sequel. ^.^
Aw. *Pats*
It's a great song!

Yes, it took me a while. I got the chapter text size and line height wrong somehow, and it was frustrating to fix. I remember the old mibba layout maker was so much more easy haha I spent hours making pointless layouts just for fun.

I know, I was writing a random scene today, for sometime in the future and I was thinking damn I love them. Which is kind of odd for me, because I tend to hate characters that I write.
But I'm glad you like them :)

Bahahahaha.

Fake it till you make it, like Piper says.

It is indeed. But it is also quite fun. If I were really, really good I would have considered making it a career.

I completely agree with you on that. I also love to read in first person, despite a lot of fiction work using third person. But maybe that's also why I feel more comfortable writing in third person, it's just something I've seen more of, so it comes easier to me. But first person sometimes becomes a little challenging. I quite liked the first chapter, but all the others, the more I reread it during editing, it felt a little repetitive and boring. I think that's mostly what worries me about writing in first person; not sure if I can live up to the challenge. I've always kinda sucked at monologue writing haha.

Well welcome back to mibba :)

Hiii, thank you so much for your comments

Yess, from what I've experienced, old people are either grumpy or really kind. There is rarely an in between. Kudos to all waitresses though, I've never been one but I've heard how tough it gets for them, especially in America, from what my cousin tells me.

I was just thinking that I'd edit the chapters in third person, because I feel like a first person point of view can get quite repetitive eventually. I don't even know how I ended up writing in first person though, I've always done third person. Its more familiar to me and its a little easier to write for the most part. I'm going to write a few chapters ahead and see which one works better for this story.

Thank you again!!

You are correct in that assumption!

Yeah, he's a creep, but I didn't want to take it in that direction. Just that he was being kind of a sleezebag. Not like a total predator, or someone capable of physical violence.

She's only 16, but yeah, she's very sheltered in that aspect and doesn't really know much about that kind of stuff.

And yeah! I don't feel like Piper is introverted either. Because there are several instances where she talks about wanting to socialize. I think her feeling uncomfortable is just the fact that she's there with her sister and all her pretty friends, and not people she's comfortable with either. But I think she definitely gains energy from being around others. Just that she doesn't have very many positive interactions with people. But she's very eager to get involved when people DO show an interest in her. And she does speak up for herself even in the face of the boy that she likes. Which is something I struggled with a lot. :/

I'm excited too! :D

Collin's a twat, that's what's up with him. Hahaha.

But, hey, between me and you, don't dash that idea completely. There will be a sequel eventually. :X

I feel this pain! I share in it. No dress up for me either.

No, not sad at all! I'm excited that you're excited?! And yes! Brownies sound so good. I just made cooked pudding and it's just not the same.

Nah, I wouldn't make it that easy. :P

LOL. I wish I had more of Brooms for you to read! I still want to keep it going but I've been so bombarded with stuff. :X

Vincent could use one of those, probably.

Yeah!
Aw, I'm sorry to hear that. Hopefully, tomorrow isn't as sucky.
Lololol. Poor Piper. She's one of my favorite characters I've ever written because she's so easy to write.